Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I am an individual investor, married, female, age 49. Pharmacist and Healthcare Management Specialist with 17 years of experience in the clinical laboratory field. My actual interest is investing in areas that promote and support the welfare of young people through education as a consequence of discrimination, mainly sex-based discrimination and related issues.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

I'm an Executive Search and Talent Strategiest with over 10 years in the media, marketing, advertising, and technology space. I've worked with early and growth stage companies. I've invested in Real Estate Development as well as early stage Cannabis businesses. I'm interested in expanding my portfolio of investments, as well as help to provide my expertise to founders as they grow their business.

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > St Petersburg

40 year old entrepreneur with more than 20 years of experience looking for innovative products, services or solutions. STEM and scientific background, PhD, MBA. Can be fully involved or silent partner.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Boca Raton

For more than 25 years, our Investment Association has provided the highest quality of investment advice and practical financial equity solutions to the emerging firm. Our interests lie in not only investments in high-tech firms but low-tech developing firms as well. To be an attractive investment vehicle to our Association the investment targets must be able to promise and deliver a rate of return that is more attractive than those available in markets for publicly traded stocks and other securities.

$50,000 to $2,500,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Chairman and president of a Boca Raton, Florida-based merchant and investment-banking firm. FBA provides the following services to clients: 1) M&A: Confidential representation of mid-market companies (sales in excess of $10 million or earnings in excess of $1 million) seeking sale or recapitalization. FBA can provide confidential introductions to buyers, investors.and other resources 2) Renewable & Conventional Energy: FBA is active across the energy spectrum including large project finance. 3) REAL ESTATE: FBA represents clients seeking the acquisition or divestiture of major commercial real estate. 4) CONSULTING & ADVISORY: As a nationally recognized business strategist, FBA provides consulting or advisory services at the board or CEO level for selected clients.

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

I have made four people millionaires. I sold my business in 1998 and have since looked at several angel opportunities and have invested in four. One of these was very successful, one is still being developed and two did not succeed. I have learned that the more I am able to know what is going on and the more the founder(s) are willing to learn from my 50 years of business experience to help, the better the chance of our success. All prospects must pass a complete background check.

$15,000 to $250,000

Florida > St. Petersburg

I work with Private Investors to fund major film projects and real estate investments. I work with people who have funds internationally and in the US. My investors look for a minimum of 20% return. We do Angel funds on some projects and investments in other ventures. I am always looking for new investors to help. My investors like to remain silent partners in most of the ventures. They are Millionaire and Billionaire types, high profile and very private.

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Bronson

Engineer with 30+ years of experience in designing Large scale Water Treatment Plants. Continuous innovation in improving the system performance and capital investments needed to solve a problem. Key strength is thinking outside the box and coming up with solutions that consistently delivered more customer orders for the company I worked for

$5,000 to $20,000