Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Destin

I am a private investor located in North Florida, I have worked with several small start up businesses over the past 30 years. During that time these companies grew and were extremely successful. I recently sold one of my companies and I'm looking for that entrepreneur with a strong work ethic, motivation, product or idea. My involvement would be in an advisory role as needed.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Miami

Young entrepreneur originally from Morocco and educated in the US willing to invest in various projects.

$25,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Tampa

I am a 30 year old married guy. I live in Tampa, Fl. I am currently in pharmaceutical sales, but also am a co-owner of a PCR Genetic testing lab. I am a former college baseball player from Lubbock Christian University with a degree in sports management. I am very knowledgeable when it comes to sports and sports related investments. Depending on the industry, I feel like I am the right investor because I want to get the job done. And that job is how can we maximize our business to make the most money possible. I am interested in being a silent investor, but for the right opportunity, meaning I have expertise in it, then a hands on/advisory role is something I would be interested in as well. I would be an individual investor, but I have contacts all over the country that would invest in the right opportunity as well.

$5,000 to $25,000

Florida > Davie

I am 41 years old professional and I work in Senior Leadership Capacity at a MNC firm in South Florida. I have two decades of professional experience in multiple countries, including, relationship Management, Tender Process, Pricing Strategy etc. I look forward to the partnership.

$40,000 to $80,000

Florida > Daytona Beach

I am looking for a company to invest money for their services. I want to be hands off. I would like to invest in night clubs, construction, online, and many more. i just want to invest and make a nice return.

$10,000 to $25,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

Our company interested in investing up to $10 million in clients’ Supply Chains. As an alternative solution, we provide funding options for multiple organizations in multiple industries. We invest in qualified growing SME’s who have been in business for at least 2 years and maintain a central management. We follow strict KYC and AML regulations in order to secure our investment and minimize our risk. We are a group of dedicated employees looking to enrich our economy and ecosystem, we work hard to find the perfect funding solution for our clients.

$250,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Jacksonville

Successful entrepreneur in the fresh food packaging industry marketing to fast food companies, supermarket bakeries and delis, Strong advocate of environmentally friendly opportunities. A keen understanding on how to add value to services and product in very competitive markets.

$10,000 to $20,000

Florida > Palm Hrbor

Operating Partner with P****** Group Ventures Corporation with over 35 years of experience in manufacturing companies and private equity investment groups as a member and/or owner, who has created, directed and executed the strategic planning, mergers, acquisitions, joint ventures, financial structuring and restructuring, of numerous companies. Planned and executed “Greenfield” startups of a manufacturing facility in Europe and established a trading company in China. Performed due diligence, planned, directed, negotiated and executed the purchase/acquisition of strategic target companies and/or target asset(s) of a number of companies with a total value of $200,000,000. Previously CEO of a $60 million dollar machining firm serving Fortune 50 companies. Owner, Managing Partner and CEO of a $20 million machining company. Along with another partner started a small boutique private equity group making investments in small start-ups.

$50,000 to $2,000,000,000