Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Port Charlotte

40 year old male; married; Southwest Florida. Currently an Executive Director in the Freight Transportation industry with an MBA from Purdue University. New to investing in start-ups &/or growth companies. I am flexible regarding my degree of involvement. Individual Investor.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Tampa

Medical Doctor practicing in Florida.

$100,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Boca Raton

I am a 50 year old male looking for a company to invest in and also be a part in making company grow. I have background in banking, finance and construction. I will be an individual investor. My kids are in college so I am looking for a new business challenge.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Saint Augustine

Been investing 10+ years. Background is entrepreneur and trading. private investor

$100,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Orlando

Like to give someone an opportunity to thrive just as I was once given an opportunity. There is greatness In all of us. 41 year old male out of Orlando FL. My experience is in running business such as construction/real estate and healthcare. I would be a silent parent and I'm an individual investor.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Mulberry

Currently founder / President of fastest growing Truck Brokerage in U.S. looking to invest in your business. I’m 43 years old, live in Lakeland FL, married and a father of two. I’ve been in the transportation/ logistics field for the past 10 years and have launched 3 very successful start ups. My current LLC achieved $100 mil revenue in our second full year and have continued to grow since. While my biggest strength is certainty trucking and logistics, it takes a very well rounded leadership style to launch 3 consecutive startups from $0 to $25 mil annually or more. I can work as a silent advisor for the right company but I am truly looking for another challenge. To see if my skills and advice can help another entrepreneur reach new heights!

$5,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Tampa

Information security expert with a focus in the Healthcare sector. Held multiple security officer and ciso roles at various clients.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

Former analyst in the alternatives group at a multi billion dollar firm. Current analyst for a firm whose clients are Credit Value Hedge Funds. Bachelors Degree in Economics/Finance from Florida State, CFA candidate, looking to make at this time a nominal equity investment in a great startup or existing venture that has rapidly growing sales and matching demand for it's product or service.

$5,000 to $20,000