Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Oviedo

I am a retired healthcare executive with 25 year experience in healthcare management. The last 20 years spent in financing, development and management of real estate and construction. Florida Certified Construction and HVAC Contractor.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > Estero

Have successfully raised millions of dollars for real estate, technology and beverage endeavors. Current focus in SE USA and Manhattan.

$1,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Parkland

I am currently in the hotel and restaurant industry, focusing on extensive digital marketing and sales. I am looking to get involved with someone to jointly invest and manage something into the craft beer scene with someone here in South Florida. A craft beer bar would be ideal. I have extensive marketing experience to launch a business.

$25,000 to $100,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

John started E*** Capital in NY in 1983 as a registered broker dealer for a series of successful government securities funds. The Company also raised investment capital for several small businesses and often took an active role in the management. Prior to the formation of E***, he had gained extensive experience at a number of mining and metals companies in Senior marketing and sales positions. These included Billiton Metals & Ores, Falconbridge Nickel and a NY based Division of Consolidated Goldfields. He was also an outside Director of Synalloy Corp. Spartanburg, SC (ASE) and Molycorp, NY,NY (NYSE). He graduated from Columbia University in NY and served in the US Marine Corps.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Longwood

37 Male, single. Current business professional working in operations management. Ten years of management over a staff of 30+. Anticipated involvement - hands on, silent.

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > Dunedin

I'm 38, married with two children. My current profession is an Operations VP for a national real estate research and document filing company. I am looking into real estate investing and am willing to be totally involved in any in real estate investment. I live in Pinellas county and I am familiar with Pasco county as well. I am willing to invest in flipping, buy and hold, or note investing. I do not have experience in the above mentioned strategies but have self educated myself and am ready to start. I am willing to be a silent partner or full hands on partner.

$10,000 to $50,000

Florida > Delray Beach

We invest in mobile home parks.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Kissimmee

I am based in Orlando, Florida. I am married with a one-year-old daughter. I have experience in luxury retail and operations specialty. I also have my Master's Degree in Data Analytics & Applied Social Research with a concentration in Media & Marketing. I help those in financial need start their businesses in order to grow an abundance amount of opportunities, all while creating a passive income. I can pour into your business if it pours back into me. I am willing to talk with any/everyone who chooses to utilize my expertise and skills in order to grow their business and legacy. I'm happy to help!

$10,000 to $20,000