Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Plantation

Active investor who has also founded 6 tech companies, ranging from a Top 5 ISP, to cable tv/broadband, mobile fleet tracking app and digital marketing companies. I am also a board member/advisor and active investor in a number of tech companies, including one that uses mobile phones to detect cancer. Strengths are: Specializing in forecasting trends, setting vision and strategy and organization turnarounds. I'm looking for intelligent and open-minded entrepreneurs that can utilize my experience and benefit from my network. Business must have revenues.

$10,000 to $250,000

Florida > Englewood

I am a retired executive who worked in the environmental services industry for more than 30 years. I was responsible for the management of multiple facilities and operations with annual budgets exceeding $70 million and more than 200 employees. My wife and I have been looking for the right small business to to either start-up or purchase, but have not been suuccessful because most opportunities would not allow us to travel to visit our children as we desire. Investing in another entrepreneur's business or idea is the logical alternative. We are open-minded regarding our level of involvement in the right opportunity, from hands-on engagement to completely silent.

$1,000 to $200,000

Florida > Orlando

Orlando native looking to invest in Florida startups.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Odessa

My name is carl nicks. I am a 29 year old professional athlete. I have done well for myself and want a more hands on role on managing and diversifying my portfolio. Let me make it clear and easy for u to understand. In no way am I an expert investor. I have no high power connections nor do I know a lot about investing. What I do have is money and a strong will to succeed. Not to mention I've seen every episode of shark tank. If you feel like you have a good product and or business and the only reason you haven't succeeded is because you don't have the capital then I could possibly be the man for you. If it makes sense and you have a business plan that makes sense we can possibly make each other a nice profit. I also would consider myself a silent partner not stepping on any toes. I look forward to doing business with u in the future.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Kissimmee

I am 63 years old. Married and living with my wife for 34 years and having a strong and stable relationship. Have been employed with a very solid and reputable company for 18 years as their Financial controller. Have strong Accounting and computer skills. Credentials include being a CPA and MCSE. Investment experience includes Real Estate, Stock Market, etc. to the tune of hundreds of thousands of dollars. I will be investing as silent or in a limited advisory role as I have a full time job currently. I will invest as an individual investor.

$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Tampa

Legal professional with a Juris Doctorate from Stetson University College of Law. Open to investments.

$50,000 to $200,000

Florida > Miami

I have 24 years in the Investment Banking Business. My objective is to build up and devote full time in the venture i get involved with. My specialty is M/A. I have clients all around the world that i have done many M/A transactions. I am a private investor that is willing to invest my own capital. I also have access to all my contacts all over the world. I have raised over 300 million for venture capital deals in the past. My goal is to invest my capital and raise the value of the company and sell it off to some of my groups that are looking to acquire profitable companies out of the country.

$25,000 to $400,000

Florida > Bonita Springs

Private Money. 25 yrs experience.

$350,000 to $15,000,000