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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Orlando

I am an accomplished management professional, boasting a rich background encompassing business, construction, medical device development, and military leadership. As President of a holding company, I seek to propel growth and market expansion via strategic acquisitions, capitalizing on my proficiency in market research, financial modeling, and negotiation. Formerly, I founded the premier aquatics services provider in Greater Orlando. My leadership steered a threefold business growth in four years, culminating in its acquisition by a national pool service company. With an MBA from Florida Institute of Technology and a BS in Industrial Technology from the University of Nebraska, I wield a robust educational foundation. I hold designations as a Certified General Contractor (CGC), Certified Pool/Spa Contractor (CPC), and Microsoft Certified Systems Engineer (MCSE), underscoring my dedication to industry standards.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Fort Myers

Residing in Ft. Myers & Mpls, successful founder of a venture funded internet search engine software co. (Sold I.P.), Sr. Mgr. early stage biotech & cosmeceutical co. (raised significant institutional $, licensing deal, spin off, and sold), investment banking & corporate finance, active investor in startups and special situations. Advisor, mentor, board member, not afraid to get hands dirty to help.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Wellington

15 Years in Banking 10 Years in Corporate finance CFO of 18 small companies Looking for investments for a group of wealthy individuals that made their fortunes in Retail (Direct Response), low income housing, collection agencies, restaurants.

$20,000 to $200,000

Florida > Orlando

Over 50 years old, business owner, married 35 years, Master's degree in Healthcare Administration. Owned several businesses in the past and currently. Silent business partner opportunity. Individual investor.

$10,000 to $75,000

Florida > Brandon

I’m 44 yrs old. Never been married but have a fiancé with a total of 6 kids. I dropped out in the 9th grade but got my ged at the age of 30. I’m not ashamed to say this as I do well for my self compared to a lot of college graduates. I’m a strong believer that if you work hard for what you want you will achieve your goals but you have to stay focused and believe in yourself. I like having conversation with successful people to learn and create ideas from them. This is what helped me in life. I purchased my first home at the age of 18. I was determined to do this as I knew this could put me ahead considering I had no school background. It all paid off from there, I purchased other properties that I currently rent out and others flipped. I also now hold my real estate licence which helps me find deals for my self & save on commission. On top of my real estate investments I do hold a w2 job which pays pretty well. I work remotely for a transportation company out in the west coast.

$20,000 to $80,000

Florida > Fort Myers

58 Year old X company owner, looking for passive investments

$500,000 to $2,500,000

Florida > Lake Worth Beach

My husband and I are professionals in South Florida with almost two decades of international relations/law enforcement experience, as well as degrees in a related field. We are looking to become silent partners to help a new start-up or existing small business reach their full potential!

$0 to $40,000

Florida > Winter Park

I live in Orlando, FL. I have a Masters in Mechanical Engineering background and I have a great experience in engineering and technology in aerospace. I am also a hands-on guy when it comes to fixing houses.

$1,000 to $20,000