Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tampa

Accredited investor based in Tampa, Florida. Expertise and experience in Hotel Management.

$1,000,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Englewood

I am a retired executive who worked in the environmental services industry for more than 30 years. I was responsible for the management of multiple facilities and operations with annual budgets exceeding $70 million and more than 200 employees. My wife and I have been looking for the right small business to to either start-up or purchase, but have not been suuccessful because most opportunities would not allow us to travel to visit our children as we desire. Investing in another entrepreneur's business or idea is the logical alternative. We are open-minded regarding our level of involvement in the right opportunity, from hands-on engagement to completely silent.

$1,000 to $200,000

Florida > Parkland

I live in Parkland with my wife and 3 daughters. I am partial toward women lead / owned businesses looking for investment capital, advise or leadership. I currently lead a 100M business and have built finance marketing operations teams to run the business. I believe that people are the most important asset to your business. I am looking to make an impact and help drive your business to the next level.

$1,000 to $150,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

Founded and sold a telecomm products manufacturing business that grew to over 400 people. Have founded 8 startup companies. Holds 10 patents. Awarded lifetime achievements in Engineering award from attended University. Background in wired and wireless communications, energy conservation products, IOT, cloud computing, real time online transaction processing, R&D, product management, operating high tech businesses, partnerships, business plans, capital raising, and conceiving and delivering innovative out-of-the-box product concepts and ideas.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > Orlando

Over 50 years old, business owner, married 35 years, Master's degree in Healthcare Administration. Owned several businesses in the past and currently. Silent business partner opportunity. Individual investor.

$10,000 to $75,000

Florida > Jacksonville

Experienced investor and business owner looking to expand portfolio. Interested both in hands off and hands on projects. Extensive business and marketing experience. Ready to invest in risky projects, businesses going through hard times and startups.

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Parkland

Own a merchant banking company. Specialize in small growth companies. Take Companies public. Have over 10 years experience doing financings and taking companies public. Work with groups of investors and institutions as well.

$10,000,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Miami

I am a general contractor. Over the years have built some equity. I started flipping houses about 2 years ago and it has been a great deal until now that there's more demand than supply and it's getting really hard to find a good deal. I have all of my knowledge in construction. Also my past experience was in the freight trucking business which I haven't dealt with over 10 years but I am open to all investment opportunities.

$50,000 to $400,000