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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Hudson

I'm married, located in Florida and work as an Independent Aviation Program Management Consultant. Education - Professional Management designations from the Canadian Institute of Management, Barrie Ontario, Canada, (CIM, P. Mgr., C. Mgr.) and a Certified Management Designation (CM) from James Madison University, Virginia USA. Experience - Airline/Airport General Manager, Sr. Manager Airport Planning & Development, Director Real Estate and Airport Affairs (35 Years). Background - Airline Operations Expert, Airport Terminal Development - Runways/Taxiways/Fees & Charges/Privatization of Airports (FAA/TC)/Aircraft Maintenance Hangars/GSE facilities. Role - Advisory and silent and individual investor preferred.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Delray Beach

Always looking for opportunities. Open minded.

$10 to $100,000

Florida > Ocala

Business owner. Technology specialist. Looking for the right investment.

$1,000 to $250,000

Florida > St Petersburg

I have been involved in the Food & Beverage business and as an investor of real estate since 2013. Currently, I own & manage a Thai & Sushi food truck. I am looking forward to finding the right entrepreneur for me to invest in and make the great product dream come true.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

Founded and sold a telecomm products manufacturing business that grew to over 400 people. Have founded 8 startup companies. Holds 10 patents. Awarded lifetime achievements in Engineering award from attended University. Background in wired and wireless communications, energy conservation products, IOT, cloud computing, real time online transaction processing, R&D, product management, operating high tech businesses, partnerships, business plans, capital raising, and conceiving and delivering innovative out-of-the-box product concepts and ideas.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > Venus

Retired entrepreneur looking to invest passively in local businesses.

$1,000 to $300,000

Florida > Miramar

I am an economist with a master’s in Human Resources. I started my career as an Auditor for Deloitte and Regional Auditor manager for the Largest Financial company in Brazil. After this period, I decided to join the Largest Brazilian Corporation as a Human Resources Manager where I worked in Brazil, USA and Africa. I created a Start up in Brazil which was chosen one of the top 5 best Environmental startups in the Country. After this recognition in 2004 I moved to USA and started a Consultancy in procurement and Business Development where I helped many American corporations to develop and expand their Business in 4 different continents. Multilingual in English, Spanish, and Portuguese.

$100,000 to $500,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

John started E*** Capital in NY in 1983 as a registered broker dealer for a series of successful government securities funds. The Company also raised investment capital for several small businesses and often took an active role in the management. Prior to the formation of E***, he had gained extensive experience at a number of mining and metals companies in Senior marketing and sales positions. These included Billiton Metals & Ores, Falconbridge Nickel and a NY based Division of Consolidated Goldfields. He was also an outside Director of Synalloy Corp. Spartanburg, SC (ASE) and Molycorp, NY,NY (NYSE). He graduated from Columbia University in NY and served in the US Marine Corps.

$50,000 to $1,000,000