Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Parkland

Own a merchant banking company. Specialize in small growth companies. Take Companies public. Have over 10 years experience doing financings and taking companies public. Work with groups of investors and institutions as well.

$10,000,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Plantation

I'm currently married with 4 children and a beautiful wife and am currently living in Sunrise, FL. I have got many people the money they needed with many different scenarios presented. I am looking for anyone that needs money for anything, I review the risks/reward and will let you know how much I can cover for what you need. I have a very quick and simple process and depending on the investment type, I can get you the money you need anywhere between 1-3 days which gives us time to conduct due diligence. Once I have my hands on your proposal, I can give you an answer the SAME DAY! There is no specific type of industry to invest in, as long as you have the ability to repay and it is a sound investment, you can have the money.

$10,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Orlando

I am 39 years old, I speak Spanish and English. I am a financial consultant specializing in business valuation and corporate finance. I have worked as a Financial Director of a food company. I have made multiple investment deals with start up companies. I studied industrial engineering, I have a MBA (Master Business Administration) and a specialize in finance.

$40,000 to $65,000

Florida > Fleming Island

Married for 28 years, I am a 30 year retired Navy veteran with an aviation maintenance and management background and I am currently out of Jacksonville Florida. I have a Bachelors Degree in Professional Aeronautics and MBA in Quality Management. Unfortunately I do not have extensive background as an investor however always looking for ways to expand investment opportunities. I have extensive training in Leadership development and problem solving skills. Adapts to any environment quickly and excels. Looking to invest in the right opportunity as an individual investor and support to the fullest extent possible. For all you Entrepreneur's out there, good luck on your quest and wish only the best.

$0 to $75,000

Florida > Miami Beach

We manage a small investment fund. Our preferred structure is a convertible debenture. We do asset based loans with or without equity kicker. Do not invest in pure start ups.

$100,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Gibsonton

Looking for something fun to invest in. Would be willing to help but would prefer to be mostly hands off. Looking for other hard working people that enjoy being part of team..

$10,000 to $200,000

Florida > Destin

I am a private investor located in North Florida, I have worked with several small start up businesses over the past 30 years. During that time these companies grew and were extremely successful. I recently sold one of my companies and I'm looking for that entrepreneur with a strong work ethic, motivation, product or idea. My involvement would be in an advisory role as needed.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Fleming Island

I am a 43-year-old professional looking to diversify my assets. I am an individual investor seeking highly-motivated entrepreneurs with experience and a promising concept who have developed a clear business model. I anticipate a role as a silent or mostly silent investor.

$5,000 to $150,000