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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Lakeland

I am a corporate lawyer in Lakeland, FL. We are a hybrid law firm, in that we provide legal services as well as business advice. I worked as a supply-chain management consultant, financial analyst, and senior acquisition analyst prior to entering law school. In my time as an attorney, I have aided hundreds of businesses throughout the business cycle, including the successful purchase and sale of businesses totaling more than $300MM in enterprise value.

$3,000 to $200,000

Florida > Fort Myers

Established entrepreneur who has made enough money to invest in other Entrepreneurs. 39 year old, married with 2 children, living in Southwest, Florida. I currently own two businesses in Southwest Florida. I would like to be a silent investor.

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > Orlando

I am an accomplished management professional, boasting a rich background encompassing business, construction, medical device development, and military leadership. As President of a holding company, I seek to propel growth and market expansion via strategic acquisitions, capitalizing on my proficiency in market research, financial modeling, and negotiation. Formerly, I founded the premier aquatics services provider in Greater Orlando. My leadership steered a threefold business growth in four years, culminating in its acquisition by a national pool service company. With an MBA from Florida Institute of Technology and a BS in Industrial Technology from the University of Nebraska, I wield a robust educational foundation. I hold designations as a Certified General Contractor (CGC), Certified Pool/Spa Contractor (CPC), and Microsoft Certified Systems Engineer (MCSE), underscoring my dedication to industry standards.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Orlando

Business consultant for over 40 years with extensive experiences in private offerings. Have owned multiple businesses, some have achieved IPO Acquisition or Merger status.

$250,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Lakeland

I have experience in Marketing for 10 years. Degrees in Marketing, Finance, and Project Management. Silent Partner, Individual. Located in Lakeland, FL

$25,000 to $100,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

Our company interested in investing up to $10 million in clients’ Supply Chains. As an alternative solution, we provide funding options for multiple organizations in multiple industries. We invest in qualified growing SME’s who have been in business for at least 2 years and maintain a central management. We follow strict KYC and AML regulations in order to secure our investment and minimize our risk. We are a group of dedicated employees looking to enrich our economy and ecosystem, we work hard to find the perfect funding solution for our clients.

$250,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Miami Beach

I have been working in the tech industry for the last 20 years. Passionate about programming and performance marketing. In the last years, I have worked as a consultant and helped various companies to go from negative to a 6 figures net income.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Aventura

Commercial Attorney for 15 years Launched and sold successful start up Executive with Fortune 500 companies

$100,000 to $1,500,000