Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Davie

I am 41 years old professional and I work in Senior Leadership Capacity at a MNC firm in South Florida. I have two decades of professional experience in multiple countries, including, relationship Management, Tender Process, Pricing Strategy etc. I look forward to the partnership.

$40,000 to $80,000

Florida > Miami Beach

I have been working in the tech industry for the last 20 years. Passionate about programming and performance marketing. In the last years, I have worked as a consultant and helped various companies to go from negative to a 6 figures net income.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Miami

35years old entrepreneur looking for a business with great growth potential. Sold successfully 2 companies in South America in the financial markets industry. Hands on partner.

$100,000 to $250,000

Florida > Miami

South Florida, Direct Lender/Funding Coordinator. Guaranteed best rates and terms without the run around. Series 6, 63, 66 Licensed. University of Florida grad B.S. '14. Works with Direct Lender. Have strong business relationships with multiple lenders. Hands off approach, but always here when you need me the most. Always a call away and have a strong team behind me to support what ever funding requirements.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Rockledge

57, married, Rockledge, FL. While in grad school I was involved with SBIR projects. I joined a biosensor startup, ultimately sold them as a viscosity sensor company, and began working in wireless sensors. My partner and I were the first company to repay Maine Technology Institute's seed loans. I am now VP of R&D of a technology company serving the electric power industry and I havea senior engineering role to a startup company in which I am invested. I am making small seed investments from a self-directed IRA and I am interested in startups that I can help in some way, but I am not adverse to silent investment for the right deal. I have a 5 to 15 year perspective because of this, but quicker turnover is great. Investments to date are Helios Hockey, Insurgical, Knightscope, Liquid Piston, and Bonsi.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > St Augustine

I am an individual investor who recently sold my previous business and am looking to reinvest a portion of the proceeds. Any involvement considered.

$1 to $100,000

Florida > Bartow

Got an idea, want to expand on your current venture. I don't mind a risk, it's how empire's are made.

$1 to $50,000

Florida > Fort Myers

Currently we are looking for companies that have an existing business with a marketable investor business plan that we can invest +$1mil. towards the PR and IR to promote the co. We require that the co. be willing to list on the OTC. 100% of our investment will be specific to go toward IR and PR for the co. which we will provide. Our firm is US based and we fund US, Canada and International transactions. Our target clients include: - Commercial Real Estate Developers - Private and Public Companies - Start ups - Private and Public Trust Funds - Pension Funds - Institutional Investor Funds - Insurance Funds - High Net Worth Accredited Investors We generally fund the following types of transactions: Angel Investments Venture Capital Stock Debentures Growth Capital Commercial Loans Private Placements Reverse Mergers Commercial Development Loans Corporate Financing Mezzanine & Bridge financing

$1,000,000 to $5,000,000