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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Brooksville

60-y/o multi-disciplinary engineer, former wunderkind, Mensan, libertarian, entrepreneur, founder, worker, consultant, contractor, tutor, etc. I have a physical limitation. I work from home, doing remote consulting work. Any work I do is covered by strong NDAs and my internal process controls. I've never had an incident violating confidentiality. I attended Fairfield University in the 70s, graduated high school in the 80s and attended UCONN, Cornell, SUNY, and others. In the 90s I occasionally tutored MCAT, LSAT, etc. I've invested in projects ranging in size from 'lemonade stands' to 'oil wells'. I've received investment & generated superior returns. Assume that I completely understand your project within 5 minutes of discussing it. If our discussions reach the fifteen minute mark, assume I'm interested. If I offer services, you are not ready for $$$. Do not take that as rejection, especially if offer them for equity. I'll can help you become investment ready. I AM SMART MONEY

$0 to $250,000

Florida > Bradenton

I am 58 yrs of age. I enjoy life in West Fl on the gulf. I was successful in starting from scratch a very profitable on-line electronic retail business & a very very profitable on-line business group which grew to be the worlds largest in its category. Sold both companies in 2011 totaling over 7mil. I consider myself a private Angel investor making my money work for me. I have invested experience in the real estate & auto industry looking to expand in any market as advisory or silent partner, must be profitable.

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Plantation

I'm a young, sharp, aspiring investor and finance broker working with investment firms, private lenders and institutional investors with my network growing daily. Me and partners like projects that are $500k to $ 1 Billion and I have a firm that funds up to $ 5 billion. The types of projects we invest in are real estate, venture projects that are $1million+, industrial projects, energy and mining projects, and large scale projects. Most investments will be silent, but for venture or buyouts we will be hands on.

$500,000 to $1,000,000,000

Florida > Orlando

A professional medical device executive in a fortune 100 company With multiple C-Suite connections. Expertise in quality improvements, cost efficiency, manufacturing, Engineering, strategy and project management/execution. PhD in polymer Physics. Masters in industrial and Medicinal Chemistry. Looking for investment opportunities with advisory/silent role. Some hands on possible based on investment

$10,000 to $500,000

Florida > Tampa

Medical Doctor practicing in Florida.

$100,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Orlando

I have over 32 years of experience in corporate advertising and marketing. Founder and president of a Michigan Avenue advertising and marketing agency specializing in advertising, promotion, and sales-incentive programs. Served a broad range of industries by creating successful selling models and up-sell strategies; developing, testing and refining integrated marketing strategies; and coordinating corporate communications and brand-identity programs for client companies. Created software that helped develop sales channels for the online services that automate the selling cycle, maximize clients' consumer facing business communications, consistently present clients' value proposition, and automatically initiate follow-up strategies.

$15,000 to $100,000

Florida > Bell

I am a semi-retired entrepreneur looking to divest of stock and bond market risk and invest in and help manage residential real estate opportunities in the State of Florida. I have always had good instincts in sourcing and adding value to underutilized properties, and have done this consistently over a 25 year period. However, I am at a point where I would like to leverage both capital and resources and explore this opportunity on a more full-time basis. I have an MBA in Finance & Marketing and have used both skills working with both large corporations and small businesses. I'm looking to invest $50,000-$100,000 on a per project basis and would anticipate a minimal 30% return over a 2 year period. I live in North Central Florida, but am in Central Florida (Tampa area) on a regular basis.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > Venus

Retired entrepreneur looking to invest passively in local businesses.

$1,000 to $300,000