Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tallahassee

High-energy, strategic thinker with 25 years of experience in wholesale sales management, customer service and operations. I owned my own business for 15 years and spent 8 years as an executive for a Fortune 50 company. Recently sold my business to a larger competitor and looking for promising small/medium businesses to invest in and contribute hands-on sales/management/operations expertise. BA from Penn State and MBA from University of Michigan Ross Business School. Individual investor based in Northern Florida.

$5,000 to $200,000

Florida > Miami Beach

I live in the United States and Germany and looking for opportunities to bring debt/equity capital for companies looking to grow or restructure finances. I studied at NYU and have experience in real estate development, hospitality and private equity. I like investing in companies with strong financials and have experienced growth.

$100,000 to $500,000

Florida > St Petersburg

Florida native seeking to get involved in my local communities through investment. My CV includes Business Development for Tampa Bay's largest landscape maintenance contractor. Special projects with a boutique private equity firm that owns, operates, and invests in real estate companies where I worked directly with the Executive Team to research, develop, and launch strategic investment strategies across multiple asset types including Multifamily, Single Family Residential, Mixed Use Commercial, Class A Commercial, Adaptive Reuse Commercial. Designed and managed business development strategies for several companies. Leased / Purchased 25 Class a retail locations for publicly traded cannabis operator in Fl.

$25,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Lake Worth Beach

My husband and I are professionals in South Florida with almost two decades of international relations/law enforcement experience, as well as degrees in a related field. We are looking to become silent partners to help a new start-up or existing small business reach their full potential!

$0 to $40,000

Florida > Miami

36, married, live in Miami. I have 2 masters degrees, first in geology and the second in international trade and transport. I’m a chartering manager in the dry bulk shipping industry.

$1,000 to $60,000

Florida > Riverview

Previously started a company from the ground and ran it for three years. I had over 35 employees and recently sold it due to the recession. Money owed was not coming in fast enough.

$500 to $100,000

Florida > Abu Dhabi

I'm a 31 year old female. I live in the UAE and am ready to invest in a startup or a running business up to 250000USD provided that I get 51% equity. That will qualify me to obtain a visa. I don’t need to have a management role in the business.

$50,000 to $200,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I'm 74 year olds, married for 55 years to the same wife, living in Fort Lauderdale, FL. Solid, plenty of experience in investments and in management, currently investing in three automotive companies, and one in aviation parts. The automotive are; one in sales and service and parts, the second manufacturing specialty hand built cars and third a classic cars restoration. I can be available as an advisor MENTOR also hands on [not full time]. I have experience in all management positions such as sales, service, manufacturing, financing and mentoring. I'm an individual investor but also have controlling interest in OTC public company if it needs to be used.

$100,000 to $500,000