Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Winter Park

In my fifties located in Florida experienced in management, acquisitions, startup projects, technology, and finance looking to invest up to $150k and seeking equity return as silent or active depending on business type. Can also help with business planning, startup vs. acquisition analysis, growth strategies, risk mitigation, bank financing, and commercial real estate if applicable.

$10,000 to $150,000

Florida > Ruskin

38 years in software development.

$1 to $100,000

Florida > Kissimmee

Entrepreneur for 25+ years. Have worked with start-ups as well as large established corporations. Ability to provide capital as well as experience.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Orlando

I work closely with private capital groups that provide financing solutions to established, revenue-generating businesses. My background is in alternative finance and business development, with a focus on connecting companies to strategic funding sources, including business loans, equipment financing, bridge loans, and working capital solutions. I am also heavily networked in the Microcap world, helping small cap companies with aspirations of uplisting. I’ve helped companies across healthcare, retail, construction, and logistics access non- bank capital quickly and flexibly. I’m based in Florida and primarily act as a connector and advisor, working on a referral basis. Open to reviewing deals that make sense for my partners and helping businesses find a smart path forward.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Parkland

My name is Rami, 38 years old, owner of a couple of businesses in Florida and Texas ( used car dealership and medical equipments). I’m an individual investor and prefer to be a silent partner.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Parkland

I I am a personal investor with a background in the hospitality business. I am looking to possibly invest in promising startups as a silent partner. I live in Boca Raton, Florida so am especially interested in ventures located nearby, although this is just a preference not a requirement.

$10,000 to $500,000

Florida > Punta Gorda

Investment Group located in Punta Gorda, FL. We invest in Florida's people and businesses.

$10,000 to $300,000

Florida > Hudson

I'm married, located in Florida and work as an Independent Aviation Program Management Consultant. Education - Professional Management designations from the Canadian Institute of Management, Barrie Ontario, Canada, (CIM, P. Mgr., C. Mgr.) and a Certified Management Designation (CM) from James Madison University, Virginia USA. Experience - Airline/Airport General Manager, Sr. Manager Airport Planning & Development, Director Real Estate and Airport Affairs (35 Years). Background - Airline Operations Expert, Airport Terminal Development - Runways/Taxiways/Fees & Charges/Privatization of Airports (FAA/TC)/Aircraft Maintenance Hangars/GSE facilities. Role - Advisory and silent and individual investor preferred.

$5,000 to $20,000