Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Oldsmar

Have acquired and developed manufacturing services company with y/y growth of 25% and profitable every year. Sold to partner and went back to corporate America for 10 years. For the last three years enjoyed being an Entrepreneur and adviser to small and medium business owners who are working hard to achieve their dreams of building a successful company and growing their personal wealth. I have connections to a half dozen angels that look for good growth opportunities in a variety of different industries. I believe this site should provide some good deal flow.

$5,000 to $500,000

Florida > Jacksonville

MBA with a MSc in Industrial and Systems Engineering. Looking for disruptive technologies and opportunities.

$25,000 to $250,000

Florida > Bradenton

I am 58 yrs of age. I enjoy life in West Fl on the gulf. I was successful in starting from scratch a very profitable on-line electronic retail business & a very very profitable on-line business group which grew to be the worlds largest in its category. Sold both companies in 2011 totaling over 7mil. I consider myself a private Angel investor making my money work for me. I have invested experience in the real estate & auto industry looking to expand in any market as advisory or silent partner, must be profitable.

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Miami

Experienced entrepreneur and investor in multiple sectors. Successful working background in developing global brands, international expansion, franchising, product and brand licensing, celebrity agency, media + PR growth.

$75,000 to $25,000,000

Florida > Cape Coral

I work as an independent broker in Cape Coral, Florida. We provide funding for all types of businesses and various circumstances.

$250,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Miami

35years old entrepreneur looking for a business with great growth potential. Sold successfully 2 companies in South America in the financial markets industry. Hands on partner.

$100,000 to $250,000

Florida > Hollywood

Married 37 years. 2 daughters, 2 grand kids. College degree: two years BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION, Mexico. Business experience: Owner, Vice president: Plastic container manufacturing company, Mexico, city. Move to EUA August 1984. Owner, President: Imports company. Toys, Gifts from Far East into EUA, Wholesale, Retail, Distribution. Owner, President: Three stores retail operation. Luggage and travel accessories. Miami, Fl. Family investment in: Automobile Dealerships. Mexico city. Owner, president: Small distribution sunglasses and reading glasses. Passion for family. Passion for automobiles in every form. Specially Formula One racing. Trying to come back from semi-retirement

$5,000,000 to $20,000,000

Florida > Miami

We are a family office located in Miami, FL. We have successfully created several businesses throughout the last 60 years and would like to help others in the community do so as well. We have expertise in the following industries: supermarkets, retail, real estate, tire wholesale/distribution, banking, insurance, real estate development, auto industry, technology, fitness, sports, agriculture, and more. From start-ups, to turn around's. We have a vast network and resources to help any business succeed. We sold one of our companies, Associated Grocers of Florida in 2017 to Supervalu for $193 million. In 2011, our Tire Group International Inc. (TGI) partnered with Transportation Resource Partners (TRP) and the McLarty Companies. In 1999, our Ready State Bank was sold to Union Planters Bank . The deal, worth $600 million in assets. Our group includes successful business individuals with MBA's and members of the FIU Business School Hall of Fame. Advisory or hands on.

$100,000 to $5,000,000