Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Naples

Married with 2 children. Usa citizen, but Italian. Speak 4 languages. Owner of a franchise in Fort Myers, and before that a production body shop in Phoenix AZ. Also worked for 20+ years in the fashion industry and in the manufacturing family business in Italy. Looking to invest in something to diversify and have a long term relationship and return of investment.

$1 to $200,000

Florida > Tallahassee

In the process of building an investment fund for family/friends.

$100 to $500,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

Investor looking for Food and Beverage opportunities in South Florida.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Plantation

Active investor who has also founded 6 tech companies, ranging from a Top 5 ISP, to cable tv/broadband, mobile fleet tracking app and digital marketing companies. I am also a board member/advisor and active investor in a number of tech companies, including one that uses mobile phones to detect cancer. Strengths are: Specializing in forecasting trends, setting vision and strategy and organization turnarounds. I'm looking for intelligent and open-minded entrepreneurs that can utilize my experience and benefit from my network. Business must have revenues.

$10,000 to $250,000

Florida > Sarasota

Business Professional looking to grow ROI by partnering with those looking to establish their dreams. Hands on owner but will trust you with your operations.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Land O Lakes

Looking to invest in great ideas. I am an individual investor that can be hands on or relay on your expertise.

$20,000 to $50,000

Florida > Miramar

I am a 43 year old investor with a wife and child looking to diversify our investments. I am a fireman by trade and also own a financial advisory firm. I am a Certified Financial Planner professional and have a Bachelor's degree. Looking mainly for silent roles for my personal portfolio.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > Pembroke Pines

I’m an investor with technical background looking to join and invest in a mobile industry startup who has already built the minimum viable product and perhaps has some paying customers.

$10,000 to $1,000,000