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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Daytona Beach

I am looking for a company to invest money for their services. I want to be hands off. I would like to invest in night clubs, construction, online, and many more. i just want to invest and make a nice return.

$10,000 to $25,000

Florida > Palm Harbor

I'm 38 years old, Single, located in Palm Harbor Florida. I'm a District Chief for a local fire department for the last 15 years. My highest level of education is a Master's degree in Public Administration. Having led crews on the fireground and managed diverse personnel at the fire station, I've developed leadership skills, training skills, and conflict resolution skills. I've helped develop all sorts of programs for our department and oversaw the logistics and finances associated with those programs. The vast majority of my informal education has been around leadership and developing/mentoring people. Mission First/People Always. I'm looking to move my skills into the private sector as an individual investor. I believe the type of investment will dictate the level of involvement I'd have, so I'm open to silent, advisory, and hands-on involvement. My work schedule is incredibly flexible, so I can dedicate time to a business venture if need be.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Pembroke Pines

Hello, full-time IT Manager who is also a real estate investor in MI, NC, and FL. Accounting and Supply Chain Managment background with MBA from Big Ten. Looking to partner and/or investor in great companies.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Palm City

Have invested in publishing & industrial trade shows in USA, South America, South Africa; financial businesses in USA, incl. start up banking; direct mail advertising Editor and Publisher of trade publications; executive director of several industrial trade associations; currently serving as director of multiple location local bank; served on numerous for-profit and non-profit companies and organizations; currently manage a small portfolio of private residential mortgages and a small thoroughbred horse racing and breeding operation Private investor

$2,500 to $100,000

Florida > Tampa

Vice President of Strategy and Development at a private equity firm where he oversees deal flow origination and works directly with executive leadership of acquired companies to drive the professionalization and profitability of their organizations. Education includes Master of Science in Business Analytics, Master of Science in Finance, Bachelor of Business Administration in Finance and Bachelor of Arts degree in Economics from the Cox School of Business at Southern Methodist University.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Orlando

I’m interested in finding early stage companies that need both capital and some level of management help.

$10,000 to $500,000

Florida > Marco Island

Private equity firm that specializes in Business with cash flow. All family money under management. Also own a 50 state mortgage lender with full FHA , FNMA , Freddie Mac authority for 23 years and started three national title companies. My main passion is in origination and underwriting

$25,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Boca Raton

I am a money motivated individual. I am a master at sales with over 15 years of experience. I own a handful of companies and am looking to expand my portfolio. I am open to being hands on or silent depending on the deal.

$1,000 to $100,000