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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > West Palm Beach

Our company brings a wide range of diverse business experience and seasoned management knowledge to bear on advising a client company. With decades of both domestic and international assignments behind them, especially in the finance and natural resources sector, the Partners can provide a wide spectrum of solutions regarding equity and debt financing.

$250,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Bell

I am a semi-retired entrepreneur looking to divest of stock and bond market risk and invest in and help manage residential real estate opportunities in the State of Florida. I have always had good instincts in sourcing and adding value to underutilized properties, and have done this consistently over a 25 year period. However, I am at a point where I would like to leverage both capital and resources and explore this opportunity on a more full-time basis. I have an MBA in Finance & Marketing and have used both skills working with both large corporations and small businesses. I'm looking to invest $50,000-$100,000 on a per project basis and would anticipate a minimal 30% return over a 2 year period. I live in North Central Florida, but am in Central Florida (Tampa area) on a regular basis.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

We operate under a Merchant Banking model catering to middle market companies with revenues typically ranging between $10 to $250 million. Clients benefit from the depth and complementary experience of senior professionals on our team. Our expertise includes: merger and acquisition advisory services, capital raising, private equity transactions, restructurings, operational turn-arounds, business development, industry research, operations, and management consulting.

$1,000,000 to $250,000,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

We have experts in bank funding such as SBA loans, credit lines, equipment finance and revenue based lending. We also have experts in investor funding such as private investors, angel investors, crowd funding, and private placement services. For our most advanced clients, we can even get your shares trading on the public markets, enabling access to hundreds of millions in funding.

$20,000 to $300,000

Florida > Coconut Creek

We’re Candice and Fernando, a South Florida-based couple in our early 30s with a strong foundation in project management, banking, and legal support. With over 10 years of combined experience managing complex projects and navigating financial and legal systems, we bring structure, reliability, and strategic insight to the table. Our academic backgrounds in Construction Management and Law allow us to offer value beyond capital—assisting with scheduling, permitting, and construction-related logistics when needed. As property owners, we understand what it takes to invest smartly and build for the long term. We're currently seeking opportunities as silent investors where we can support passionate entrepreneurs while staying behind the scenes. We’re committed, professional, and ready to be the right partners to help scale your business.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Private investor in the financial services field with an extensive investment history.

$1,000,000 to $20,000,000

Florida > Oakland Park

I have an MBA with concentration in Finance. My areas of interest and specialty is project finance and development. I have worked overseas with companies looking to finance their various projects. I continue to seek opportunities in working with established businesses and start-ups to achieve their funding needs.

$5,000,000 to $200,000,000

Florida > Tampa

I work for a Fortune 500 company managing Global Sales Strategy and Performance . I manage and drive 9 digit sales figures annually with 20% growth this past year alone. Just recently began Angel and VC Fund investing. I am interested to help new technologies grow fast. I am well versed in business, sales, marketing, profit modeling. I truly enjoy assisting new growth companies maximize revenue and cash flow. Experienced with many market segments and application spaces in my current role. Main interests are Food Innovation, autonomous mobility, AR/VR, Health/Wellness/Medical application (preferably on the preventive side), wireless sensing, robotics.

$1,000 to $50,000