Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Kissimmee

Entrepreneur for 25+ years. Have worked with start-ups as well as large established corporations. Ability to provide capital as well as experience.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Miami

I am a 35 year old Dutch national, living with my fiance in Miami. 15+ years of international trade & business development experience from several top tier logistics companies within the freight forwarding industry. Inititated and experienced with several start up companies in trade, logistics and importer in The Netherlands. Hands-on, well connected worldwide within the logistics industry.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Orlando

Married, Orlando, Fl. 40+ years of varied Management experience, including strong International across multi industries. Wharton School, MBA Jack Welsh Management Institute. Founded six companies, all sold but one; broad range incl. Manufacturing, retail, hospitality, mini-storage. Founded first Icebar North America, operates International Dr. Orlando; 7 figure; was Founder NEWCO to acquire For 500 subsid. did $55 mil LBO and Turnaround, repaid 3 yrs, did Refi $110 mill to expand. Strong financial expertise, background incl. Strategic and L.R. Planning, Feasibility Study, DCFROI, strong Start-up Company experience. Overall have done 30+ acquisitions, start-ups, new product start-ups and divestitures, half international. Any investment use my Mgt. Co., can be active, hands-on or advisory, not silent, depending location.

$100,000 to $500,000

Florida > Boca Raton

As a direct, Nationwide hard money lender with over nineteen years of proven success, we have financed over $350 million in commercial and residential loans secured by real estate. Insource Funding is an equity based lender that has the ability to Close quickly and are committed to making your hard money loan process efficient. Short term loans backed by Real estate from 12-24 months 30 year No-Doc commercial mortgages Whatever the scenario is, we are here to assist and provide a solution.

$200,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Miami

We are a financial investment firm that provides capital resources and strategies to functioning small and medium sized businesses. We are here to help and empower those businesses.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Tampa

Vice President of Strategy and Development at a private equity firm where he oversees deal flow origination and works directly with executive leadership of acquired companies to drive the professionalization and profitability of their organizations. Education includes Master of Science in Business Analytics, Master of Science in Finance, Bachelor of Business Administration in Finance and Bachelor of Arts degree in Economics from the Cox School of Business at Southern Methodist University.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Bonita Springs

Real estate investor. Hotel owner & operator.

$100,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Orlando

I am Florida Real Estate agent. I specialize in investment real estate across Central Florida. Multifamily and single-family flips and buy/hold's.

$1,000 to $800,000