Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > North Redington Beach

An entrepreneurial-minded, seasoned and experienced Software Technology Investor and Project Manager with current investments in a host of mobile security software and enterprise software companies. Individual investor.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Winter Park

In my fifties located in Florida experienced in management, acquisitions, startup projects, technology, and finance looking to invest up to $150k and seeking equity return as silent or active depending on business type. Can also help with business planning, startup vs. acquisition analysis, growth strategies, risk mitigation, bank financing, and commercial real estate if applicable.

$10,000 to $150,000

Florida > Hypoluxo

Married man living in Hypoluxo looking to invest, advise or be a working partner. I have owned companies and have experience in Florida Solar and Mobility products, and handicap vans.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Kissimmee

I am 63 years old. Married and living with my wife for 34 years and having a strong and stable relationship. Have been employed with a very solid and reputable company for 18 years as their Financial controller. Have strong Accounting and computer skills. Credentials include being a CPA and MCSE. Investment experience includes Real Estate, Stock Market, etc. to the tune of hundreds of thousands of dollars. I will be investing as silent or in a limited advisory role as I have a full time job currently. I will invest as an individual investor.

$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Boca Raton

I am a money motivated individual. I am a master at sales with over 15 years of experience. I own a handful of companies and am looking to expand my portfolio. I am open to being hands on or silent depending on the deal.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Miami

I am a general contractor. Over the years have built some equity. I started flipping houses about 2 years ago and it has been a great deal until now that there's more demand than supply and it's getting really hard to find a good deal. I have all of my knowledge in construction. Also my past experience was in the freight trucking business which I haven't dealt with over 10 years but I am open to all investment opportunities.

$50,000 to $400,000

Florida > Parrish

I represent a financial services and venture capital company looking to invest in startups. We will provide capital and take on an advisory role. We want you to run your business.

$10,000 to $500,000

Florida > Tampa

I am a 30 year old married guy. I live in Tampa, Fl. I am currently in pharmaceutical sales, but also am a co-owner of a PCR Genetic testing lab. I am a former college baseball player from Lubbock Christian University with a degree in sports management. I am very knowledgeable when it comes to sports and sports related investments. Depending on the industry, I feel like I am the right investor because I want to get the job done. And that job is how can we maximize our business to make the most money possible. I am interested in being a silent investor, but for the right opportunity, meaning I have expertise in it, then a hands on/advisory role is something I would be interested in as well. I would be an individual investor, but I have contacts all over the country that would invest in the right opportunity as well.

$5,000 to $25,000