Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Orlando

I have over 12yrs of in automotive sales and marking. I have been a top producer for years and been a major part of turning/improving dealerships. I have knowledge on: sales, DMS programs, loan underwriting, inventory control, auction buying, repo laws, non-refundable deposits, As Is laws, title work, and DMV requirements to open a dealership. I would like to invest with someone or a group focused on low overhead and wholesale style base pricing that is Buy Here Pay Here with 100% loan retention no selling of loans. Ideal areas orange county, seminal and Tampa area.

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > Clearwater

I'm an outgoing mechanical and marine engineer who has sales and service industry experience. I am located in Florida and looking to invest in businesses and people that are hard working, goal driven, and passionate about what they're doing and what they want to achieve. Hopefully together we can achieve those goals and more.

$0 to $35,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

Founded and sold a telecomm products manufacturing business that grew to over 400 people. Have founded 8 startup companies. Holds 10 patents. Awarded lifetime achievements in Engineering award from attended University. Background in wired and wireless communications, energy conservation products, IOT, cloud computing, real time online transaction processing, R&D, product management, operating high tech businesses, partnerships, business plans, capital raising, and conceiving and delivering innovative out-of-the-box product concepts and ideas.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > Punta Gorda

Investment Group located in Punta Gorda, FL. We invest in Florida's people and businesses.

$10,000 to $300,000

Florida > St. Petersburg

69 year old, self made and financially independent semi-retired entrepreneur and individual investor with heavy experience in the following fields: Campgrounds/R.V. Park creation and operation, Transportation (trucking) Company, Heavy Equipment Operation and Repair, Auto Service and Repair Center, Retail Businesses, Restaurant/Nightclub creation and operation, Real Estate Investment and Apartment Complex creation and operation, Music and Entertainment Businesses. I am also a 2x published author on Small Business Financing, Startup and Success. I Currently own and operate a 44 unit Luxury Apartment Complex in Upstate N.Y. and I reside in St. Petersburg, Fl.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > Winston

I'm an owner of a private investment company that has a diverse portfolio of holdings ranging from notes/loans/deeds/liens to start up ventures. Some investments under the SEC CF-reg A or title II/III act. I'm strictly an arms length investor, except FL. tax liens auctions. I believe in investing back into local community, its what made this country gr8.

$1 to $25,000

Florida > Orlando

Individual looking to invest as silent investor in future successful Florida small business.

$1,000 to $30,000

Florida > Ruskin

38 years in software development.

$1 to $100,000