Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Sarasota

I am a mid-30s, hungry investor located on the west coast of Florida, with ties to the northeast (tri-state area). My preference is to be involved (advisory or hands-on) in some capacity with the right investment and the right people, in order to leverage my skill-set and experience to best serve the company. My expertise is in financial markets, health care, technology, and operational and financial management. I have held CFO and COO titles in varying capacities, and my education is from a well-renowned institution. I have experience investing in individual companies as well as financial markets. I represent myself as the investor, but can also bring others into the fold for the proper opportunity.

$0 to $1,000,001

Florida > Bradenton

I am 58 yrs of age. I enjoy life in West Fl on the gulf. I was successful in starting from scratch a very profitable on-line electronic retail business & a very very profitable on-line business group which grew to be the worlds largest in its category. Sold both companies in 2011 totaling over 7mil. I consider myself a private Angel investor making my money work for me. I have invested experience in the real estate & auto industry looking to expand in any market as advisory or silent partner, must be profitable.

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Orlando

I am investing for a private group.

$1 to $100,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

Former analyst in the alternatives group at a multi billion dollar firm. Current analyst for a firm whose clients are Credit Value Hedge Funds. Bachelors Degree in Economics/Finance from Florida State, CFA candidate, looking to make at this time a nominal equity investment in a great startup or existing venture that has rapidly growing sales and matching demand for it's product or service.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Land O Lakes

Looking to invest in great ideas. I am an individual investor that can be hands on or relay on your expertise.

$20,000 to $50,000

Florida > Miami

We are a married couple from Denmark, succes fully running own company in Miami. Sanela (age 31) is a female Global Business Engineer and Morten (age 46) is a Entrepreneur in the real estate business. We are looking for a investment-project where we can contribute actively besides financial capital. We would prefer a partnership.

$10,000 to $500,000

Florida > St. Augustine

I'm single and living Jacksonville, Florida. I am a professional Mariner (currently chief engineer) and have been for the last 20 years with 9 years prior Military. Haven't invested in anything yet, but have some capital to make an investment with the right company, group or project. Looking to be a silent partner as an individual investor.

$10,000 to $25,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Merger and Acquisition Advisory Firm with 25 years of experience. Extensive contacts with HNW individuals, PE Firms, Hedge Funds, Bank and Non-Bank Lending and more. Non-exclusive, success fee only agreements.

$500,000 to $50,000,000