Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Delray Beach

Investor with 35 years on entrepreneurial experience looking for hands on and advisory roles.

$150,000 to $300,000

Florida > Hollywood

64 y/o retired medical physician, married, and looking to be an investor.

$500,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Cape Coral

30 years old, single, located in Cape Coral, FL and Chicago, IL. Experience in Commercial Real Estate Investments, specifically single family rental portfolios, mobile home parks, and self storage. University of Wisconsin graduate. Owner of 3 self storage facilities, 1 mobile home park. Manage a $60m SFR portfolio in SWFL for a Chicago based family office.

$100,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Hallandalle Beach

We are family business radica ten in Miami. Our investments preferences are in Real. Our professional jobs are builder construction and legal business international law.

$1,000,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Orange Park

My name is Carlos, 30 years old, married and 2 beautiful kids. Currently I am a Project Manager in a local company in Jacksonville, FL. I served in the military for 10 years as a Logistics Analyst and retired as an Executive Officer. I hold a Crimanal Justice Bachelors and currently pursuing my Master degree on Logistics and Supply Chain Management with Embry Riddle (Daytona, FL). I have invested over $200k in Real Estate for the past 2 years and have built 40% on equity on the properties. Extensive backgroung on logistics (transportation, warehouse and supply chain) with DOD and private companies. Anticipated involvement; a combination of all three depending on the industry (meaning if is part of my core values, and my knowledge I would preffer hands-on). Current status is individual investor with plans of opening an investment firm/group within the next 12 months.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Alva

Young and successful e-commerce entrepreneur seeking to invest in high growth companies across a wide range of industries. I hold a bachelor's degree from UCF in Finance and Accounting and have over 14 years worth of experience in online commerce. Willing to invest up to $1 million.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Key Biscayne

Master in Management Science and Engineering from Stanford University. Business Development Professional with over 10 years of global experience in direct sales, sales management and co-sale with alliance partners to large enterprises, government agencies and educational institutions in Latin America.

$5,000 to $200,000

Florida > Pembroke Pines

I am willing to invest if you are able to convince me with a complete plan

$1,000 to $10,000