Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Naples

I am an investor currently living in Naples, FL. I have background and experience in Horticulture/Greenhouse production as well as Microbreweries. I also deal with some real estate related investments. Looking to invest in business(es) that are either in pipeline/startup stage or existing and profitable. I am an individual and not an investment company/broker.

$1,000 to $700,000

Florida > Lauderhill

Investor seeking investments.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Jacksonville

39 years old male living in jacksonville Florida. I am an individual investor, Worked many years in restaurant business and owned few places. Latetly working on healthcare start up business and trading cryptocurrency. Degree in biology and architectural engineering. Looking to invest. Whether if it is advisory role or silent.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Sanford

Seasoned investor and investor representative. We invest in startups and mid growth companies across all industries. Looking for strong ideas with good growth potential.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Tampa

I work for a Fortune 500 company managing Global Sales Strategy and Performance . I manage and drive 9 digit sales figures annually with 20% growth this past year alone. Just recently began Angel and VC Fund investing. I am interested to help new technologies grow fast. I am well versed in business, sales, marketing, profit modeling. I truly enjoy assisting new growth companies maximize revenue and cash flow. Experienced with many market segments and application spaces in my current role. Main interests are Food Innovation, autonomous mobility, AR/VR, Health/Wellness/Medical application (preferably on the preventive side), wireless sensing, robotics.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Miami Beach

I have been working as an investment analyst for a Hedge Fund for the past 3 years. I have recently decided to become involved with my family business and we are looking to expand our operations through new investment opportunities.

$100,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Port St Lucie

Married w/2 children living in Southeast Florida. Current Entrepreneur of a Children's Boutique. MBA specializing in Accounting and Information Systems. 1st time investing in a business other than my own. Any type of involvement is fine. Individual investor.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Miami

I'm 43 years old. I live in Miami. I'm looking to invest with representation in the company. I don't want to be a silent investor. I'm an Electronic Engineer with more than 12 years in telecommunication experience. Right now I have a Corporation with 2 objectives, Freight Forward and mobile security surveillance.

$10,000 to $30,000