Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tallahassee

In the process of building an investment fund for family/friends.

$100 to $500,000

Florida > Tamarac

Bachelors in finance, professional in car sales currently - #1 sales in company of many dealerships Mainly invested in retirement but looking for other opportunities to hustle and grow Involvement depends on sector. Individual investor but have family interested in making investments if it makes sense.

$5,000 to $25,000

Florida > Longwood

45 married entrepreneur with outstanding sale and marketing experience.

$1,000 to $500,000

Florida > Sarasota

I am a mid-30s, hungry investor located on the west coast of Florida, with ties to the northeast (tri-state area). My preference is to be involved (advisory or hands-on) in some capacity with the right investment and the right people, in order to leverage my skill-set and experience to best serve the company. My expertise is in financial markets, health care, technology, and operational and financial management. I have held CFO and COO titles in varying capacities, and my education is from a well-renowned institution. I have experience investing in individual companies as well as financial markets. I represent myself as the investor, but can also bring others into the fold for the proper opportunity.

$0 to $1,000,001

Florida > Parkland

I I am a personal investor with a background in the hospitality business. I am looking to possibly invest in promising startups as a silent partner. I live in Boca Raton, Florida so am especially interested in ventures located nearby, although this is just a preference not a requirement.

$10,000 to $500,000

Florida > Fleming Island

Married for 28 years, I am a 30 year retired Navy veteran with an aviation maintenance and management background and I am currently out of Jacksonville Florida. I have a Bachelors Degree in Professional Aeronautics and MBA in Quality Management. Unfortunately I do not have extensive background as an investor however always looking for ways to expand investment opportunities. I have extensive training in Leadership development and problem solving skills. Adapts to any environment quickly and excels. Looking to invest in the right opportunity as an individual investor and support to the fullest extent possible. For all you Entrepreneur's out there, good luck on your quest and wish only the best.

$0 to $75,000

Florida > Ponte Vedra Beach

I'm a digital transformation-focused technology executive that recently sold a government contracting consulting firm. I'm looking to get involved with new and interesting ideas with high energy, passionate people. Background is tech and finance (investment banking focused on M&A). Formal education includes law degree and MBA. I'm happy to be actively engaged or passive, based on whether I can add value.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Miami Lakes

Retired law enforcement professional, with 25 years of law enforcement and security experience. Masters Degree in Criminal Justice Management and Bachelors Degree in Criminal Justice. Fluent in both English and Spanish. Potential individual investor, looking to be mostly a silent partner, for a percentage of the business and dividing/receiving profits, according to the percentage of ownership purchased. Everything would be done in a legal fashion, with proper attorneys, accountants, disclaimers, and protection from liabilities. All business documents and/or agreements, would all be reviewed by the appropriate professionals and attorneys, prior to a final agreement being signed.

$100,000 to $3,000,000