Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Clearwater

I'm an outgoing mechanical and marine engineer who has sales and service industry experience. I am located in Florida and looking to invest in businesses and people that are hard working, goal driven, and passionate about what they're doing and what they want to achieve. Hopefully together we can achieve those goals and more.

$0 to $35,000

Florida > Longwood

Individual investor: finance/accounting professional in Central FL area looking to diversify investments as well as have the opportunity to participate in startups and small business; helping others while realizing a good return on capital. Post-graduate in Business/Accounting, 20 yrs experience as professional accountant from Big 4 through nuclear pharmacy and Fortune 15 telecom. Financial reporting experience can be provided as needed, as well as roll- up-my-sleeves financial consulting if warranted; level of involvement depends entirely upon the investment and the parties' preferences, ranging from hands-on to silent.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Tallahassee

In the process of building an investment fund for family/friends.

$100 to $500,000

Florida > North Lauderdale

Currently a manager at a call center for the past 11 years in tech support and customer service. Prior to now, occupied executive positions in both the government and private sector including holding the position of Vice President in the manufacture association as well as director in chambers of commerce. Graduate and participant of several post graduate training at universities and specialized financial institutions such as the EIB of Singapore Georgetown university and IMF in Washington. Was chairman and director at several government corporations and travel extensively to several countries to negotiate business opportunities.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Spring Hill

Private investor

$2,000,000 to $25,000,000

Florida > Miami

I am an individual investor, with expertise in healthcare and biotechnology and an interest in agriculture and the environment. I am looking to make small investments only at this time and would prefer an advisory role at most.

$0 to $15,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Private investor with extensive experience in investment, and business management. Currently own and directly oversee three successful businesses ranging from Commercial R/E, Software Development, and Automotive After-market Chemical Manufacturing & Distribution.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Plantation

I'm currently married with 4 children and a beautiful wife and am currently living in Sunrise, FL. I have got many people the money they needed with many different scenarios presented. I am looking for anyone that needs money for anything, I review the risks/reward and will let you know how much I can cover for what you need. I have a very quick and simple process and depending on the investment type, I can get you the money you need anywhere between 1-3 days which gives us time to conduct due diligence. Once I have my hands on your proposal, I can give you an answer the SAME DAY! There is no specific type of industry to invest in, as long as you have the ability to repay and it is a sound investment, you can have the money.

$10,000 to $100,000,000