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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Pinellas Park

I’m a private equity broker and we provide alternative financing to successful and startup businesses. I have worked in this space for over 10 years and our firm wants you to succeed. We typically work with developers and business owners seeking project financing between $2,000,000 up to $500,000,000. We welcome all recast estate deals and look forward to hearing from you.

$2,000,000 to $200,000,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

We are a firm that operates as a private investment bank and advisory firm in St. Petersburg. We specialize in serving the industrials, healthcare, and technology sectors. Our range of services includes providing advice for mergers and acquisitions, handling both buy-side and sell-side transaction advisory, and expertly managing transactional due diligence and strategic implementation. In addition to these primary services, we offer access to private debt and equity to meet working capital needs, accurate business valuation, and strategic advisory services to maximize enterprise value. Our clientele comprises lower and middle-market businesses, family offices, trusts, boutique institutions, and private equity firms.

$1,000,000 to $500,000,000

Florida > Pensacola

Active small business and real estate investor. Tech background. I’m looking for investment and partnership opportunities in real estate and small businesses.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Miami

I am the co-owner of a Corporation that offers mobile paramedical services, throughout Florida, with more than18 years of experience in the medical laboratory business. I am seeking to combine the platform that my current business has which includes more than 15 trained certified phlebotomists/nurses that offer different types of medical related services to patients at the convenience of their homes with another medical related business. My goal is to make an investment in the medical field, biotechnology, or molecular biology field. I would like to be an active investor by intervening as a consultant, hands-on or advisor to help grow a business which I would be passionate about. If the business constitutes an interesting challenge for me I would be your best choice as an investor.

$10,000 to $200,000

Florida > Miami

Single, 55, residing in Miami-Dade area. Medical professional with business experience and investment experience. Hands on involvement. Honest, open minded, hard working and fair minded partner. Partner or investor role. Open to all areas. If you are a go-getter and honest With a great work ethic and currently working for somebody in the transportation field or oil and gas Or other..and have made a lot of people rich except yourself . Contact me -you won’t be sorry. Me and my partner will get involved hands-on and funds all in to make it happen the right way and protect you as our equal partner so it may be mutually fruitful environment .I do like to work with people that are more common sense and hard-working to make those business dreams come true and be truly independent . Myself and my partner are not in anyway greedy and just enjoy working as a team with great projects and with deserving individuals . If you’re a woman that’s An added bonus. “Women make great partners”

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Oviedo

Medical device executive and leadership for the past 20 years. Interested in unique opportunities that make a real difference in the lives of patients.

$5,000 to $25,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

We are a licensed Florida mortgage company that specializes Hard money private lender mortgages. We provide Florida real estate investors with private mortgage loans or self-employed bank statement no income mortgages. We have been closing Florida hard money Self employed borrowers mortgages for over 15 years. We close tough deals!

$50,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Tampa

Holding company with a focus on investing in real estate related sales, service and development companies. We identify opportunities where our experience in real estate brokerage, property management, title insurance, home services and construction/development will lead to increased success through more effective engagement of the customer across all business lines. Willing to collaborate to help shape strategy and direction in an advisory role.

$10,000 to $150,000