Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Miami Beach

My husband and I are entrepreneurs and are looking to invest in sports facilities within the US and Europe.

$100,000 to $200,000

Florida > Port Charlotte

40 year old male; married; Southwest Florida. Currently an Executive Director in the Freight Transportation industry with an MBA from Purdue University. New to investing in start-ups &/or growth companies. I am flexible regarding my degree of involvement. Individual Investor.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Naples

Former banker.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Orlando

I run my own successful rental business and am looking for other opportunities to fund my retirement. Not particular about industry, interested in anything with strong growth or expansion potential. Prefer to have minimal involvement but can help in the beginning if the investment is right.

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > Tampa

I am an investor who is willing to invest time and money in entrepreneurs who are motivated to be successful and watch their business grow. I have invested in one start-up company and it has taught me valuable knowledge regarding business startups. People who know me best say that I am very persuasive and analytical. I hope by utilizing all these skills I can fulfill my ultimate passion which would be to see new businesses flourish.

$1,000 to $5,000

Florida > Oviedo

I am a retired healthcare executive with 25 year experience in healthcare management. The last 20 years spent in financing, development and management of real estate and construction. Florida Certified Construction and HVAC Contractor.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > Orlando

Looking for investment opportunities in established business with loan 1 to 5 years at 8%. 50% of the company ownership as collateral. Silent partner. Looking specifically for a growing equestrian stable in orlando area willing to expand

$50,000 to $150,000

Florida > Orlando

Married, Orlando, Fl. 40+ years of varied Management experience, including strong International across multi industries. Wharton School, MBA Jack Welsh Management Institute. Founded six companies, all sold but one; broad range incl. Manufacturing, retail, hospitality, mini-storage. Founded first Icebar North America, operates International Dr. Orlando; 7 figure; was Founder NEWCO to acquire For 500 subsid. did $55 mil LBO and Turnaround, repaid 3 yrs, did Refi $110 mill to expand. Strong financial expertise, background incl. Strategic and L.R. Planning, Feasibility Study, DCFROI, strong Start-up Company experience. Overall have done 30+ acquisitions, start-ups, new product start-ups and divestitures, half international. Any investment use my Mgt. Co., can be active, hands-on or advisory, not silent, depending location.

$100,000 to $500,000