Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tampa

Investment banking and finance experience.

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Longwood

Currently CEO of a $1B global travel company, which was recently sold to a large PE firm. Looking for interesting investment opportunities.

$50,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Odessa

My name is carl nicks. I am a 29 year old professional athlete. I have done well for myself and want a more hands on role on managing and diversifying my portfolio. Let me make it clear and easy for u to understand. In no way am I an expert investor. I have no high power connections nor do I know a lot about investing. What I do have is money and a strong will to succeed. Not to mention I've seen every episode of shark tank. If you feel like you have a good product and or business and the only reason you haven't succeeded is because you don't have the capital then I could possibly be the man for you. If it makes sense and you have a business plan that makes sense we can possibly make each other a nice profit. I also would consider myself a silent partner not stepping on any toes. I look forward to doing business with u in the future.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Lakeland

Work as shop manager for an engineering construction and fabrication company. I'm an individual investor looking for an opportunity to help someone build a business and make some money while doing it.

$5,000 to $25,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Over 20 years experience in investing in small companies

$100,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Palm Beach Gardens

I have 25+ years experience of selling Industrial Products mainly in Printing & Packaging Industries. I am looking to diversify and am interested in new Ideas & ventures for a mutual beneficial association.

$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Pompano Beach

Our investment group funds oil & gas projects.

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Jacksonville

We are a private family office that invests in public and private equities, venture capital opportunities and real estate. We are interested in acquiring majority interests or outright purchases of privately held enterprises in the small to middle market. We seek business’s with strong management in place and have shown proven track records of success. We work closely with management teams to foster strong and independent companies. We look to invest and engage in a broad range of investment activities and our objective is to take an active role in the operational and strategic futures of our investments. We are interested in companies or real estate that are located in the southeast region of the U.S.

$0 to $1,000,000