Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Plantation

I'm a young, sharp, aspiring investor and finance broker working with investment firms, private lenders and institutional investors with my network growing daily. Me and partners like projects that are $500k to $ 1 Billion and I have a firm that funds up to $ 5 billion. The types of projects we invest in are real estate, venture projects that are $1million+, industrial projects, energy and mining projects, and large scale projects. Most investments will be silent, but for venture or buyouts we will be hands on.

$500,000 to $1,000,000,000

Florida > Mulberry

Currently founder / President of fastest growing Truck Brokerage in U.S. looking to invest in your business. I’m 43 years old, live in Lakeland FL, married and a father of two. I’ve been in the transportation/ logistics field for the past 10 years and have launched 3 very successful start ups. My current LLC achieved $100 mil revenue in our second full year and have continued to grow since. While my biggest strength is certainty trucking and logistics, it takes a very well rounded leadership style to launch 3 consecutive startups from $0 to $25 mil annually or more. I can work as a silent advisor for the right company but I am truly looking for another challenge. To see if my skills and advice can help another entrepreneur reach new heights!

$5,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Fern Park

Investor located in Central Florida. I am an accountant with a masters degree in accounting and several years of corporate experience. I am specifically interested in investing in a small construction, remodeling, landscaping, pressure washing, restaurant, or bar operation. I also have prior experience in the restaurant business and co-owned a small construction business. I am most familiar in these industries and understand both the operations and the bookkeeping. I would like to help fund and grow someone with great potential who is ready to go out on their own.

$1 to $20,000

Florida > Sebring

I am a corporate development specialist with over 20 years of experience. I have a strong marketing background and I ready to invest up to $20,000 on someone else's dream.

$500 to $20,000

Florida > Boca Raton

I am a 50 year old male looking for a company to invest in and also be a part in making company grow. I have background in banking, finance and construction. I will be an individual investor. My kids are in college so I am looking for a new business challenge.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Miami

Quantitative options trader turned private equity and debt investor. Statistics and Quantitative Modeling B.B.A. Capital provider and fractional CFO for businesses at $1-$10M EBITDA. Anticipated Involvement: Advisory/Silent. Status: Hedge Fund.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Fleming Island

Married for 28 years, I am a 30 year retired Navy veteran with an aviation maintenance and management background and I am currently out of Jacksonville Florida. I have a Bachelors Degree in Professional Aeronautics and MBA in Quality Management. Unfortunately I do not have extensive background as an investor however always looking for ways to expand investment opportunities. I have extensive training in Leadership development and problem solving skills. Adapts to any environment quickly and excels. Looking to invest in the right opportunity as an individual investor and support to the fullest extent possible. For all you Entrepreneur's out there, good luck on your quest and wish only the best.

$0 to $75,000

Florida > Miami

We are a married couple from Denmark, succes fully running own company in Miami. Sanela (age 31) is a female Global Business Engineer and Morten (age 46) is a Entrepreneur in the real estate business. We are looking for a investment-project where we can contribute actively besides financial capital. We would prefer a partnership.

$10,000 to $500,000