Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tampa

I am 31 years old and reside in Tampa, FL. I recently sold a chain of retail stores that I started 7 years ago. We were doing 20M in sales and had 180 employees. I am a UNC Chapel Hill grad with a business degree and also a 3 time All American tennis player. I am looking to be a hands-on investor and will add a very unique set of skills to your business.

$500,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Bonita Springs

Real estate investor. Hotel owner & operator.

$100,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Deerfield Beach

I have invested and been directly involved in five companies.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > North Lauderdale

Currently a manager at a call center for the past 11 years in tech support and customer service. Prior to now, occupied executive positions in both the government and private sector including holding the position of Vice President in the manufacture association as well as director in chambers of commerce. Graduate and participant of several post graduate training at universities and specialized financial institutions such as the EIB of Singapore Georgetown university and IMF in Washington. Was chairman and director at several government corporations and travel extensively to several countries to negotiate business opportunities.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Windermere

I'm a 40 y/o entrepreneur, Married 2 kids who lives in the Orlando area. I started a technology/finance company in 2003 in NYC. I have minimal experience investing in other companies. I have good experience in the finance and technology areas and understand how to make companies successful. I'm interested in a hands-on or advisory role. I am an individual investor

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Winter Park

I live in Orlando, FL. I have a Masters in Mechanical Engineering background and I have a great experience in engineering and technology in aerospace. I am also a hands-on guy when it comes to fixing houses.

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > Bradenton

I am a 50 something, married entrepreneur from the UK. As our children are keen athletes, we have spent the past 4 years in Bradenton during the academic year. I am educated to MBA level, and recently sold my nursery school after 20 years of successful operation. I also previously owned an apprenticeship training company. I started both companies from scratch, therefore I am familiar with taking a company from the initial stages all the way through the growing cycle. As I am now spending more time in the US, I am looking for a company to invest, either as a silent or working partner and I would be looking to own at least 50% of the company.

$100,000 to $125,000

Florida > Cape Coral

I own and manage several companies. My strength is understanding processes and being able to make them more efficient. I'm looking to invest in companies in various fields - mostly interested in investing in people.

$10,000 to $2,000,000