Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Royal Palm Beach

Licensed Home Improvement Supplier/General Contractor looking for lucrative real estate opportunities. We will buy land, residential or commercial space, rehab and sell off. Interested parties should have contacts or active deals in place. Additional funds available.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > Orlando

Looking for investment opportunities in established business with loan 1 to 5 years at 8%. 50% of the company ownership as collateral. Silent partner. Looking specifically for a growing equestrian stable in orlando area willing to expand

$50,000 to $150,000

Florida > Boca Raton

I am a 63 years old entrepreneur looking for a product to be developed across America; I like to get involved in the marketing aspect. I have been down on that road a couple of times. I have been involved in Real Estate, Manufacturing and networking Industrial paint, Modular houses manufacturing and raising show horses.

$5,000 to $250,000

Florida > Delray Beach

I am semi-retired and I have experience helping businesses grow. Looking to offer some help for the right business.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Coral Springs

I have a huge interest in everything green, plants, restoration, salvage. Have already been doing fix and flips for 10 years. Looking to get into nursery type business as a silent investor with preferably exotic tropical plants.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > Cutler Bay

I am a real estate investor with many single family homes rented in Miami and Ocala, Fl. As those markets have slowed, I am looking for something new to invest only in, or perhaps invest and get involved minimally.

$20,000 to $200,000

Florida > Miami

Successful Real Estate Developer and investor interested in start-ups where my international experience and entrepreneurial spirit can play a role on making a company expand internationally. 18 + years in Real Estate experience. Executive level at multinationals (JLL and CBRE- Heading Departments at National Level in Valuations & Advisory) and entrepreneur, serving as Board Member (non-exec) of a Pan-European REIT. Knowledge of commercial, residential, Hotels, Nursury Homes, Industrial & Logistics. Hands on, lots of people skills. In Florida. Spanish and English bilingual plus. MBA, Member of the Royal Institution of Chartered Surveyors with Harvard Real Estate Program. Started a Real Estate Development company and have successfully built and sold 6 residential buildings in the last 3 years. Would be interested to study investments in interesting real estate projects or start ups.

$150,000 to $500,000

Florida > Englewood

I am a retired executive who worked in the environmental services industry for more than 30 years. I was responsible for the management of multiple facilities and operations with annual budgets exceeding $70 million and more than 200 employees. My wife and I have been looking for the right small business to to either start-up or purchase, but have not been suuccessful because most opportunities would not allow us to travel to visit our children as we desire. Investing in another entrepreneur's business or idea is the logical alternative. We are open-minded regarding our level of involvement in the right opportunity, from hands-on engagement to completely silent.

$1,000 to $200,000