Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Deerfield Beach

Business owner for 13+ years. Expertise in delivery and warehousing. Individual investor.

$100,000 to $200,000

Florida > Jacksonville

I am a private investor whose main goal in the investment world is to help all new and seasoned entrepreneurs reach their goals without the stress of lack of funding. With our funding, you will find the best terms available to you. We have been funding businesses for over 5 years and we're good at it. Let us fund your business and you'll see what we mean!

$10 to $100,000

Florida > Cantonment

Realtor with interest in real estate projects.

$450 to $3,000,000

Florida > Miami

36, married, live in Miami. I have 2 masters degrees, first in geology and the second in international trade and transport. I’m a chartering manager in the dry bulk shipping industry.

$1,000 to $60,000

Florida > Jacksonville

We are an investor, finder and funder for investment acquisitions, expansion and leverage. Our goal is to get you the funding if you are a good fit for our portfolio or our investors portfolio. Our group loves investments that are already cash flowing and sometimes we can offer a loan, line of credit or an advance instead of owning a stake in your company however its best to structure our agreement. Contact us to have thepossibility of having access to $40M plus. We also can acquire the entire business if needed and if it fits our mission.

$2,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Tampa

- Multiple deals currently involved in as a passive investor - Founding Member of New World Angels, Tampa Bay - 6 years in a Fortune 1000 company in a Sr. position - MBA in Marketing & Finance

$5,000 to $200,000

Florida > Hollywood

Invest in an independent automotive dealership holding customer notes. Been an investor in the automotive industry for 25 years lending money to high risk customers. I am a private investor that sets up a lump sum into a portfolio and funds loans from that source. Need to see a detailed business plan, cost of overhead insurances and lease. Not looking to loan money out to open a business. I am a high risk note lender.

$30,000 to $150,000,000

Florida > Palm Beach Gardens

I am a Licensed GC and Realtor in Florida, executive VP of Operations and business owner. I am looking for scalable market disruptor products and real estate opportunities. I can be a silent partner or fill advisory role.

$10,000 to $75,000