Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Riverview

Investor looking to fund RE development projects in FL, TX and other locations after research and contract review. Combat veteran with experience in SFH and small MF units. Looking to get into commercial side of RE. Also interested in green initiatives like charging stations, beauty and Women’s fitness products and technology.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Tampa

If you got nice concepts and good business ideas, you will be signed......Any Business that can get me 20% interest in 1 year....

$50,000 to $200,000

Florida > Ormond Beach

I'm the owner of an import and export company with 25 years experience in manufacturing and product sourcing. I'm looking for opportunities where my ability to provide low cost production capabilities and outsourcing services can help a company grow and manage inventory costs. Can provide low cost production and outsourcing services and capital for inventory.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > Orlando

I have over 13 plus years of Resort Timeshare management in various sales roles where I served as DOS and grow teams of 30 to well over 200 agents and middle management increased the sales from 13 million annually to 75+ plus million annually. Dealt with marketing budgets, events, sales budgets and daily operations of 300 employees in various sales supporting departments contracts, marketing etc. I am Active real estate investor in rehab projects and purchasing in non preforming mortgage notes. Interested in been a silent investor as well partnership where I can have input in growing the business. I am open to any field of business i do have a lot of knowledge in many other fields. As well interested in building logistic company with right partners.

$1,000 to $125,000

Florida > Cape Coral

30 years old, single, located in Cape Coral, FL and Chicago, IL. Experience in Commercial Real Estate Investments, specifically single family rental portfolios, mobile home parks, and self storage. University of Wisconsin graduate. Owner of 3 self storage facilities, 1 mobile home park. Manage a $60m SFR portfolio in SWFL for a Chicago based family office.

$100,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Lithia

Married couple looking to be active investors in Brandon/Tampa Area Wife works full time in aerospace with masters degree; husband worked as manager in large automotive plant, has bachelors degree and served 20 years in the Marine Corps. Looking to partner for a small business opportunity.

$0 to $100,000

Florida > Orlando

A professional medical device executive in a fortune 100 company With multiple C-Suite connections. Expertise in quality improvements, cost efficiency, manufacturing, Engineering, strategy and project management/execution. PhD in polymer Physics. Masters in industrial and Medicinal Chemistry. Looking for investment opportunities with advisory/silent role. Some hands on possible based on investment

$10,000 to $500,000

Florida > Miami

35years old entrepreneur looking for a business with great growth potential. Sold successfully 2 companies in South America in the financial markets industry. Hands on partner.

$100,000 to $250,000