Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Lakeland

Logistics, Transportation & Warehousing Executive and Real Estate Investor

$100 to $500,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

Our company interested in investing up to $10 million in clients’ Supply Chains. As an alternative solution, we provide funding options for multiple organizations in multiple industries. We invest in qualified growing SME’s who have been in business for at least 2 years and maintain a central management. We follow strict KYC and AML regulations in order to secure our investment and minimize our risk. We are a group of dedicated employees looking to enrich our economy and ecosystem, we work hard to find the perfect funding solution for our clients.

$250,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Real estate investor looking for new opportunities

$1 to $600,000

Florida > Englewood

I am a retired executive who worked in the environmental services industry for more than 30 years. I was responsible for the management of multiple facilities and operations with annual budgets exceeding $70 million and more than 200 employees. My wife and I have been looking for the right small business to to either start-up or purchase, but have not been suuccessful because most opportunities would not allow us to travel to visit our children as we desire. Investing in another entrepreneur's business or idea is the logical alternative. We are open-minded regarding our level of involvement in the right opportunity, from hands-on engagement to completely silent.

$1,000 to $200,000

Florida > Winter Park

I live in Orlando, FL. I have a Masters in Mechanical Engineering background and I have a great experience in engineering and technology in aerospace. I am also a hands-on guy when it comes to fixing houses.

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > Tallahassee

Married 42 year old mother of six in Florida, including triplets. Currently a real estate investor, was a former residential and commercial lender for 15 years, a VP in financial institution, prior cosmetic boutique owner and former partner in a lobbying and consulting business. I hold a real estate license, BS in Finance, MBA, an energetic open mind, and passion for fitness. I recently moved to a warmer climate, sold investments in former town, and looking for a new opportunity either as silent investor or hands on.

$1,000 to $200,000

Florida > Parkland

Own a merchant banking company. Specialize in small growth companies. Take Companies public. Have over 10 years experience doing financings and taking companies public. Work with groups of investors and institutions as well.

$10,000,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Gulfport

Real estate acquisitions manager. Looking to invest in real estate.

$30,000 to $50,000