Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Bronson

Engineer with 30+ years of experience in designing Large scale Water Treatment Plants. Continuous innovation in improving the system performance and capital investments needed to solve a problem. Key strength is thinking outside the box and coming up with solutions that consistently delivered more customer orders for the company I worked for

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Miramar

I am a 43 year old investor with a wife and child looking to diversify our investments. I am a fireman by trade and also own a financial advisory firm. I am a Certified Financial Planner professional and have a Bachelor's degree. Looking mainly for silent roles for my personal portfolio.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > Miami

43 years, married, Brazilian. Industrial director, MBA Degree (Business Administration), Electrical Engineer.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Jacksonville

Investment intermediary and venture partner with a focus on clean tech. Investment banking and C-Level experience. International capital relationships allow my firm to fund a wide array of complex deals.

$500,000 to $25,000,000

Florida > Punta Gorda

I am a military Veteran living in SW FL who is a 40+ year old professional with an MBA, who has focused in manufacturing / logistics / supply chain over the past 20 years. I also hold a Lean Six Sigma Black belt and have been highly trained in multiple manufacturing and logistics principles. I have a technical background on top of my manufacturing / logistics / supply chain experience. I do expect to have a level of advisory involvement and reporting. However, I am not currently interested in being in the daily operations unless it was required due to the growth curve. I am not afraid to get my hands dirty.

$100 to $15,000

Florida > Palm Beach Gardens

I have 25+ years experience of selling Industrial Products mainly in Printing & Packaging Industries. I am looking to diversify and am interested in new Ideas & ventures for a mutual beneficial association.

$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Hollywood

I’m an active investor with a strong background in business development, operations, and scaling companies to their full potential. I focus on Florida-based businesses across tech, real estate, consumer services, and more. I offer more than just capital—I bring strategic insight, a powerful network, and a range of investment vehicles tailored to meet the unique needs of each business. I’m looking to partner with driven entrepreneurs who are serious about growth and ready to take their business to the next level.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Miami

We are a family office that invests in private equity. We own several companies. Some outright, others between 25-60% ownership. We are interested in profitable and rapidly growing companies. We do not invest in companies that have no revenue. If a company is not breaking even we rarely consider with very few exceptions. We look for businesses that are profitable and could use a lot of capital to scale their profitable business.

$250,000 to $10,000,000