Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Weston

I’m a Florida-based investor with extensive experience in strategic business growth. With over 30 years in senior management roles with commercial aircraft manufacturers, I currently manage a diversified personal investment portfolio spanning active investments and companies. I also actively evaluate high-yield businesses across technology, healthcare, and lifestyle industries. My approach is hands-on when needed but I also support businesses as a silent equity partner. With deep networks across entrepreneurs, I bring both capital and strategic guidance. Individual investor with a focus on long-term value creation and not interesting in flipping businesses or quick exit strategies.

$100,000 to $600,000

Florida > Hypoluxo

Married man living in Hypoluxo looking to invest, advise or be a working partner. I have owned companies and have experience in Florida Solar and Mobility products, and handicap vans.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Miami

I have 24 years in the Investment Banking Business. My objective is to build up and devote full time in the venture i get involved with. My specialty is M/A. I have clients all around the world that i have done many M/A transactions. I am a private investor that is willing to invest my own capital. I also have access to all my contacts all over the world. I have raised over 300 million for venture capital deals in the past. My goal is to invest my capital and raise the value of the company and sell it off to some of my groups that are looking to acquire profitable companies out of the country.

$25,000 to $400,000

Florida > Parkland

Own a merchant banking company. Specialize in small growth companies. Take Companies public. Have over 10 years experience doing financings and taking companies public. Work with groups of investors and institutions as well.

$10,000,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Davie

I am 41 years old professional and I work in Senior Leadership Capacity at a MNC firm in South Florida. I have two decades of professional experience in multiple countries, including, relationship Management, Tender Process, Pricing Strategy etc. I look forward to the partnership.

$40,000 to $80,000

Florida > Bradenton

I am the Vice President of Sales for a large financial organization. Previously owned 2 companies.

$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Miami

Accounting background. Specialties include Auditing, Internal Controls, Corporate Governance, Risk Management, CCAR. I am looking for investment opportunities in Florida.

$100,000 to $500,000

Florida > Palm Springs

I’m 38yo, married and currently living in FL. I’m business owner and qualifier in the construction industry. I’m an individual investor looking for a silent involvement.

$50,000 to $250,000