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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Palm City

Have invested in publishing & industrial trade shows in USA, South America, South Africa; financial businesses in USA, incl. start up banking; direct mail advertising Editor and Publisher of trade publications; executive director of several industrial trade associations; currently serving as director of multiple location local bank; served on numerous for-profit and non-profit companies and organizations; currently manage a small portfolio of private residential mortgages and a small thoroughbred horse racing and breeding operation Private investor

$2,500 to $100,000

Florida > Naples

I am looking for investment opportunities here in swfl and surrounding areas in South Florida

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > Ocala

Business owner. Technology specialist. Looking for the right investment.

$1,000 to $250,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

We are a firm that operates as a private investment bank and advisory firm in St. Petersburg. We specialize in serving the industrials, healthcare, and technology sectors. Our range of services includes providing advice for mergers and acquisitions, handling both buy-side and sell-side transaction advisory, and expertly managing transactional due diligence and strategic implementation. In addition to these primary services, we offer access to private debt and equity to meet working capital needs, accurate business valuation, and strategic advisory services to maximize enterprise value. Our clientele comprises lower and middle-market businesses, family offices, trusts, boutique institutions, and private equity firms.

$1,000,000 to $500,000,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Over 20 years experience in investing in small companies

$100,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Tampa

If you got nice concepts and good business ideas, you will be signed......Any Business that can get me 20% interest in 1 year....

$50,000 to $200,000

Florida > Tampa

I have lived in Tampa, FL for 15+ years. I have recently left my corporate position where I was employed for 15 years. My department was accountable for revenues of $300M+ and all associated P&L budgeting support. I have a BS in Business Management which I earned while in the US Army. Also I am a successful day trader and have been actively trading since 2019. Employment breakdown is as follows: Corporate Business Management - 18 years, Retail Management 5 years and US Military 4 years. I would be an individual investor and would be involved as much as needed to ensure a successful partnership.

$10,000 to $25,000

Florida > Miami

36, married, live in Miami. I have 2 masters degrees, first in geology and the second in international trade and transport. I’m a chartering manager in the dry bulk shipping industry.

$1,000 to $60,000