Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > St. Petersburg

been an active investor in Real estate and business for 25 years. Have others who have money also and trust my experiance and judgement

$750,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Ponte Vedra Beach

38 y/o married couple located in NE FL, looking for investment opportunities. Graduates of UF and UCF. Silent investor or partially hands on. Equity preferred.

$5,000 to $250,000

Florida > Orlando

Like to give someone an opportunity to thrive just as I was once given an opportunity. There is greatness In all of us. 41 year old male out of Orlando FL. My experience is in running business such as construction/real estate and healthcare. I would be a silent parent and I'm an individual investor.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I am 39 yrs old, married with four wonderful children. I am the chief pilot and Instructor of an airline charter company in Fort Lauderdale, FL. I have a strong professional background and extensive experience in all facets of the aviation industry and I am looking to apply funds and expertise to help grow businesses connected to the industry. I am open to investing in other sectors but my preference is for businesses that have a focus on services rather than manufacturing.

$50,000 to $230,000

Florida > Ft Laudrdale

I am private investor from Switzerland. I have interest in development of multifamily housing and new technology in the construction field.

$1,000,000 to $8,000,000

Florida > Orlando

I am a nurse. I have a self-directed IRA. I have some done a handful of realty projects. Silent involvement. Individual investor.

$0 to $250,000

Florida > Orlando

I have over 13 plus years of Resort Timeshare management in various sales roles where I served as DOS and grow teams of 30 to well over 200 agents and middle management increased the sales from 13 million annually to 75+ plus million annually. Dealt with marketing budgets, events, sales budgets and daily operations of 300 employees in various sales supporting departments contracts, marketing etc. I am Active real estate investor in rehab projects and purchasing in non preforming mortgage notes. Interested in been a silent investor as well partnership where I can have input in growing the business. I am open to any field of business i do have a lot of knowledge in many other fields. As well interested in building logistic company with right partners.

$1,000 to $125,000

Florida > Fort Myers

Residing in Ft. Myers & Mpls, successful founder of a venture funded internet search engine software co. (Sold I.P.), Sr. Mgr. early stage biotech & cosmeceutical co. (raised significant institutional $, licensing deal, spin off, and sold), investment banking & corporate finance, active investor in startups and special situations. Advisor, mentor, board member, not afraid to get hands dirty to help.

$50,000 to $1,000,000