Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Destin

I am a private investor located in North Florida, I have worked with several small start up businesses over the past 30 years. During that time these companies grew and were extremely successful. I recently sold one of my companies and I'm looking for that entrepreneur with a strong work ethic, motivation, product or idea. My involvement would be in an advisory role as needed.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Seminole

I'm a seasoned Media Sales Executive (25 years) looking for investment opportunities. I am open to both silent and partnership opportunities.

$100 to $100,000

Florida > Delray Beach

We invest in mobile home parks.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Fernandina Beach

.Engineering degree from North Carolina State University. Two successful start ups. Experience in acquisitions and mergers. Named one of top seven CFOs in Northeast Florida in 2014. Strong network of sucessful entrepreneurs and capital sources. Strong track record of growing companies and brands.

$25,000 to $250,000

Florida > Fleming Island

I am a 43-year-old professional looking to diversify my assets. I am an individual investor seeking highly-motivated entrepreneurs with experience and a promising concept who have developed a clear business model. I anticipate a role as a silent or mostly silent investor.

$5,000 to $150,000

Florida > Lakeland

Retired professor of business, with MBA and Ph.D. and experience in business start-ups in the U.S. and in Latin America. Bilingual in Spanish. Desire to help businesses to develop. Individual investor.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Maitland

I am a commercial mortgage broker and real estate investment acquisitions broker representing two clients full time and occassionaly handling other random assignments from referrals or prior clients. Prior to entering the mortgage banking field I spent 7 years in commercial real estate appraisal. My wife's family has a small pool of investment capital of which they would like to invest a portion in opportunistic real estate deal(s). They are not operators nor am I comfortable serving as project manager for something they elected to acquire or invest in, so we are interested in seeing if this web site might provide any opportunities to work with seasoned developers-investors to everyones benefit.

$25,000 to $250,000

Florida > Tampa

I have lived in Tampa, FL for 15+ years. I have recently left my corporate position where I was employed for 15 years. My department was accountable for revenues of $300M+ and all associated P&L budgeting support. I have a BS in Business Management which I earned while in the US Army. Also I am a successful day trader and have been actively trading since 2019. Employment breakdown is as follows: Corporate Business Management - 18 years, Retail Management 5 years and US Military 4 years. I would be an individual investor and would be involved as much as needed to ensure a successful partnership.

$10,000 to $25,000