Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Oviedo

Medical device executive and leadership for the past 20 years. Interested in unique opportunities that make a real difference in the lives of patients.

$5,000 to $25,000

Florida > North Redington Beach

An entrepreneurial-minded, seasoned and experienced Software Technology Investor and Project Manager with current investments in a host of mobile security software and enterprise software companies. Individual investor.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Miami

I am a 35 year old Dutch national, living with my fiance in Miami. 15+ years of international trade & business development experience from several top tier logistics companies within the freight forwarding industry. Inititated and experienced with several start up companies in trade, logistics and importer in The Netherlands. Hands-on, well connected worldwide within the logistics industry.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Miami

I am a new and up coming investor looking to do business with honest, dedicated and devoted people. My partner and I are located in the Miami area. We are interested in all kind of investment business especially new and developing real estate.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Winter Haven

I am a skilled software developer with a Bachelor's degree in Software Development from Universidad de las Ciencias Informáticas, La Habana, Cuba, attained in August 2014. My professional journey includes roles such as a Software Developer at companies like Magaya Corporation and International Market Center, where I developed scalable apps, integrated eCommerce platforms, and optimized systems for performance. I possess expertise in .Net Core, NodeJs, ReactJs, and have contributed to agile software development practices. Although I have not explicitly ventured into investment yet, my technical experience positions me well to understand and evaluate tech startups, especially those in the eCommerce and software sectors. I envision an advisory role, offering mentorship and leveraging contacts in the tech industry for strategic partnerships. Currently, my status is as an individual considering investment opportunities, seeking to collaborate with innovative businesses to drive growth

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Ft. Lauderdale

I am a 37 year old self made millionaire. I have a bachelor's degree from Florida State University and a law degree from Nova Southeastern University. I own a mid-sized law firm which I have grown from the ground up, as well as multiple properties. I have extensive experience in real estate as well as running and growing a business. I love to travel and experience new cultures and I am extremely receptive to new ideas. I have a very positive attitude and I am not closed minded. I have invested in other businesses before in the medical marijuana field and I am open to ideas that other investor's have shot down.

$2,000 to $40,000

Florida > Orlando

Serial entrepreneur having started a number of businesses over the last 23 years ranging from telecoms to more recently construction & renewable energy.

$25,000 to $300,000

Florida > Orlando

Global investor with deep knowledge of emergng markets

$0 to $1,000,000