Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Brooksville

60-y/o multi-disciplinary engineer, former wunderkind, Mensan, libertarian, entrepreneur, founder, worker, consultant, contractor, tutor, etc. I have a physical limitation. I work from home, doing remote consulting work. Any work I do is covered by strong NDAs and my internal process controls. I've never had an incident violating confidentiality. I attended Fairfield University in the 70s, graduated high school in the 80s and attended UCONN, Cornell, SUNY, and others. In the 90s I occasionally tutored MCAT, LSAT, etc. I've invested in projects ranging in size from 'lemonade stands' to 'oil wells'. I've received investment & generated superior returns. Assume that I completely understand your project within 5 minutes of discussing it. If our discussions reach the fifteen minute mark, assume I'm interested. If I offer services, you are not ready for $$$. Do not take that as rejection, especially if offer them for equity. I'll can help you become investment ready. I AM SMART MONEY

$0 to $250,000

Florida > Marathon Shores

Realtor Broker and entrepreneur/investor since 1988.

$100,000 to $2,500,000

Florida > Gibsonton

Looking for something fun to invest in. Would be willing to help but would prefer to be mostly hands off. Looking for other hard working people that enjoy being part of team..

$10,000 to $200,000

Florida > Riverview

Previously started a company from the ground and ran it for three years. I had over 35 employees and recently sold it due to the recession. Money owed was not coming in fast enough.

$500 to $100,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

Our company brings a wide range of diverse business experience and seasoned management knowledge to bear on advising a client company. With decades of both domestic and international assignments behind them, especially in the finance and natural resources sector, the Partners can provide a wide spectrum of solutions regarding equity and debt financing.

$250,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Matlacha

Looking for entreprenuerial opportunities, especially in Florida. Accomplished executive in the information services industry, with 22 years of experience and a proven, entrepreneurial track record in all aspects of both large and small businesses. Has held a number of global leadership roles including: CEO of a venture-backed research and information services company; Senior Vice President responsible for developing new lines of business at a major information services provider, and Asia/Pacific Managing Director across 14 regional markets. Prefer hands-on, mentor involvement.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Clearwater

Investor with ownership in 3 businesses. Seeking stable companies with positive cash flow to assist with capital.

$5,000 to $350,000

Florida > Winter Park

In my fifties located in Florida experienced in management, acquisitions, startup projects, technology, and finance looking to invest up to $150k and seeking equity return as silent or active depending on business type. Can also help with business planning, startup vs. acquisition analysis, growth strategies, risk mitigation, bank financing, and commercial real estate if applicable.

$10,000 to $150,000