Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Palm City

Have invested in publishing & industrial trade shows in USA, South America, South Africa; financial businesses in USA, incl. start up banking; direct mail advertising Editor and Publisher of trade publications; executive director of several industrial trade associations; currently serving as director of multiple location local bank; served on numerous for-profit and non-profit companies and organizations; currently manage a small portfolio of private residential mortgages and a small thoroughbred horse racing and breeding operation Private investor

$2,500 to $100,000

Florida > Miami

We are a family office that invests in private equity. We own several companies. Some outright, others between 25-60% ownership. We are interested in profitable and rapidly growing companies. We do not invest in companies that have no revenue. If a company is not breaking even we rarely consider with very few exceptions. We look for businesses that are profitable and could use a lot of capital to scale their profitable business.

$250,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Bell

I am a semi-retired entrepreneur looking to divest of stock and bond market risk and invest in and help manage residential real estate opportunities in the State of Florida. I have always had good instincts in sourcing and adding value to underutilized properties, and have done this consistently over a 25 year period. However, I am at a point where I would like to leverage both capital and resources and explore this opportunity on a more full-time basis. I have an MBA in Finance & Marketing and have used both skills working with both large corporations and small businesses. I'm looking to invest $50,000-$100,000 on a per project basis and would anticipate a minimal 30% return over a 2 year period. I live in North Central Florida, but am in Central Florida (Tampa area) on a regular basis.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > Davie

We provide Hard Money Mortgages throughout the state of Florida. No games, Fast answers and the results you expect.

$100,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Parkland

I live in Parkland, Florida with my wife, Amanda and our two young children. I am a tax expert, entrepreneur and investor.

$25,000 to $2,500,000

Florida > Panama City Beach

I'm a 37 y/o entrepreneur, married for 17 years with 2 teenagers who has started multiple small business' with a successful recent sale of one of them in the technology/I.T. industry. I have a 5-year non-compete (3 years, 10 months left) in that field and am looking to get involved in another type of business. Real estate investment being the preferred. I own rental properties in Northern, VA. & Panama City beach, Florida and have a gift for rehabbing properties. 20 years of experience managing contractors and builders to ensure proper installation practices occur.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Oldsmar

Investment group looking for opportunities nationwide in the $1,000,000 to $50,000,000 range. Trucking, Transportation, Logistics, Distribution, Warehousing.

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Naples

I’ve held senior leadership positions in IT/Technology for Auto MFG, Life Science, CPG, Aerospace and Defense and Media industries. I primarily worked with fortune 100 and 500 companies throughout my career and I understand how large companies function. I am moving on in my career and have decided to use the knowledge and experience I have gained over the past 20 years to assist and invest in start ups, innovation/invention - just good ideas and companies that make sense and fill a need. I have an extensive network in multiple disciplines and will leverage my network as required.

$5,000 to $100,000