Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tallahassee

Young Investor. I have a stable job with 6 digit pay. I work in Cloud Computing Technologies out of Tallahassee, FL. Have couple of Real Estate investments with recurring income.

$0 to $20,000

Florida > Seffner

Have some money, and want to make more. Can be involved, or silent partner. 15 years experience social service field. BS. Psychology, Certified Addiction Professional. Almost 40 , married.

$0 to $200,000

Florida > Ocala

CORPORATE FINANCE Through Project Finance disciplines, we offer clients highly experienced teams in Corporate Finance and Infrastructure financing. A wide range of interest rate and hedging strategies are available Our competitive edge lies in excellent knowledge of all major industrial sectors and the technical and investment banking skills required to bring complex transactions to a timely close. Arrangement, structuring, placement and syndication of loan facilities across a broad spectrum of clients and sectors, including: General Corporate Finance Merger and Acquisition Finance Leveraged Finance Real Estate development projects Expansion Funding Management buyouts or buyins Asset based manufacturing situations Oil, gas, and mineral recovery situations Petrochemicals, power High Tech startup situations Leasing Finance Bridge Finance Guarantee Finance Project Finance Structured Finance Transport Finance Aircraft Financing.

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Experienced account manager with a demonstrated history of working in the renewables and environment industry. Looking to be a silent partner in a small local business.

$30,000 to $60,000

Florida > Miami

I am a 35 year old Dutch national, living with my fiance in Miami. 15+ years of international trade & business development experience from several top tier logistics companies within the freight forwarding industry. Inititated and experienced with several start up companies in trade, logistics and importer in The Netherlands. Hands-on, well connected worldwide within the logistics industry.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Orlando

I am a young individual investor and serial entrepreneur. My companies, which I started from the ground-up have been recognized as the fastest growing privately held companies in Orlando, Tampa, and the state of Florida for 3 years consecutively, as well as the Inc 5000 list. I have a great team in place that can assist in start-ups or businesses that are struggling and need sound business advice and someone that is willing to get their hands dirty.

$500 to $50,000

Florida > Miami Beach

My husband and I are entrepreneurs and are looking to invest in sports facilities within the US and Europe.

$100,000 to $200,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Looking for investments, with a good ROI, and within the investment range up to 300K.

$5,000 to $300,000