Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > St. Petersburg

been an active investor in Real estate and business for 25 years. Have others who have money also and trust my experiance and judgement

$750,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I am 39 yrs old, married with four wonderful children. I am the chief pilot and Instructor of an airline charter company in Fort Lauderdale, FL. I have a strong professional background and extensive experience in all facets of the aviation industry and I am looking to apply funds and expertise to help grow businesses connected to the industry. I am open to investing in other sectors but my preference is for businesses that have a focus on services rather than manufacturing.

$50,000 to $230,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

We are a firm that operates as a private investment bank and advisory firm in St. Petersburg. We specialize in serving the industrials, healthcare, and technology sectors. Our range of services includes providing advice for mergers and acquisitions, handling both buy-side and sell-side transaction advisory, and expertly managing transactional due diligence and strategic implementation. In addition to these primary services, we offer access to private debt and equity to meet working capital needs, accurate business valuation, and strategic advisory services to maximize enterprise value. Our clientele comprises lower and middle-market businesses, family offices, trusts, boutique institutions, and private equity firms.

$1,000,000 to $500,000,000

Florida > Miami Beach

We manage a small investment fund. Our preferred structure is a convertible debenture. We do asset based loans with or without equity kicker. Do not invest in pure start ups.

$100,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Auburndale

A young, risk accepting, and licensed financial professional seeking opportunities to silently invest in small businesses and franchises with outsized fundamental value and growth projections.

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > Lutz

Personal information: 36 year old physician, married, living in Florida Professional experience: Background in medicine, systems engineering, non- profit sector, and private equity Seeking investments focused on renewable energy, sustainable buildings, and other envoronmental themes.

$50,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Sarasota

40 years’ business experience. Held various senior management positions (CFO, COO). Owned and operated several companies. Counseled and raised funds for start-ups and small businesses. Hands-on exposure to business relocations, turnarounds, business acquisitions, and plant closings. Orchestrated successful IPO. Companies include: Pfizer, Emerson Electric, ITT, Huntington National Bank, Scotts Miracle-Gro, Erbamont NV, Bigmar Pharmaceuticals, and Manex Entertainment. Not looking for consulting gig - only interested in taking active role along side any investment. BS Economics; MBA; Veteran.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Jacksonville

I am 35 years old and my wife and I have resided in Jacksonville, FL for over 12 years. I currently hold a leadership position in account management for a large pharma/insurance company. I am an individual investor who is looking for a hands-on or silent investment opportunities.

$5,000 to $65,000