Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Cutler Bay

Over 15 years with commercial aviation industry (Repair Stations, Brokers, Manufacturing). Interest in aviation investments.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Abu Dhabi

I'm a 31 year old female. I live in the UAE and am ready to invest in a startup or a running business up to 250000USD provided that I get 51% equity. That will qualify me to obtain a visa. I don’t need to have a management role in the business.

$50,000 to $200,000

Florida > Tampa

Holding company with a focus on investing in real estate related sales, service and development companies. We identify opportunities where our experience in real estate brokerage, property management, title insurance, home services and construction/development will lead to increased success through more effective engagement of the customer across all business lines. Willing to collaborate to help shape strategy and direction in an advisory role.

$10,000 to $150,000

Florida > Tampa

I have lived in Tampa, FL for 15+ years. I have recently left my corporate position where I was employed for 15 years. My department was accountable for revenues of $300M+ and all associated P&L budgeting support. I have a BS in Business Management which I earned while in the US Army. Also I am a successful day trader and have been actively trading since 2019. Employment breakdown is as follows: Corporate Business Management - 18 years, Retail Management 5 years and US Military 4 years. I would be an individual investor and would be involved as much as needed to ensure a successful partnership.

$10,000 to $25,000

Florida > Doral

Personal: Age 50, married, Florida. Professional: CFO, Finance and Operations. Education: Economics, MBA. Investment experience: Brewing , restaurant, e-commerce, distribution. Involvement: Any level depending on the investments. Status: Individual investor.

$5,000 to $500,000

Florida > St Petersburg

40 year old entrepreneur with more than 20 years of experience looking for innovative products, services or solutions. STEM and scientific background, PhD, MBA. Can be fully involved or silent partner.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Tampa

Information security expert with a focus in the Healthcare sector. Held multiple security officer and ciso roles at various clients.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Oviedo

Medical device executive and leadership for the past 20 years. Interested in unique opportunities that make a real difference in the lives of patients.

$5,000 to $25,000