Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Oviedo

I am a retired healthcare executive with 25 year experience in healthcare management. The last 20 years spent in financing, development and management of real estate and construction. Florida Certified Construction and HVAC Contractor.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > Miami

We are a investors society with ample experience in fields like the finances, fashion, the hotel trade, real estate and construction and industry. We are very interested in extending our portfolio of investments, we offer as much advising as financing.

$1 to $25,000

Florida > Casselberry

MBA, BA in Finance. Have invested in 3 privately held firms, 1 real estate related, 2 were financial services.

$10,000 to $250,000

Florida > Jacksonville

I am a young driven individual investor with an entrepreneurial spirit. I am located in the Jacksonville, FL area but have lived in Soflo for 7 years, and open to all FL markets upon research. My highest education is a Bachelors, but I am a believer in common knowledge and street smarts that will truly get you far in life. I have an interest in Real Estate Investing, Hospitality, and Logistics. I would be happily willing to invest into either or all of those hot topics-- in that order. Real estate: buy & sell, flipping, and rental properties. Hospitality: Bar/Lounge, Hookah Lounge, Restaurants. I'd like to be hands-on with both RE & Hospitality; Logistics I am open to silent investing. I am an extrovert, and gregarious individual. Feel free to connect for any questions, serious inquiries only. If it works out, great. If not, I would be happy to share my networks.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Weeki Wachee

I am looking to invest in a business that I wish I could create myself but do not have the time to start from scratch. I have a Master's in Applied Economics and I've been working in the financial sector since 2008. Growing and through 2014 I worked in a broad range of hospitality businesses and that's where my true interest remains. Combined with my hands on experience and technical background, I will invest in the business I think has the best potential and can provide feedback.

$1,000 to $30,000

Florida > Doral

Semi retired contractor-supplier, civil engineer (1985). Experience in automation and stock market. Individual investor.

$10,000 to $150,000

Florida > Ruskin

38 years in software development.

$1 to $100,000

Florida > Cooper City

I am 57, married and living in FL. I am working as a consultant in the CRE finance and investment industry. My background is in law, credit and banking. I have a BA in economics from Michigan and a Joint JD/MBA from Columbia. I have invested in a number of CRE deals as well as a smattering of other sectors, including TMT and biotech. Depending on the opportunity and the need, I can be more or less involved as warranted.

$25,000 to $100,000