Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Oakland Park

I have an MBA with concentration in Finance. My areas of interest and specialty is project finance and development. I have worked overseas with companies looking to finance their various projects. I continue to seek opportunities in working with established businesses and start-ups to achieve their funding needs.

$5,000,000 to $200,000,000

Florida > Rockledge

57, married, Rockledge, FL. While in grad school I was involved with SBIR projects. I joined a biosensor startup, ultimately sold them as a viscosity sensor company, and began working in wireless sensors. My partner and I were the first company to repay Maine Technology Institute's seed loans. I am now VP of R&D of a technology company serving the electric power industry and I havea senior engineering role to a startup company in which I am invested. I am making small seed investments from a self-directed IRA and I am interested in startups that I can help in some way, but I am not adverse to silent investment for the right deal. I have a 5 to 15 year perspective because of this, but quicker turnover is great. Investments to date are Helios Hockey, Insurgical, Knightscope, Liquid Piston, and Bonsi.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Tampa

Vice President of Strategy and Development at a private equity firm where he oversees deal flow origination and works directly with executive leadership of acquired companies to drive the professionalization and profitability of their organizations. Education includes Master of Science in Business Analytics, Master of Science in Finance, Bachelor of Business Administration in Finance and Bachelor of Arts degree in Economics from the Cox School of Business at Southern Methodist University.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Lakeland

I have experience in Marketing for 10 years. Degrees in Marketing, Finance, and Project Management. Silent Partner, Individual. Located in Lakeland, FL

$25,000 to $100,000

Florida > Sarasota

40 years’ business experience. Held various senior management positions (CFO, COO). Owned and operated several companies. Counseled and raised funds for start-ups and small businesses. Hands-on exposure to business relocations, turnarounds, business acquisitions, and plant closings. Orchestrated successful IPO. Companies include: Pfizer, Emerson Electric, ITT, Huntington National Bank, Scotts Miracle-Gro, Erbamont NV, Bigmar Pharmaceuticals, and Manex Entertainment. Not looking for consulting gig - only interested in taking active role along side any investment. BS Economics; MBA; Veteran.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > St. Augustine

I'm single and living Jacksonville, Florida. I am a professional Mariner (currently chief engineer) and have been for the last 20 years with 9 years prior Military. Haven't invested in anything yet, but have some capital to make an investment with the right company, group or project. Looking to be a silent partner as an individual investor.

$10,000 to $25,000

Florida > Winter Haven

I am a skilled software developer with a Bachelor's degree in Software Development from Universidad de las Ciencias Informáticas, La Habana, Cuba, attained in August 2014. My professional journey includes roles such as a Software Developer at companies like Magaya Corporation and International Market Center, where I developed scalable apps, integrated eCommerce platforms, and optimized systems for performance. I possess expertise in .Net Core, NodeJs, ReactJs, and have contributed to agile software development practices. Although I have not explicitly ventured into investment yet, my technical experience positions me well to understand and evaluate tech startups, especially those in the eCommerce and software sectors. I envision an advisory role, offering mentorship and leveraging contacts in the tech industry for strategic partnerships. Currently, my status is as an individual considering investment opportunities, seeking to collaborate with innovative businesses to drive growth

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Hollywood

I represent a foreign based asset management/venture capital group who are actively seeking to expand their involvement in promising USA based companies. .

$250,000 to $2,000,000