Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Boca Raton

Individual entrepreneur and investor for over 15 years originally from NYC, currently residing in Boca Raton. Have a broad range of business ownership and management experience in many fields. Now actively developing residential real estate projects.

$10,000 to $500,000

Florida > Jacksonville

Investment intermediary and venture partner with a focus on clean tech. Investment banking and C-Level experience. International capital relationships allow my firm to fund a wide array of complex deals.

$500,000 to $25,000,000

Florida > Miami

I am a 54-year-old US Army veteran with experience in operations management, project management, and program management. I have always focused strongly on data-supported, scientific-method business analysis for strategic decision-making.

$0 to $25,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

Retired firefighter with past real estate investment history.

$0 to $60,000

Florida > St Augustine

I'm a IT professional and passionate about investment opportunities to have extra source of income .

$0 to $25,000

Florida > St. Petersburg

Hands-on investor with experience in developing projects digitally and within real estate, from multi doors to industrial sites.

$20,000,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Bradenton

I am in my 40s with a masters degree in finance. I am a youtube content creator and offer different types of services at home like tax returns and immigration preparer. I am also a webmaster with two websites. I think that I can be very useful for a team since I have an audience of 80000 subscribers from youtube.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I'm 74 year olds, married for 55 years to the same wife, living in Fort Lauderdale, FL. Solid, plenty of experience in investments and in management, currently investing in three automotive companies, and one in aviation parts. The automotive are; one in sales and service and parts, the second manufacturing specialty hand built cars and third a classic cars restoration. I can be available as an advisor MENTOR also hands on [not full time]. I have experience in all management positions such as sales, service, manufacturing, financing and mentoring. I'm an individual investor but also have controlling interest in OTC public company if it needs to be used.

$100,000 to $500,000