Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Palm Beach Gardens

I've been working for IBM, Motorola and Microsoft for 20 years before I established my own business. After I concluded the acquisition of my private business I started the investment career through being licensed for new technologies across medical science, medication, information technology ranging from US$1M to US$10M.

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Haines City

I am 39, 20 years in the Automotive Industry with my own business, Married for 9 years with 1 child, Professional in the Automotive Industry, Former Professional Athlete and radio personality. New to Real Estate, New to Florida, from California. I have world travel experience and a positive attitude that allows me to be a fierce person in almost every human endeavor. Prefer to be a silent investor. Interested in High Energy Entrepreneur like myself.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Windermere

I am a current owner of a Home Health Agency located in Orlando. Due to the moratorium that has been placed on new Home health Agency whereby you cannot get license to serve Medicare\medicaid patients, I ended up serving only patient with commercial insurance or Workers compensation. I hold a Masters Degree in Nutrition Science. I live in Windermere. I would like to acquire a medicare\medicaid Licensed Agency that is serving Orange, Seminole, Brevard and Osceola county. I am seeking a business partner or seeking to invest in opportunities in medical professional fields.

$20,000 to $50,000

Florida > Miami

While I have invested in traditional enterprises, real estate, food industry, education, I am currently heavily invested in unique and innovative technologies and related solutions for the Direct Marketing and Internet Advertising Industries. As such, I have a company that is bringing a new form of web based tools to this space based on the enhancement of understanding communications preferences of customers. This started out as an educational application. I am looking to invest in companies that have complimentary value to the advertising and marketing industry. I am also keeping my ears attuned to the education and online learning space, as that has always been of great interest to me. My occupational background is in the area of private career education which was the launching pad for these new ideas. After successfully using these training applications with GE Medical Systems I decided to become an entrepreneur, and started investing.

$25,000 to $500,000

Florida > Port Saint Lucie

I’m a long term mind set person, I want to be hands on and contribute to the success of the business. I enjoy coaching and growing individuals. My investments are not just the financial portion.

$1 to $150,000

Florida > Lakeland

Retired professor of business, with MBA and Ph.D. and experience in business start-ups in the U.S. and in Latin America. Bilingual in Spanish. Desire to help businesses to develop. Individual investor.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Tampa

I'm 40yrs old married with a family of 5 and 3 boys located in Tampa FL. I've been involved in 7 startups, 5 of which I have personally invested in or was a co-founder with equity. There was no internet marketing degree in the late 90's so I learned in the school of hard knocks. Grew a drop ship company in late 90's to 32 million in revenue 4yrs later. 8yrs as director of optimization. Currently digital marketing consultant. Consulted with almost every vertical. Ownership in companies selling electronics, shoes, makeup, jewelry, pet supplies, training. Other value-adds: Expert at digital marketing and B2B lead generation (inbound and outbound). I fix business strategy, sales and marketing funnels. Anticipated involvement depends on opportunity. I like to make an impact. Individual Investor.

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > Gulfport

Real estate acquisitions manager. Looking to invest in real estate.

$30,000 to $50,000