Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Rockledge

57, married, Rockledge, FL. While in grad school I was involved with SBIR projects. I joined a biosensor startup, ultimately sold them as a viscosity sensor company, and began working in wireless sensors. My partner and I were the first company to repay Maine Technology Institute's seed loans. I am now VP of R&D of a technology company serving the electric power industry and I havea senior engineering role to a startup company in which I am invested. I am making small seed investments from a self-directed IRA and I am interested in startups that I can help in some way, but I am not adverse to silent investment for the right deal. I have a 5 to 15 year perspective because of this, but quicker turnover is great. Investments to date are Helios Hockey, Insurgical, Knightscope, Liquid Piston, and Bonsi.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Fort Myers

Residing in Ft. Myers & Mpls, successful founder of a venture funded internet search engine software co. (Sold I.P.), Sr. Mgr. early stage biotech & cosmeceutical co. (raised significant institutional $, licensing deal, spin off, and sold), investment banking & corporate finance, active investor in startups and special situations. Advisor, mentor, board member, not afraid to get hands dirty to help.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > News Haven

I am an entrepreneur who has funded and started several online companies seeking to expand my business

$100 to $100,000

Florida > Sunrise

We established entrepreneur looking to help expand another business.

$100,000 to $200,000

Florida > Fleming Island

I am a young professional seeking investment opportunities in the Orange Park/Fleming Island area. My wife and I own several rental properties and are always looking to acquire more. I am also interested in food trucks and believe there is a huge opportunity to capitalize on lunchtime sales in my area. We are actively seeking a partner with experience in the food truck industry.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Hollywood

I’m an active investor with a strong background in business development, operations, and scaling companies to their full potential. I focus on Florida-based businesses across tech, real estate, consumer services, and more. I offer more than just capital—I bring strategic insight, a powerful network, and a range of investment vehicles tailored to meet the unique needs of each business. I’m looking to partner with driven entrepreneurs who are serious about growth and ready to take their business to the next level.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Winter Park

I am a real estate investor in Orlando, FL, looking for distressed properties in the East Orlando, Winter Park and Kissimmee area. The numbers must make sense and must be competitive. The amount of wholesalers in this region has driven REO bank owned real estate prices above usual business. I am working with private investors from the U.S. and flip some of these properties right over to them as an assignment if it does not meet my immediate needs.

$25,000 to $400,000

Florida > Orlando

Looking for trucking individuals specifically. However, open to all new investment opportunities.

$1,000 to $20,000