Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Miami

I am 47 years old, married. I have over 25 years working in the Security industry, working for top multinational companies in different continents. I have a Masters Degree in International Trade. I am the CEO of a Florida based LLC. Main investments are in Real Estate and Logistics. Other investments and businesses run outside the US, based in Central America.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Kissimmee

Commercial driver looking to invest in some good ideas or business.

$0 to $30,000

Florida > Pembroke Pines

Retired entrepreneur with mutual fund experience seeking investment in financial company.

$100,000 to $100,000

Florida > Longwood

Currently CEO of a $1B global travel company, which was recently sold to a large PE firm. Looking for interesting investment opportunities.

$50,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Dunedin

I'm 38, married with two children. My current profession is an Operations VP for a national real estate research and document filing company. I am looking into real estate investing and am willing to be totally involved in any in real estate investment. I live in Pinellas county and I am familiar with Pasco county as well. I am willing to invest in flipping, buy and hold, or note investing. I do not have experience in the above mentioned strategies but have self educated myself and am ready to start. I am willing to be a silent partner or full hands on partner.

$10,000 to $50,000

Florida > Odessa

My name is carl nicks. I am a 29 year old professional athlete. I have done well for myself and want a more hands on role on managing and diversifying my portfolio. Let me make it clear and easy for u to understand. In no way am I an expert investor. I have no high power connections nor do I know a lot about investing. What I do have is money and a strong will to succeed. Not to mention I've seen every episode of shark tank. If you feel like you have a good product and or business and the only reason you haven't succeeded is because you don't have the capital then I could possibly be the man for you. If it makes sense and you have a business plan that makes sense we can possibly make each other a nice profit. I also would consider myself a silent partner not stepping on any toes. I look forward to doing business with u in the future.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Cutler Bay

Over 15 years with commercial aviation industry (Repair Stations, Brokers, Manufacturing). Interest in aviation investments.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Naples

Married with 2 children. Usa citizen, but Italian. Speak 4 languages. Owner of a franchise in Fort Myers, and before that a production body shop in Phoenix AZ. Also worked for 20+ years in the fashion industry and in the manufacturing family business in Italy. Looking to invest in something to diversify and have a long term relationship and return of investment.

$1 to $200,000