Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Cape Coral

I retired from the U.S. Air Force in 2002 after serving honorably for 22 years and my expertise was in Telecommunications Systems. In 2002, I started an online furniture business and I have been operating it for the last 21 years now. My specialty is website design, optimization, and implementation. I'm also an online marketing specialist and I can bring all of these skills to the table for any business. I live in SW Florida and I'm interested in exploring local business opportunities.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Parkland

I am currently in the hotel and restaurant industry, focusing on extensive digital marketing and sales. I am looking to get involved with someone to jointly invest and manage something into the craft beer scene with someone here in South Florida. A craft beer bar would be ideal. I have extensive marketing experience to launch a business.

$25,000 to $100,000

Florida > Bradenton

I am in my 40s with a masters degree in finance. I am a youtube content creator and offer different types of services at home like tax returns and immigration preparer. I am also a webmaster with two websites. I think that I can be very useful for a team since I have an audience of 80000 subscribers from youtube.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Lake Mary

Self-made investor who is responsible for screening, learning & possibly funding new and innovative ideas in the Orlando market. Mitchell brings not only financial backing, but a long list of additional assets such as networking contacts, real world experience in select fields and a deep knowledge of Orlando and surrounding areas and demographics. I have a BS in Civil Engineering from the University of Florida. I work in the engineering/construction field as an estimator for large civil/highway projects providing in-depth cost analysis for various roadway projects. Investment Experience included Real Estate & New Business Start-Up. Interested in diversification into other areas. Anticipated Involvement: Advisory, Silent Status: Individual Investor

$500 to $20,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Entrepreneur for 25 years, owned various businesses through development, acquisition and sale

$1 to $4,000,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Chairman and president of a Boca Raton, Florida-based merchant and investment-banking firm. FBA provides the following services to clients: 1) M&A: Confidential representation of mid-market companies (sales in excess of $10 million or earnings in excess of $1 million) seeking sale or recapitalization. FBA can provide confidential introductions to buyers, investors.and other resources 2) Renewable & Conventional Energy: FBA is active across the energy spectrum including large project finance. 3) REAL ESTATE: FBA represents clients seeking the acquisition or divestiture of major commercial real estate. 4) CONSULTING & ADVISORY: As a nationally recognized business strategist, FBA provides consulting or advisory services at the board or CEO level for selected clients.

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Howey In The Hills

I have been in the real-estate investment business for more than twenty years.

$25,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Hollywood

I am looking to invest in Amazon 3rd Party Sellers, Real Estate (Commercial & Residential), hard money lending, interior design and home products.

$50,000 to $3,000,000