Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Ft. Lauderdale

I have grown up in South Florida but have spent a lot of time in all the Southern States. My wife & I along with our two boys are always on the move. We are a family that enjoys new experiences and new challenges. My main business is in the world of finance but much different than the typical Wall Street or VC type format. Our company has done extremely well but has also had to overcome numerous hurdles along the way as all entrepreneurs do. What we are looking to do now is work with entrepreneurs like ourselves that have extreme passion, commitment & a determination to be successful with a solid business model we can put our investment capital behind. We look forward to the opportunity to use our years of experience in numerous different industries to help those entrepreneurs achieve their ultimate goals.

$5,000 to $500,000

Florida > Palm Beach Gardens

Our capital group has over 25 years of experience in lending. merger and acquisitions. We handle everything in the capital stack. I have over 25 years experience in banking and working with hedge funds. We work with over 40 different lenders.

$5,000,000 to $95,000,000

Florida > Niceville

I'm particularly interested in investing in the Florida panhandle region but will consider anything in Florida or the southeast. My background is primarily in warehousing, distribution, transportation, and retail management. I have an undergraduate degree in project management and an MBA with a specialization in strategic leadership.

$1 to $25,000

Florida > Mulberry

Currently founder / President of fastest growing Truck Brokerage in U.S. looking to invest in your business. I’m 43 years old, live in Lakeland FL, married and a father of two. I’ve been in the transportation/ logistics field for the past 10 years and have launched 3 very successful start ups. My current LLC achieved $100 mil revenue in our second full year and have continued to grow since. While my biggest strength is certainty trucking and logistics, it takes a very well rounded leadership style to launch 3 consecutive startups from $0 to $25 mil annually or more. I can work as a silent advisor for the right company but I am truly looking for another challenge. To see if my skills and advice can help another entrepreneur reach new heights!

$5,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Hallandalle Beach

We are family business radica ten in Miami. Our investments preferences are in Real. Our professional jobs are builder construction and legal business international law.

$1,000,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Orlando

I work closely with private capital groups that provide financing solutions to established, revenue-generating businesses. My background is in alternative finance and business development, with a focus on connecting companies to strategic funding sources, including business loans, equipment financing, bridge loans, and working capital solutions. I am also heavily networked in the Microcap world, helping small cap companies with aspirations of uplisting. I’ve helped companies across healthcare, retail, construction, and logistics access non- bank capital quickly and flexibly. I’m based in Florida and primarily act as a connector and advisor, working on a referral basis. Open to reviewing deals that make sense for my partners and helping businesses find a smart path forward.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I am currently a partner with a Fort Lauderdale based investment and development company that funds companies and develops companies primarily in energy, technology, manufacturing and real estate. Our investment size is typically $1-5 million, however, we make a select amount of smaller investments in local Florida companies every year. I helped found the company in 1998 with a group of investment bankers who had worked in corporate and project finance at major Wall Street firms including: Goldman Sachs, CS First Boston, Natwest, Prudential and Jefferies & Co.

$0 to $5,000,000

Florida > Tallahassee

In the process of building an investment fund for family/friends.

$100 to $500,000