Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tampa

I am an investor who is willing to invest time and money in entrepreneurs who are motivated to be successful and watch their business grow. I have invested in one start-up company and it has taught me valuable knowledge regarding business startups. People who know me best say that I am very persuasive and analytical. I hope by utilizing all these skills I can fulfill my ultimate passion which would be to see new businesses flourish.

$1,000 to $5,000

Florida > Tampa

Vice President of Strategy and Development at a private equity firm where he oversees deal flow origination and works directly with executive leadership of acquired companies to drive the professionalization and profitability of their organizations. Education includes Master of Science in Business Analytics, Master of Science in Finance, Bachelor of Business Administration in Finance and Bachelor of Arts degree in Economics from the Cox School of Business at Southern Methodist University.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Loxahtchee

I am married and live with my family in Florida. I have a degree in engineering and a Masters in Construction Management. I have been in construction and development of real estates for over 15 years. I am an individual investor interested in cash flow and equity growth. Looking to invest in multi-family, senior living, medical facilities. wellness retreat and resort centers and self storage.

$25,000 to $50,000

Florida > Plantation

Real estate attorney looking to invest in the real estate market - buy and sell. Willing to invest with person that has experience in the market.

$50,000 to $200,000

Florida > Davie

I have been a successful real estate developer for the past 30 years and my interest is shifting to technology, medical and new invention that I can use my experiance to grow the company into a possible pre-IPO

$1,000,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Panama City Beach

I'm a 37 y/o entrepreneur, married for 17 years with 2 teenagers who has started multiple small business' with a successful recent sale of one of them in the technology/I.T. industry. I have a 5-year non-compete (3 years, 10 months left) in that field and am looking to get involved in another type of business. Real estate investment being the preferred. I own rental properties in Northern, VA. & Panama City beach, Florida and have a gift for rehabbing properties. 20 years of experience managing contractors and builders to ensure proper installation practices occur.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

John started E*** Capital in NY in 1983 as a registered broker dealer for a series of successful government securities funds. The Company also raised investment capital for several small businesses and often took an active role in the management. Prior to the formation of E***, he had gained extensive experience at a number of mining and metals companies in Senior marketing and sales positions. These included Billiton Metals & Ores, Falconbridge Nickel and a NY based Division of Consolidated Goldfields. He was also an outside Director of Synalloy Corp. Spartanburg, SC (ASE) and Molycorp, NY,NY (NYSE). He graduated from Columbia University in NY and served in the US Marine Corps.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Riverview

Investor looking to fund RE development projects in FL, TX and other locations after research and contract review. Combat veteran with experience in SFH and small MF units. Looking to get into commercial side of RE. Also interested in green initiatives like charging stations, beauty and Women’s fitness products and technology.

$1,000 to $100,000