Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > New Port Richey

I am a 48 year old that is married with 1 child. I'm currently in the IT field with an extensive background in Application Hosting and Security. I have been with the same company for 19 years. I own my own small business Web hosting Company and another Mobile Marine Engine Repair and Survey company. I have experience in the automotive and marine industries. I have restored many boats in the past 20 years all the way from restringing, conversion of io/inboards, Awlgrip/Awlcraft painting and have my work recognized by Chris Craft. I am currently vested in a marine company and am a reseller for a marine company. I have alot of experience in the Marine industry. I do not anticipate to have much involvement except for financial investment at this time.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Clearwater

Senior, married. Investment manager, formerly Securities Principal. Funded energy, real estate and major construction projects. Advisory role and transaction planning with capacity of bringing in groups to projects.

$50,000 to $900,000

Florida > Windermere

I am a female international broker and developer seeking new and profitable investments . I have a business degree and speak 5 languages fluently. Lived and grew up in Europe and obtained my expertise in investing in Switzerland, Austria and Germany. I live in USA as a citizen since several years and I would be open to involve myself in new projects.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Cape Coral

MBA with over thirty years of professional business and technical experience. Project funding specialist. Have funding sources for debt and equity. Active in Assisted Living Facilities, Skilled Nursing Facilities, apartments, hotels, real estate developments and waste to energy plants.

$10,000,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Winter Haven

I am a skilled software developer with a Bachelor's degree in Software Development from Universidad de las Ciencias Informáticas, La Habana, Cuba, attained in August 2014. My professional journey includes roles such as a Software Developer at companies like Magaya Corporation and International Market Center, where I developed scalable apps, integrated eCommerce platforms, and optimized systems for performance. I possess expertise in .Net Core, NodeJs, ReactJs, and have contributed to agile software development practices. Although I have not explicitly ventured into investment yet, my technical experience positions me well to understand and evaluate tech startups, especially those in the eCommerce and software sectors. I envision an advisory role, offering mentorship and leveraging contacts in the tech industry for strategic partnerships. Currently, my status is as an individual considering investment opportunities, seeking to collaborate with innovative businesses to drive growth

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Windermere

I own several businesses in the Orlando area and looking to use the skills I've developed in product manufacturing and fulfillment, franchising, financial consulting, organizational development, commercial real estate, and management to invest in or partner with a new business.

$10,000 to $150,000

Florida > Boca Raton

I am a 63 years old entrepreneur looking for a product to be developed across America; I like to get involved in the marketing aspect. I have been down on that road a couple of times. I have been involved in Real Estate, Manufacturing and networking Industrial paint, Modular houses manufacturing and raising show horses.

$5,000 to $250,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

Newer Florida resident looking to expand portfolio. Currently serve as president of a high 8 figure media operation. Prefer silent investing but would consider mentorship if skills were a strong match.

$10,000 to $120,000