Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Orlando

I am very excited to find interesting opportunities for investment. I am partnered with a good friend of mine who has been investing for more than three years, generating a passive income of about 25k a year. Our combined expertise includes, security, law, and medical. Seeking to invest primarily for equity in bushiness however we are open to all ideas. We have both agreed that we are looking to play the long game with investments for companies looking to expand. While we are not opposed to beings hands on we would prefer to fall into the silent investor category of the spectrum.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Naples

Providing capital through my contacts.

$1 to $50,000,000

Florida > Orlando

I am a young individual investor and serial entrepreneur. My companies, which I started from the ground-up have been recognized as the fastest growing privately held companies in Orlando, Tampa, and the state of Florida for 3 years consecutively, as well as the Inc 5000 list. I have a great team in place that can assist in start-ups or businesses that are struggling and need sound business advice and someone that is willing to get their hands dirty.

$500 to $50,000

Florida > Orlando

I am a young investor looking to invest in the right product/company. I currently own two business and have launched several successful products. I specialize in marketing with my own social media reaching over one million people. I have also been on TV and Radio.

$10,000 to $300,000

Florida > Port St Lucie

Married w/2 children living in Southeast Florida. Current Entrepreneur of a Children's Boutique. MBA specializing in Accounting and Information Systems. 1st time investing in a business other than my own. Any type of involvement is fine. Individual investor.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

Former analyst in the alternatives group at a multi billion dollar firm. Current analyst for a firm whose clients are Credit Value Hedge Funds. Bachelors Degree in Economics/Finance from Florida State, CFA candidate, looking to make at this time a nominal equity investment in a great startup or existing venture that has rapidly growing sales and matching demand for it's product or service.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Miami

I am a married mother of two teenage daughters. I have an MBA in finance and would like to renter the small business world after a 5 year break. I previously owned two successful residential and commercial mortgage banking companies. Before owing theses companies for 11 years, I was employed at a prominent Chicago Bank as a Private Wealth Management banker. I am an individual investor who would like to have an advisory role in the company.

$10,000 to $300,000

Florida > Gibsonton

Looking for something fun to invest in. Would be willing to help but would prefer to be mostly hands off. Looking for other hard working people that enjoy being part of team..

$10,000 to $200,000