Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > St Petersburg

PhD with more than 20 years entrepreneur experience in scientific related business located in the Tampa Bay area. Interested in investing in innovative products and / or services. Can be advisory only or hands-on partner.

$1,000 to $500,000

Florida > Hialeah

I'm a Miami, Florida-based individual investor with a background in building contracting and a passion for supporting entrepreneurs. With an MBA and experience in construction, education, and real estate industries, I bring a unique perspective to investments. My academic background includes a Bachelor's degree in Engineering and an MBA, providing me with a solid foundation for understanding business dynamics. In my professional life, I've worked as a building contractor, honing my skills in project management, budgeting, and risk assessment. This experience has equipped me with the ability to evaluate business proposals from a practical standpoint, ensuring they have the potential for success. I've invested in several companies in the construction, education, and real estate sectors, and I've been involved in various capacities, from advisory roles to hands-on management. My goal is not just to provide capital but to also offer my expertise and network to help entrepreneurs succeed

$15,000 to $150,000

Florida > Saint Augustine

Been investing 10+ years. Background is entrepreneur and trading. private investor

$100,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Tampa

I am an investor who is willing to invest time and money in entrepreneurs who are motivated to be successful and watch their business grow. I have invested in one start-up company and it has taught me valuable knowledge regarding business startups. People who know me best say that I am very persuasive and analytical. I hope by utilizing all these skills I can fulfill my ultimate passion which would be to see new businesses flourish.

$1,000 to $5,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Long corporate selling experience in data technology. UF Grad in Business. Currently own two real estate investments, each producing strong cash flow. Relevant experience I can bring, how to sell, how to incorporate technology to streamline operations.

$0 to $200,000

Florida > Hollywood

I’m an active investor with a strong background in business development, operations, and scaling companies to their full potential. I focus on Florida-based businesses across tech, real estate, consumer services, and more. I offer more than just capital—I bring strategic insight, a powerful network, and a range of investment vehicles tailored to meet the unique needs of each business. I’m looking to partner with driven entrepreneurs who are serious about growth and ready to take their business to the next level.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Seminole

I am 47 years old and currently reside in Largo, Florida. I serve as a Branch Manager at a staffing agency in Tampa, FL. Over the course of my career, I have gained extensive experience in roles such as recruiter, account executive, client specialist, office manager, and Head of the People Department (HR). I hold a degree in Interior Design, am a certified notary, and have a passion for continuous learning and personal growth. I am a beginner in the world of investing and am eager to connect with like-minded individuals to collaboratively pursue opportunities that yield a strong return on investment (ROI). As a self-driven individual, I thrive on teamwork and am excited to embark on this new venture as an individual investor. I look forward to working with others who share a common goal of success and growth in the investment space.

$10,000 to $50,000

Florida > Orlando

A professional medical device executive in a fortune 100 company With multiple C-Suite connections. Expertise in quality improvements, cost efficiency, manufacturing, Engineering, strategy and project management/execution. PhD in polymer Physics. Masters in industrial and Medicinal Chemistry. Looking for investment opportunities with advisory/silent role. Some hands on possible based on investment

$10,000 to $500,000