Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tampa

I work for a Fortune 500 company managing Global Sales Strategy and Performance . I manage and drive 9 digit sales figures annually with 20% growth this past year alone. Just recently began Angel and VC Fund investing. I am interested to help new technologies grow fast. I am well versed in business, sales, marketing, profit modeling. I truly enjoy assisting new growth companies maximize revenue and cash flow. Experienced with many market segments and application spaces in my current role. Main interests are Food Innovation, autonomous mobility, AR/VR, Health/Wellness/Medical application (preferably on the preventive side), wireless sensing, robotics.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Sarasota

Part time CEO of large design and construction firm based in the northeast. Currently split time between FL and NH. Most investing has been in commercial real estate, but I would be interested in doing deals for other industries. I would prefer to be a majority investor, in a largely advisory role.

$100,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Naples

Married with 2 children. Usa citizen, but Italian. Speak 4 languages. Owner of a franchise in Fort Myers, and before that a production body shop in Phoenix AZ. Also worked for 20+ years in the fashion industry and in the manufacturing family business in Italy. Looking to invest in something to diversify and have a long term relationship and return of investment.

$1 to $200,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

Founded and sold a telecomm products manufacturing business that grew to over 400 people. Have founded 8 startup companies. Holds 10 patents. Awarded lifetime achievements in Engineering award from attended University. Background in wired and wireless communications, energy conservation products, IOT, cloud computing, real time online transaction processing, R&D, product management, operating high tech businesses, partnerships, business plans, capital raising, and conceiving and delivering innovative out-of-the-box product concepts and ideas.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > Davie

We provide Hard Money Mortgages throughout the state of Florida. No games, Fast answers and the results you expect.

$100,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Pinellas Park

I'm a married 34 year old male. My wife and I have 2 kids. I'm a general manager of a successful restaurant in the Tampa Bay area. My education come from hospitality, budgets.

$200 to $20,000

Florida > Plantation

I'm currently married with 4 children and a beautiful wife and am currently living in Sunrise, FL. I have got many people the money they needed with many different scenarios presented. I am looking for anyone that needs money for anything, I review the risks/reward and will let you know how much I can cover for what you need. I have a very quick and simple process and depending on the investment type, I can get you the money you need anywhere between 1-3 days which gives us time to conduct due diligence. Once I have my hands on your proposal, I can give you an answer the SAME DAY! There is no specific type of industry to invest in, as long as you have the ability to repay and it is a sound investment, you can have the money.

$10,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Estero

Have successfully raised millions of dollars for real estate, technology and beverage endeavors. Current focus in SE USA and Manhattan.

$1,000 to $10,000,000