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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Boynton Beach

John started E*** Capital in NY in 1983 as a registered broker dealer for a series of successful government securities funds. The Company also raised investment capital for several small businesses and often took an active role in the management. Prior to the formation of E***, he had gained extensive experience at a number of mining and metals companies in Senior marketing and sales positions. These included Billiton Metals & Ores, Falconbridge Nickel and a NY based Division of Consolidated Goldfields. He was also an outside Director of Synalloy Corp. Spartanburg, SC (ASE) and Molycorp, NY,NY (NYSE). He graduated from Columbia University in NY and served in the US Marine Corps.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Fort Pierce

I have over 20 years experience in the financial industry. I began my career as a broker/trader and now specializing in financial PR and corporate consulting and restructuring plans for public companies, I have has raised more than $45 million for various public companies in the last eight years. In addition, I have been instrumental in assisting six companies attain public trading status through reverse-shell mergers.

$25,000 to $100,000

Florida > Orlando

I have over 13 plus years of Resort Timeshare management in various sales roles where I served as DOS and grow teams of 30 to well over 200 agents and middle management increased the sales from 13 million annually to 75+ plus million annually. Dealt with marketing budgets, events, sales budgets and daily operations of 300 employees in various sales supporting departments contracts, marketing etc. I am Active real estate investor in rehab projects and purchasing in non preforming mortgage notes. Interested in been a silent investor as well partnership where I can have input in growing the business. I am open to any field of business i do have a lot of knowledge in many other fields. As well interested in building logistic company with right partners.

$1,000 to $125,000

Florida > Gibsonton

Looking for something fun to invest in. Would be willing to help but would prefer to be mostly hands off. Looking for other hard working people that enjoy being part of team..

$10,000 to $200,000

Florida > Davie

I am 41 years old professional and I work in Senior Leadership Capacity at a MNC firm in South Florida. I have two decades of professional experience in multiple countries, including, relationship Management, Tender Process, Pricing Strategy etc. I look forward to the partnership.

$40,000 to $80,000

Florida > Weston

Private investor with 20 years of retail experience.

$0 to $125,000

Florida > Pembroke Pines

Hello, full-time IT Manager who is also a real estate investor in MI, NC, and FL. Accounting and Supply Chain Managment background with MBA from Big Ten. Looking to partner and/or investor in great companies.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Orlando

I am a young investor looking to invest in the right product/company. I currently own two business and have launched several successful products. I specialize in marketing with my own social media reaching over one million people. I have also been on TV and Radio.

$10,000 to $300,000