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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Fort Pierce

I have over 20 years experience in the financial industry. I began my career as a broker/trader and now specializing in financial PR and corporate consulting and restructuring plans for public companies, I have has raised more than $45 million for various public companies in the last eight years. In addition, I have been instrumental in assisting six companies attain public trading status through reverse-shell mergers.

$25,000 to $100,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I am an individual investor, married, female, age 49. Pharmacist and Healthcare Management Specialist with 17 years of experience in the clinical laboratory field. My actual interest is investing in areas that promote and support the welfare of young people through education as a consequence of discrimination, mainly sex-based discrimination and related issues.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > Miami

Quantitative options trader turned private equity and debt investor. Statistics and Quantitative Modeling B.B.A. Capital provider and fractional CFO for businesses at $1-$10M EBITDA. Anticipated Involvement: Advisory/Silent. Status: Hedge Fund.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Sebring

I am a corporate development specialist with over 20 years of experience. I have a strong marketing background and I ready to invest up to $20,000 on someone else's dream.

$500 to $20,000

Florida > Coconut Creek

We’re Candice and Fernando, a South Florida-based couple in our early 30s with a strong foundation in project management, banking, and legal support. With over 10 years of combined experience managing complex projects and navigating financial and legal systems, we bring structure, reliability, and strategic insight to the table. Our academic backgrounds in Construction Management and Law allow us to offer value beyond capital—assisting with scheduling, permitting, and construction-related logistics when needed. As property owners, we understand what it takes to invest smartly and build for the long term. We're currently seeking opportunities as silent investors where we can support passionate entrepreneurs while staying behind the scenes. We’re committed, professional, and ready to be the right partners to help scale your business.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Naples

I am hold a doctorate in Chemical Engineering from the U of PA. I worked for 10 years developing aroma chemicals and another 10 years in scientific information management. So I know chemicals and software very well and in a highly creative sense. I am also a PMP (project management professional) so I get the job done. I recently moved with my husband to Vero and seek to develop a portfolio of interesting work through angel investing. Initially looking for hands-on involvement but that may decrease over time. I can also put a group of investors together. I am interested in manufacturing, engineering and technology projects.

$25,000 to $100,000

Florida > Naples

Former banker.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Tampa

Medical Doctor practicing in Florida.

$100,000 to $2,000,000