Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Clearwater

Senior, married. Investment manager, formerly Securities Principal. Funded energy, real estate and major construction projects. Advisory role and transaction planning with capacity of bringing in groups to projects.

$50,000 to $900,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

We are a firm that operates as a private investment bank and advisory firm in St. Petersburg. We specialize in serving the industrials, healthcare, and technology sectors. Our range of services includes providing advice for mergers and acquisitions, handling both buy-side and sell-side transaction advisory, and expertly managing transactional due diligence and strategic implementation. In addition to these primary services, we offer access to private debt and equity to meet working capital needs, accurate business valuation, and strategic advisory services to maximize enterprise value. Our clientele comprises lower and middle-market businesses, family offices, trusts, boutique institutions, and private equity firms.

$1,000,000 to $500,000,000

Florida > Wellington

Healthcare professional looking to invest in business venture as a private investor.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > Tampa

- Multiple deals currently involved in as a passive investor - Founding Member of New World Angels, Tampa Bay - 6 years in a Fortune 1000 company in a Sr. position - MBA in Marketing & Finance

$5,000 to $200,000

Florida > Riverview

I'm a 41 year old married firefighter in Tampa Florida. I have an associates degree in fire science along with many certifications in the fire service career including management certifications as well. I also have invested into real estate but looking into investing into other business interest. I’m willing to be hands-on or silent investor. I want to invest into someone who is just as passionate about their business interest as I am about mine. I only want to invest in the Tampa Bay Florida area.

$0 to $30,000

Florida > Live Oak

55 yo looking for long term investments in new start up companies.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Fort Myers

Residing in Ft. Myers & Mpls, successful founder of a venture funded internet search engine software co. (Sold I.P.), Sr. Mgr. early stage biotech & cosmeceutical co. (raised significant institutional $, licensing deal, spin off, and sold), investment banking & corporate finance, active investor in startups and special situations. Advisor, mentor, board member, not afraid to get hands dirty to help.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Tampa

A financial advisory firm that provides companies with time sensitive financing needs access to senior debt, mezzanine and private equity capital for the purposes of refinancing, acquisition, restructuring and growth initiatives. Our experience spans a broad range of industries including energy, financial services, media/broadcasting, real estate, healthcare, telecom manufacturing, distribution and emerging technology to name a few. With access to over $5 billion of capital through our financing resources, Prestige has the ability to help clients quickly structure meaningful equity, senior debt and mezzanine capital. We will also make direct investment from time to time.

$2,000,000 to $50,000,000