Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Kissimmee

Serial Entrepreneur strong background in digital marketing from online advertising to desktops and mobile. Grown multiple companies from zero revenue to multi-million dollar businesses within a matter of months. Really looking to join a company I see fit that I can bring my knowledge and experience to the table.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Cape Coral

I retired from the U.S. Air Force in 2002 after serving honorably for 22 years and my expertise was in Telecommunications Systems. In 2002, I started an online furniture business and I have been operating it for the last 21 years now. My specialty is website design, optimization, and implementation. I'm also an online marketing specialist and I can bring all of these skills to the table for any business. I live in SW Florida and I'm interested in exploring local business opportunities.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Gulfport

Real estate acquisitions manager. Looking to invest in real estate.

$30,000 to $50,000

Florida > Tampa

Holding company with a focus on investing in real estate related sales, service and development companies. We identify opportunities where our experience in real estate brokerage, property management, title insurance, home services and construction/development will lead to increased success through more effective engagement of the customer across all business lines. Willing to collaborate to help shape strategy and direction in an advisory role.

$10,000 to $150,000

Florida > Davie

I am 41 years old professional and I work in Senior Leadership Capacity at a MNC firm in South Florida. I have two decades of professional experience in multiple countries, including, relationship Management, Tender Process, Pricing Strategy etc. I look forward to the partnership.

$40,000 to $80,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I am the head of origination and a shareholder of a private capital fund specializing in high leverage construction loans. I live in Ft. Lauderdale. I am NOT a broker. I work directly for the fund as a full time employee. I do not table fund or sell notes. We manage a portfolio with apx. $1.5 billion in assets under management on our balance sheet, and we have funded over $3 billion in real estate development and construction. We have our own draw department and escrow closers on staff. I will fund up to 90% of cost on projects from $1-$100 million, up to 65% of combined exit value. We are more expensive than banks, but cheaper than equity. We close quickly, we fund draws in 2 days. My goal is to structure and negotiate with you the optimal funding scenario that minimizes your cash investment requirements and maximizes your ROI while maintaining a steady yield ourselves.

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Palm City

Have invested in publishing & industrial trade shows in USA, South America, South Africa; financial businesses in USA, incl. start up banking; direct mail advertising Editor and Publisher of trade publications; executive director of several industrial trade associations; currently serving as director of multiple location local bank; served on numerous for-profit and non-profit companies and organizations; currently manage a small portfolio of private residential mortgages and a small thoroughbred horse racing and breeding operation Private investor

$2,500 to $100,000

Florida > Sebring

I am a corporate development specialist with over 20 years of experience. I have a strong marketing background and I ready to invest up to $20,000 on someone else's dream.

$500 to $20,000