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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Miami Lakes

Retired law enforcement professional, with 25 years of law enforcement and security experience. Masters Degree in Criminal Justice Management and Bachelors Degree in Criminal Justice. Fluent in both English and Spanish. Potential individual investor, looking to be mostly a silent partner, for a percentage of the business and dividing/receiving profits, according to the percentage of ownership purchased. Everything would be done in a legal fashion, with proper attorneys, accountants, disclaimers, and protection from liabilities. All business documents and/or agreements, would all be reviewed by the appropriate professionals and attorneys, prior to a final agreement being signed.

$100,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Fort Myers

35 y/o executive looking to join a company that has a purpose and a mission to make a difference. Have experience in multiple sectors and looking for advisory or hands-on investment.

$5,000 to $70,000

Florida > Winter Park

Real Estate Ventures - central Florida. Also licensed through Managing Broker Dealer to syndicate private placement Reg D offerings

$100,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Altamonte Springs

Eager investor looking to provide capital to start-ups. Technology and application projects preferred but open to all.

$500 to $100,000

Florida > Boca Raton

30 years of experience scaling up companies in a diverse industries in the US and international. Looking for a proven concept that requires a hands on investor partner to take it to the next level.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > Miami Beach

I have been working in the tech industry for the last 20 years. Passionate about programming and performance marketing. In the last years, I have worked as a consultant and helped various companies to go from negative to a 6 figures net income.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Orlando

I have over 32 years of experience in corporate advertising and marketing. Founder and president of a Michigan Avenue advertising and marketing agency specializing in advertising, promotion, and sales-incentive programs. Served a broad range of industries by creating successful selling models and up-sell strategies; developing, testing and refining integrated marketing strategies; and coordinating corporate communications and brand-identity programs for client companies. Created software that helped develop sales channels for the online services that automate the selling cycle, maximize clients' consumer facing business communications, consistently present clients' value proposition, and automatically initiate follow-up strategies.

$15,000 to $100,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

Founded and sold a telecomm products manufacturing business that grew to over 400 people. Have founded 8 startup companies. Holds 10 patents. Awarded lifetime achievements in Engineering award from attended University. Background in wired and wireless communications, energy conservation products, IOT, cloud computing, real time online transaction processing, R&D, product management, operating high tech businesses, partnerships, business plans, capital raising, and conceiving and delivering innovative out-of-the-box product concepts and ideas.

$50,000 to $250,000