Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Pompano Beach

Seasoned analytics professional with 20+ years experience in healthcare and education sectors. Experience with building and motivating teams to become high performers. Special interest in building systems and processes to optimize repeatable tasks. Female, late-40's, living in Pompano Beach, Florida. Master's degree in education from Harvard University and bachelor's degree in Marketing from Virginia Tech. Individual investor and I expect to be in an advisory role.

$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Nokomis

We offer large capital contributions for existing, start up and emerging growth companies covering a wide array of industries. Our capital is non recourse and non collateral based in increments of $10,000,000 to $100,000,000 totaling $500,000,000 per client. Please note this is not traditional bank financing rather a unique and different approach to capital funding. We offer a streamlined process with an initial due diligence followed by project (or business) approval. A fair and reasonable equity position or a fee from the capital proceeds can be negotiated. Our relationship and funding source is with a U.S. based multi-billion dollar family office. We invite you to learn more about this funding process by contacting us.

$10,000,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Miami Beach

38, Biochemistry at MIT, MD at Ohio State. Now working on Wall Street. Very experienced

$25,000 to $500,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I am an individual investor, married, female, age 49. Pharmacist and Healthcare Management Specialist with 17 years of experience in the clinical laboratory field. My actual interest is investing in areas that promote and support the welfare of young people through education as a consequence of discrimination, mainly sex-based discrimination and related issues.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > St. Petersburg

Hands-on investor with experience in developing projects digitally and within real estate, from multi doors to industrial sites.

$20,000,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Green Cove Springs

Senior Executive with over 30 years of business experience in several different industries looking to invest in a business. Prefer existing business with revenues.

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Tampa

I am a 30 year old married guy. I live in Tampa, Fl. I am currently in pharmaceutical sales, but also am a co-owner of a PCR Genetic testing lab. I am a former college baseball player from Lubbock Christian University with a degree in sports management. I am very knowledgeable when it comes to sports and sports related investments. Depending on the industry, I feel like I am the right investor because I want to get the job done. And that job is how can we maximize our business to make the most money possible. I am interested in being a silent investor, but for the right opportunity, meaning I have expertise in it, then a hands on/advisory role is something I would be interested in as well. I would be an individual investor, but I have contacts all over the country that would invest in the right opportunity as well.

$5,000 to $25,000

Florida > Tampa

I represent a financial group focused on securing private investment funding for organizations within the oil and gas industry.Our principal backers maintain a billion dollar transaction portfolio with extensive experience in providing capital funding for development projects throughout the energy sector. Brief Summary of Our Capabilities: Robust and motivated capital backing network, Uncapped investment potential allowing us to match and surpass any state funded grants, Accessible funds primed for quick turnaround and Years of extensive Business Development experience.

$1,000,000 to $500,000,000