Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Parkland

Own a merchant banking company. Specialize in small growth companies. Take Companies public. Have over 10 years experience doing financings and taking companies public. Work with groups of investors and institutions as well.

$10,000,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Winston

I'm an owner of a private investment company that has a diverse portfolio of holdings ranging from notes/loans/deeds/liens to start up ventures. Some investments under the SEC CF-reg A or title II/III act. I'm strictly an arms length investor, except FL. tax liens auctions. I believe in investing back into local community, its what made this country gr8.

$1 to $25,000

Florida > Tampa

I represent a financial group focused on securing private investment funding for organizations within the oil and gas industry.Our principal backers maintain a billion dollar transaction portfolio with extensive experience in providing capital funding for development projects throughout the energy sector. Brief Summary of Our Capabilities: Robust and motivated capital backing network, Uncapped investment potential allowing us to match and surpass any state funded grants, Accessible funds primed for quick turnaround and Years of extensive Business Development experience.

$1,000,000 to $500,000,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

Our professional experienced staff assist startups, existing business, and entrepreneurs to acquire the funding needed to get your business or idea up and running. We only deal with ACCREDITED CERTIFIED INVESTORS. Founded in 2010. After seeking funding of $23MM for my yacht manufacturing business over the course of 6 years and learning all the aspects of what investors look for in a viable investment and the information to be included in a professional Executive Summary, Business Plan and Proforma to clearly convey the concept and scope of the project for funding, I now pass this knowledge onto the first-time entrepreneurs to assist them in fine-tuning of their Business Plan package and to connect them with QUALIFIED, ACCREDITED, LEGALLY REGISTERED INVESTORS.

$5,000,000 to $90,000,000

Florida > Jacksonville

Successful entrepreneur in the fresh food packaging industry marketing to fast food companies, supermarket bakeries and delis, Strong advocate of environmentally friendly opportunities. A keen understanding on how to add value to services and product in very competitive markets.

$10,000 to $20,000

Florida > New Port Richey

I am a 48 year old that is married with 1 child. I'm currently in the IT field with an extensive background in Application Hosting and Security. I have been with the same company for 19 years. I own my own small business Web hosting Company and another Mobile Marine Engine Repair and Survey company. I have experience in the automotive and marine industries. I have restored many boats in the past 20 years all the way from restringing, conversion of io/inboards, Awlgrip/Awlcraft painting and have my work recognized by Chris Craft. I am currently vested in a marine company and am a reseller for a marine company. I have alot of experience in the Marine industry. I do not anticipate to have much involvement except for financial investment at this time.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Casselberry

Middle aged professional with 20 years experience growing and optimizing startup to growth phase companies.

$0 to $10,000,000

Florida > Tampa

37 year old Marine Corps Veteran and Corporate professional with over 10 years leading teams and initiatives on a global scale. Looking for silent or advisory investment opportunities.

$5,000 to $50,000