Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Ponte Vedra Beach

I'm a single male living in Ponte Vedra Beach FL. I'm currently a Financial Advisor who is diversified in many different areas including being a partner in real estate and restaurant deals. I would potentially be in a hands on and silent partner role depending on the business.

$1 to $500,000

Florida > Fort Myers

I've purchased and sold over $10,000,000 worth of real estate and businesses.

$0 to $3,000,000

Florida > Riverview

My name is Denny, I'm 34 years old, am married and have a daughter. I live in in the Tampa Bay area and I worked for caterpillar as a machinist for almost 17 years. I left on good terms and started my own business doing the same thing I did for the company, mobile machining and started my own machine shop. I was able to use the experience I gained working for caterpillar to start my own business and build relationships with customers. Although my education is limited to high school it's absolutely possible to be a successful business owner. I'm a very motivated and go getter hustler type of person. I'm looking to invest in a company or person who is the same. Although I'm not part of an investor group or company, I am an individual looking to invest my hard earned money in a business or person who is hard working, motivated and a go getter, someone who wants to be successful in what they do.

$100 to $25,000

Florida > Miami Beach

My husband and I are entrepreneurs and are looking to invest in sports facilities within the US and Europe.

$100,000 to $200,000

Florida > Singer Island

I'm a 41 single attorney in south Florida. In addition to being an attorney, I have an undergrad degree in finance from Indiana university. My partner and I have an investment company and we are looking for a sound business investment where we can remain silent partners or have a peripherally advisory role. We both invest daily in the market and are now looking to expand our horizons into businesses.

$1 to $30,000

Florida > Apollo Beach

Female investor in the South Tampa Bay area looking to find the right investment opportunity. Self-employed running a profitable healthcare consulting company for the past 3 years. Previously ran a $85M medical billing operation for a nationwide organization. Experience working with teams worldwide and extensive exposure to India operations. Interested in variety of levels of investment, least excited about silent, but would consider for the right deal. Would love to help others to be successful.

$1 to $50,000

Florida > North Port

I am a former business owner (two businesses) who has been successful and am looking for an opportunity to invest and build capital.

$10,000 to $65,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Owned a MFG Plant. Owned an Invoice Factoring Company. Owns an M&A Firm. Currently EVP of an Invoice Factoring & PO Funding company. Sits on the board of the Angel Forum in Florida Past President TMA Florida and board Member ACG.

$25,000 to $1,000,000