Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Bradenton

I am 58 yrs of age. I enjoy life in West Fl on the gulf. I was successful in starting from scratch a very profitable on-line electronic retail business & a very very profitable on-line business group which grew to be the worlds largest in its category. Sold both companies in 2011 totaling over 7mil. I consider myself a private Angel investor making my money work for me. I have invested experience in the real estate & auto industry looking to expand in any market as advisory or silent partner, must be profitable.

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > St. Petersburg

Investor with specialty in Home improvement sector. Marketing and sales training.

$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Jupiter

Private investor with experience in telecoms, apps, eCommerce and all things web. Loves the buzz of startups or taking co's to the next level. Prefer hands on but willing to sit and comment / advise. Originally from the UK with strong business links both sides of the pond.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Beverly Hills

I’m 45, happily married to my amazing wife, and based in Central Florida (where it’s always either sunny, raining, or both). I’m an individual investor, creative producer, and entrepreneur with hands-on experience building brands from idea to execution. I hold a BA in International Studies/Political Science (USF) and an MA in Ancient & Classical History (APUS). I’ve founded and grown projects like talent show, covering events, digital platforms, storytelling, and media production. My investment experience comes from creating, funding, and scaling my own ventures, blending strategy, marketing, content, and community building. I bring real-world execution, strong creative vision, and operational support, not just capital. My involvement varies from hands-on to advisory, depending on what founders need most. If you want an investor who truly builds with you, I’m your person.

$1 to $20,000

Florida > Palm Beach

As a business man for 28 years, I value time as one of the most important assets. Our expertise ranges from real estate investments to products import/export trade and production in local and foreign markets. With my best friends we look to support new productive opportunities, we will put our time in this so, pls use it wisely .

$100,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Miami Beach

I have been working as an investment analyst for a Hedge Fund for the past 3 years. I have recently decided to become involved with my family business and we are looking to expand our operations through new investment opportunities.

$100,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Hollywood

Married 37 years. 2 daughters, 2 grand kids. College degree: two years BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION, Mexico. Business experience: Owner, Vice president: Plastic container manufacturing company, Mexico, city. Move to EUA August 1984. Owner, President: Imports company. Toys, Gifts from Far East into EUA, Wholesale, Retail, Distribution. Owner, President: Three stores retail operation. Luggage and travel accessories. Miami, Fl. Family investment in: Automobile Dealerships. Mexico city. Owner, president: Small distribution sunglasses and reading glasses. Passion for family. Passion for automobiles in every form. Specially Formula One racing. Trying to come back from semi-retirement

$5,000,000 to $20,000,000

Florida > Jupiter

I'm a 47-year-old married investor based in Florida with a strong entrepreneurial mindset and a diverse business background. I’ve founded and scaled multiple ventures across insurance education, health & wellness, and niche consumer products. I hold a bachelor's degree and have over 20 years of professional experience in sales, marketing, and operations. I’ve invested in businesses in sectors like health, food & beverage, diagnostics, and tech-enabled services, typically in the $25K–$100K range. I bring more than capital—I offer strategic insight, marketing expertise, and a wide network across healthcare, finance, and consumer markets. I prefer an advisory or silent role depending on the founder’s needs. I invest as an individual and actively look for innovative, impact-driven businesses where I can contribute to sustainable growth. Working with the right type of person is most important to me.

$5,000 to $100,000