Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Boca Raton

Founded and built four businesses during my career. The last company was sold to a global private equity firm. Semi-retired. Board member.

$500,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > St. Petersburg

Investor with specialty in Home improvement sector. Marketing and sales training.

$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Boca Raton

I am a 63 years old entrepreneur looking for a product to be developed across America; I like to get involved in the marketing aspect. I have been down on that road a couple of times. I have been involved in Real Estate, Manufacturing and networking Industrial paint, Modular houses manufacturing and raising show horses.

$5,000 to $250,000

Florida > Ponte Vedra Beach

I'm a single male living in Ponte Vedra Beach FL. I'm currently a Financial Advisor who is diversified in many different areas including being a partner in real estate and restaurant deals. I would potentially be in a hands on and silent partner role depending on the business.

$1 to $500,000

Florida > Orlando

I am very excited to find interesting opportunities for investment. I am partnered with a good friend of mine who has been investing for more than three years, generating a passive income of about 25k a year. Our combined expertise includes, security, law, and medical. Seeking to invest primarily for equity in bushiness however we are open to all ideas. We have both agreed that we are looking to play the long game with investments for companies looking to expand. While we are not opposed to beings hands on we would prefer to fall into the silent investor category of the spectrum.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Orlando

Serial entrepreneur having started a number of businesses over the last 23 years ranging from telecoms to more recently construction & renewable energy.

$25,000 to $300,000

Florida > Miami

Venture Investment firm from Venezuela that recently opened operations in Miami, FL. We invest in a wide range of business opportunities from transportation, international trade, and many others. We recently made the decision to start investing in start-ups. So we are looking to start our networks with entrepreneurs here in Miami and young start-ups. Our entrepreneurial experience helps us understand the many stages of a business and what it needs. Even if we look for returns, we strongly believe in creating wealth for all. Please contact us.

$10,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Individual entrepreneur and investor for over 15 years originally from NYC, currently residing in Boca Raton. Have a broad range of business ownership and management experience in many fields. Now actively developing residential real estate projects.

$10,000 to $500,000