Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Orlando

Business consultant for over 40 years with extensive experiences in private offerings. Have owned multiple businesses, some have achieved IPO Acquisition or Merger status.

$250,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Weeki Wachee

I am looking to invest in a business that I wish I could create myself but do not have the time to start from scratch. I have a Master's in Applied Economics and I've been working in the financial sector since 2008. Growing and through 2014 I worked in a broad range of hospitality businesses and that's where my true interest remains. Combined with my hands on experience and technical background, I will invest in the business I think has the best potential and can provide feedback.

$1,000 to $30,000

Florida > Wellington

15 Years in Banking 10 Years in Corporate finance CFO of 18 small companies Looking for investments for a group of wealthy individuals that made their fortunes in Retail (Direct Response), low income housing, collection agencies, restaurants.

$20,000 to $200,000

Florida > Delray Beach

I am an entrepreneur that has started and acquired companies in vastly diverse industries (consumer goods manufacturing, transportation, landscaping and lending). I earned a BSBA from The Ohio State University with a triple major in marketing, finance and logistics. I am seeking investment opportunities (traditional and non-traditional). My non-traditional investments are associated with asset based lending and have the wherewithal to extend seven figures or more, if the deal fits my criteria. With respect to my involvement, that would depend on the needs of the company.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Palm Beach

A real estate developer from Montreal, Canada, re-locating to Florida looking for joint ventures and or partnerships.

$50,000 to $750,000

Florida > Cape Coral

SW Florida investor focusing on short term loans.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Alva

Young and successful e-commerce entrepreneur seeking to invest in high growth companies across a wide range of industries. I hold a bachelor's degree from UCF in Finance and Accounting and have over 14 years worth of experience in online commerce. Willing to invest up to $1 million.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Maitland

We structure each funding in a manner that takes into consideration the particular aspects and fundamentals of the Project / Business. Interest rates can range from 3.00% to 8.00% depending on a few factors. We can include part of the funding as equity if all parties agree this would enhance the performance of the Project / Business.You will need to have min 10% capital to add to project. Types of projects we look for are development, renovations, expansions and acquisitions. For international projects we start at $5,000,000 USD. USA projects we start at $500,000. After contract it will take 30-90 days to closing. If the Project has a construction loan / business phase that precedes permanent funding, then we would begin with a construction loan funding and then a roll into a permanent loan when construction phase is completed. Permanent loan can be from 5 years to 20 years in length. I hope this helps with your understanding of our process and general terms.

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000