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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Miami

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$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Tampa

I'm 40yrs old married with a family of 5 and 3 boys located in Tampa FL. I've been involved in 7 startups, 5 of which I have personally invested in or was a co-founder with equity. There was no internet marketing degree in the late 90's so I learned in the school of hard knocks. Grew a drop ship company in late 90's to 32 million in revenue 4yrs later. 8yrs as director of optimization. Currently digital marketing consultant. Consulted with almost every vertical. Ownership in companies selling electronics, shoes, makeup, jewelry, pet supplies, training. Other value-adds: Expert at digital marketing and B2B lead generation (inbound and outbound). I fix business strategy, sales and marketing funnels. Anticipated involvement depends on opportunity. I like to make an impact. Individual Investor.

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > Davie

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$100,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Orlando

I am a 28 year old successful ecommerce business owner looking to partner with other entrepreneurs to expand my portfolio. I am married with 2 children and located in the central Florida area. I owned a commercial cleaning business back 2016 while working in the dental field for the last 6 years. My main focus would be real estate, car rental service and anything e commerce or online in general. I am open to all different types of businesses if it makes sense and being able to obtain new knowledge and experiences to help develop more skills while I am on this business journey.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Miami Beach

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$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Pembroke Pines

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$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Plantation

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$500,000 to $1,000,000,000

Florida > St Petersburg

40 year old entrepreneur with more than 20 years of experience looking for innovative products, services or solutions. STEM and scientific background, PhD, MBA. Can be fully involved or silent partner.

$10,000 to $1,000,000