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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tampa

My name is Stephanie and I am from Brazil, I am 29 years old, single and no family. I am looking for either a partner or a business to invest where I can either be a hands-on business partner or a silent investor. I have 10+ years experience in international business and I am speak Spanish and Portuguese.

$0 to $100,000

Florida > Cape Coral

I work as an independent broker in Cape Coral, Florida. We provide funding for all types of businesses and various circumstances.

$250,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Casselberry

Middle aged professional with 20 years experience growing and optimizing startup to growth phase companies.

$0 to $10,000,000

Florida > Bradenton

My husband and I are looking to invest in a company that we are passionate about. We are 35, been married for 11 years and live in Bradenton, FL. I have worked in the hospitality industry and food and beverage for the past 12 years. My husband has worked in the technology industry for 10 years. I have a Bachelor's degree in Accounting from the University of MN - Duluth. We are just getting started with investing our income.

$50,000 to $125,000

Florida > Naples

I am an investor currently living in Naples, FL. I have background and experience in Horticulture/Greenhouse production as well as Microbreweries. I also deal with some real estate related investments. Looking to invest in business(es) that are either in pipeline/startup stage or existing and profitable. I am an individual and not an investment company/broker.

$1,000 to $700,000

Florida > Tampa

I hold a Bachelor of Science Degree in Finance from the University of South Florida. I work as the CTO for a personal injury firm. I am a published author on SEO optimization and an expert in crytocurrencies.

$1 to $30,000

Florida > Lakeland

Work as shop manager for an engineering construction and fabrication company. I'm an individual investor looking for an opportunity to help someone build a business and make some money while doing it.

$5,000 to $25,000

Florida > Tampa

A financial advisory firm that provides companies with time sensitive financing needs access to senior debt, mezzanine and private equity capital for the purposes of refinancing, acquisition, restructuring and growth initiatives. Our experience spans a broad range of industries including energy, financial services, media/broadcasting, real estate, healthcare, telecom manufacturing, distribution and emerging technology to name a few. With access to over $5 billion of capital through our financing resources, Prestige has the ability to help clients quickly structure meaningful equity, senior debt and mezzanine capital. We will also make direct investment from time to time.

$2,000,000 to $50,000,000