Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Boynton Beach

Married with two young children in south Florida. Outside the box visionary with broad understanding to the needs of people, process and implementation for profit. Regular trips and doing business in Chicago, New York, Houston , North carolinaacross Florida. Ongoing investments in range of small business. Anticipated involvement multiple possibilities based on need and opportunity - limited hands-on, advisory, silent, etc. I am an individual investor that utilizes my executive team to analyze businesses, Land or Property to find opportunity of profit. This can be the development of land or property, Set up of a startup business, re structuring a current business to achieve its potential this may be done either through acquisition or on a consultation basis. Equity or debt.

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Delray Beach

Always looking for opportunities. Open minded.

$10 to $100,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I am an individual investor, married, female, age 49. Pharmacist and Healthcare Management Specialist with 17 years of experience in the clinical laboratory field. My actual interest is investing in areas that promote and support the welfare of young people through education as a consequence of discrimination, mainly sex-based discrimination and related issues.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > Miami

There are no upfront fees associated with our application and underwriting process. I provide funds with reasonable rates and flexible repayment schedules. With our merchant cash advance program, we provide an advance lump sum to you and a small percentage of your future credit card receivables is allocated as repayment for your loan. For business owners who do not use credit card processing, we offer unsecured business loans like our ACH loan program. In this case, payments are made through a daily deductions from your bank account, just like with direct deposit. Whatever type of business you operate, we have the loan solution you are looking for.

$5,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Miami

Successful Real Estate Developer and investor interested in start-ups where my international experience and entrepreneurial spirit can play a role on making a company expand internationally. 18 + years in Real Estate experience. Executive level at multinationals (JLL and CBRE- Heading Departments at National Level in Valuations & Advisory) and entrepreneur, serving as Board Member (non-exec) of a Pan-European REIT. Knowledge of commercial, residential, Hotels, Nursury Homes, Industrial & Logistics. Hands on, lots of people skills. In Florida. Spanish and English bilingual plus. MBA, Member of the Royal Institution of Chartered Surveyors with Harvard Real Estate Program. Started a Real Estate Development company and have successfully built and sold 6 residential buildings in the last 3 years. Would be interested to study investments in interesting real estate projects or start ups.

$150,000 to $500,000

Florida > Beverly Hills

I’m 45, happily married to my amazing wife, and based in Central Florida (where it’s always either sunny, raining, or both). I’m an individual investor, creative producer, and entrepreneur with hands-on experience building brands from idea to execution. I hold a BA in International Studies/Political Science (USF) and an MA in Ancient & Classical History (APUS). I’ve founded and grown projects like talent show, covering events, digital platforms, storytelling, and media production. My investment experience comes from creating, funding, and scaling my own ventures, blending strategy, marketing, content, and community building. I bring real-world execution, strong creative vision, and operational support, not just capital. My involvement varies from hands-on to advisory, depending on what founders need most. If you want an investor who truly builds with you, I’m your person.

$1 to $20,000

Florida > Jacksonville

Currently own a successful HVAC company in Jacksonville, FL

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Windermere

Private investor living in the beautiful city of Orlando, Florida. I'm a Sales consultant looking to invest in new and original projects. BoS in International Hospitality Management, I traveled all over Europe and North America. Fluent in 3 languages (English, French and Portuguese) and semi-proficient in 2 others (Spanish and Italian).

$1 to $1