Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Clearwater

I'm an outgoing mechanical and marine engineer who has sales and service industry experience. I am located in Florida and looking to invest in businesses and people that are hard working, goal driven, and passionate about what they're doing and what they want to achieve. Hopefully together we can achieve those goals and more.

$0 to $35,000

Florida > Parkland

I am currently in the hotel and restaurant industry, focusing on extensive digital marketing and sales. I am looking to get involved with someone to jointly invest and manage something into the craft beer scene with someone here in South Florida. A craft beer bar would be ideal. I have extensive marketing experience to launch a business.

$25,000 to $100,000

Florida > Doral

Semi retired contractor-supplier, civil engineer (1985). Experience in automation and stock market. Individual investor.

$10,000 to $150,000

Florida > Lakeland

I am a corporate lawyer in Lakeland, FL. We are a hybrid law firm, in that we provide legal services as well as business advice. I worked as a supply-chain management consultant, financial analyst, and senior acquisition analyst prior to entering law school. In my time as an attorney, I have aided hundreds of businesses throughout the business cycle, including the successful purchase and sale of businesses totaling more than $300MM in enterprise value.

$3,000 to $200,000

Florida > Jupiter

I am a property manager right now and in process of getting my real estate license. I had flipped houses in the past and really enjoyed it. I am looking for another investor/business owner to continue and grow in the real estate business. I also have a master in applied mathematics, so I enjoy science. I would love to invest in medical research as well.

$10,000 to $50,000

Florida > Palm Beach Gardens

I am a 38yr old individual currently living in Palm Beach County, FL. I have experience in corporate trust services, and helped managed several power plants in the energy industry. I'm now involved in a work from home business and looking to invest in other businesses as a silent investor or hands-on Invested if I'm trained.

$50,000 to $150,000

Florida > Windermere

I'm a 40 y/o entrepreneur, Married 2 kids who lives in the Orlando area. I started a technology/finance company in 2003 in NYC. I have minimal experience investing in other companies. I have good experience in the finance and technology areas and understand how to make companies successful. I'm interested in a hands-on or advisory role. I am an individual investor

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Miami

I am a 54-year-old US Army veteran with experience in operations management, project management, and program management. I have always focused strongly on data-supported, scientific-method business analysis for strategic decision-making.

$0 to $25,000