Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Riverview

Married, Tampa, FL. Currently 14 years in Aviation. B.S. Aviation Business Administration. Current investment experience $75,000. Business Consultant and Broker (debt financing). Zero involvement in business decisions.

$10,000 to $500,000,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

Newer Florida resident looking to expand portfolio. Currently serve as president of a high 8 figure media operation. Prefer silent investing but would consider mentorship if skills were a strong match.

$10,000 to $120,000

Florida > Bradenton

I am an investor in Florida. I have invested financially, and with sweat equity to start up business's. I have started 2 companies along with working my way up from an employee to becoming a director of a company with 500 employees.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

We have a private fund and access to a vast network of investors always looking for new partnership opportunities.

$100,000 to $30,000,000

Florida > Palm Beach

As a business man for 28 years, I value time as one of the most important assets. Our expertise ranges from real estate investments to products import/export trade and production in local and foreign markets. With my best friends we look to support new productive opportunities, we will put our time in this so, pls use it wisely .

$100,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I'm 74 year olds, married for 55 years to the same wife, living in Fort Lauderdale, FL. Solid, plenty of experience in investments and in management, currently investing in three automotive companies, and one in aviation parts. The automotive are; one in sales and service and parts, the second manufacturing specialty hand built cars and third a classic cars restoration. I can be available as an advisor MENTOR also hands on [not full time]. I have experience in all management positions such as sales, service, manufacturing, financing and mentoring. I'm an individual investor but also have controlling interest in OTC public company if it needs to be used.

$100,000 to $500,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I am the head of origination and a shareholder of a private capital fund specializing in high leverage construction loans. I live in Ft. Lauderdale. I am NOT a broker. I work directly for the fund as a full time employee. I do not table fund or sell notes. We manage a portfolio with apx. $1.5 billion in assets under management on our balance sheet, and we have funded over $3 billion in real estate development and construction. We have our own draw department and escrow closers on staff. I will fund up to 90% of cost on projects from $1-$100 million, up to 65% of combined exit value. We are more expensive than banks, but cheaper than equity. We close quickly, we fund draws in 2 days. My goal is to structure and negotiate with you the optimal funding scenario that minimizes your cash investment requirements and maximizes your ROI while maintaining a steady yield ourselves.

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Palm Beach Gardens

I am a 38yr old individual currently living in Palm Beach County, FL. I have experience in corporate trust services, and helped managed several power plants in the energy industry. I'm now involved in a work from home business and looking to invest in other businesses as a silent investor or hands-on Invested if I'm trained.

$50,000 to $150,000