Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Largo

I’m an individual investor born and raised in Pinellas county. I worked in a machine shop making medical equipment and military equipment.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Windermere

I am a current owner of a Home Health Agency located in Orlando. Due to the moratorium that has been placed on new Home health Agency whereby you cannot get license to serve Medicare\medicaid patients, I ended up serving only patient with commercial insurance or Workers compensation. I hold a Masters Degree in Nutrition Science. I live in Windermere. I would like to acquire a medicare\medicaid Licensed Agency that is serving Orange, Seminole, Brevard and Osceola county. I am seeking a business partner or seeking to invest in opportunities in medical professional fields.

$20,000 to $50,000

Florida > Valrico

I've invested in startups in the past. Some good. Some bad. Looking for a good way to make money with a motivated entrepreneur

$10,000 to $25,000

Florida > Davie

I have been a successful real estate developer for the past 30 years and my interest is shifting to technology, medical and new invention that I can use my experiance to grow the company into a possible pre-IPO

$1,000,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Ft. Lauderdale

I have grown up in South Florida but have spent a lot of time in all the Southern States. My wife & I along with our two boys are always on the move. We are a family that enjoys new experiences and new challenges. My main business is in the world of finance but much different than the typical Wall Street or VC type format. Our company has done extremely well but has also had to overcome numerous hurdles along the way as all entrepreneurs do. What we are looking to do now is work with entrepreneurs like ourselves that have extreme passion, commitment & a determination to be successful with a solid business model we can put our investment capital behind. We look forward to the opportunity to use our years of experience in numerous different industries to help those entrepreneurs achieve their ultimate goals.

$5,000 to $500,000

Florida > Orlando

I am a young investor looking to invest in the right product/company. I currently own two business and have launched several successful products. I specialize in marketing with my own social media reaching over one million people. I have also been on TV and Radio.

$10,000 to $300,000

Florida > Bradenton

I am the Vice President of Sales for a large financial organization. Previously owned 2 companies.

$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Bradenton

My husband and I are looking to invest in a company that we are passionate about. We are 35, been married for 11 years and live in Bradenton, FL. I have worked in the hospitality industry and food and beverage for the past 12 years. My husband has worked in the technology industry for 10 years. I have a Bachelor's degree in Accounting from the University of MN - Duluth. We are just getting started with investing our income.

$50,000 to $125,000