Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Delray Beach

Owner of Several successful companies in the substances abuse/mental health care industry. Looking to invest and expand in other facilities in the South Florida area. University of Colorado undergrad in Business Management. Past Investments in various industries in the range of 20-50,000k. Silent partner, advisory partner. Individual investor.

$20,000 to $100,000

Florida > Ft. Lauderdale

I am a 37 year old self made millionaire. I have a bachelor's degree from Florida State University and a law degree from Nova Southeastern University. I own a mid-sized law firm which I have grown from the ground up, as well as multiple properties. I have extensive experience in real estate as well as running and growing a business. I love to travel and experience new cultures and I am extremely receptive to new ideas. I have a very positive attitude and I am not closed minded. I have invested in other businesses before in the medical marijuana field and I am open to ideas that other investor's have shot down.

$2,000 to $40,000

Florida > Cape Coral

MBA with over thirty years of professional business and technical experience. Project funding specialist. Have funding sources for debt and equity. Active in Assisted Living Facilities, Skilled Nursing Facilities, apartments, hotels, real estate developments and waste to energy plants.

$10,000,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Odessa

My name is Carl Nicks. I'm 28 years old. I've been a professional athlete going on 7 years. I have a pretty good portfolio but really want to diversify it and hopefully join some of you in lucrative business opportunities. I won't act like I am a Shark from the tv show Shark Tank I do have common sense and I wouldn't be where I am without a little smarts. If u want to take your business to the next level or need some capital to get started I would be glad to listen.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I am 39 yrs old, married with four wonderful children. I am the chief pilot and Instructor of an airline charter company in Fort Lauderdale, FL. I have a strong professional background and extensive experience in all facets of the aviation industry and I am looking to apply funds and expertise to help grow businesses connected to the industry. I am open to investing in other sectors but my preference is for businesses that have a focus on services rather than manufacturing.

$50,000 to $230,000

Florida > Miami

Experience in the US and Latam markets.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Punta Gorda

I am a military Veteran living in SW FL who is a 40+ year old professional with an MBA, who has focused in manufacturing / logistics / supply chain over the past 20 years. I also hold a Lean Six Sigma Black belt and have been highly trained in multiple manufacturing and logistics principles. I have a technical background on top of my manufacturing / logistics / supply chain experience. I do expect to have a level of advisory involvement and reporting. However, I am not currently interested in being in the daily operations unless it was required due to the growth curve. I am not afraid to get my hands dirty.

$100 to $15,000

Florida > Palm Beach Gardens

I am a 38yr old individual currently living in Palm Beach County, FL. I have experience in corporate trust services, and helped managed several power plants in the energy industry. I'm now involved in a work from home business and looking to invest in other businesses as a silent investor or hands-on Invested if I'm trained.

$50,000 to $150,000