Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Miami

I am the co-owner of a Corporation that offers mobile paramedical services, throughout Florida, with more than18 years of experience in the medical laboratory business. I am seeking to combine the platform that my current business has which includes more than 15 trained certified phlebotomists/nurses that offer different types of medical related services to patients at the convenience of their homes with another medical related business. My goal is to make an investment in the medical field, biotechnology, or molecular biology field. I would like to be an active investor by intervening as a consultant, hands-on or advisor to help grow a business which I would be passionate about. If the business constitutes an interesting challenge for me I would be your best choice as an investor.

$10,000 to $200,000

Florida > Lauderhill

Investor seeking investments.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Naples

Married with 2 children. Usa citizen, but Italian. Speak 4 languages. Owner of a franchise in Fort Myers, and before that a production body shop in Phoenix AZ. Also worked for 20+ years in the fashion industry and in the manufacturing family business in Italy. Looking to invest in something to diversify and have a long term relationship and return of investment.

$1 to $200,000

Florida > Tampa

My name is Stephanie and I am from Brazil, I am 29 years old, single and no family. I am looking for either a partner or a business to invest where I can either be a hands-on business partner or a silent investor. I have 10+ years experience in international business and I am speak Spanish and Portuguese.

$0 to $100,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Merger and Acquisition Advisory Firm with 25 years of experience. Extensive contacts with HNW individuals, PE Firms, Hedge Funds, Bank and Non-Bank Lending and more. Non-exclusive, success fee only agreements.

$500,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Davie

We provide Hard Money Mortgages throughout the state of Florida. No games, Fast answers and the results you expect.

$100,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Miami

36, married, live in Miami. I have 2 masters degrees, first in geology and the second in international trade and transport. I’m a chartering manager in the dry bulk shipping industry.

$1,000 to $60,000

Florida > Port St Lucie

Married w/2 children living in Southeast Florida. Current Entrepreneur of a Children's Boutique. MBA specializing in Accounting and Information Systems. 1st time investing in a business other than my own. Any type of involvement is fine. Individual investor.

$5,000 to $100,000