Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > St. Petersburg

I am a previous successful business owner who is looking to invest in a profitable business. I am seeking the opportunity to be a silent partner or advisory partner as I have many years of experience in business and education.

$100 to $200,000

Florida > North Lauderdale

Currently a manager at a call center for the past 11 years in tech support and customer service. Prior to now, occupied executive positions in both the government and private sector including holding the position of Vice President in the manufacture association as well as director in chambers of commerce. Graduate and participant of several post graduate training at universities and specialized financial institutions such as the EIB of Singapore Georgetown university and IMF in Washington. Was chairman and director at several government corporations and travel extensively to several countries to negotiate business opportunities.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Windermere

I'm a 40 y/o entrepreneur, Married 2 kids who lives in the Orlando area. I started a technology/finance company in 2003 in NYC. I have minimal experience investing in other companies. I have good experience in the finance and technology areas and understand how to make companies successful. I'm interested in a hands-on or advisory role. I am an individual investor

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > St Augustine

As the CEO/Founder/Primary Investor: Nutherm International, Inc., King City Construction, LLC; Shenanigans Steaks and Seafood; Planned Maintenance Systems, Inc.; The Rogers Building LP Accredited Investor: Digital Heathcare, Inc.; DayStar Oil and Gas, Inc.; Wilt's Clean Energy, Inc.; The Levoi Organization, Corp. Have taken my experience in building new companies to investing in solid start-ups in a variety of industries. Former president of florida business incubator association; 30 years investment experience.

$250,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

I am looking to invest in CPG goods and service groups.

$50,000 to $5,500,000

Florida > Miami

Venture Investment firm from Venezuela that recently opened operations in Miami, FL. We invest in a wide range of business opportunities from transportation, international trade, and many others. We recently made the decision to start investing in start-ups. So we are looking to start our networks with entrepreneurs here in Miami and young start-ups. Our entrepreneurial experience helps us understand the many stages of a business and what it needs. Even if we look for returns, we strongly believe in creating wealth for all. Please contact us.

$10,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Brandon

I’m 44 yrs old. Never been married but have a fiancé with a total of 6 kids. I dropped out in the 9th grade but got my ged at the age of 30. I’m not ashamed to say this as I do well for my self compared to a lot of college graduates. I’m a strong believer that if you work hard for what you want you will achieve your goals but you have to stay focused and believe in yourself. I like having conversation with successful people to learn and create ideas from them. This is what helped me in life. I purchased my first home at the age of 18. I was determined to do this as I knew this could put me ahead considering I had no school background. It all paid off from there, I purchased other properties that I currently rent out and others flipped. I also now hold my real estate licence which helps me find deals for my self & save on commission. On top of my real estate investments I do hold a w2 job which pays pretty well. I work remotely for a transportation company out in the west coast.

$20,000 to $80,000

Florida > Winter Garden

I am an individual investor married for 16 years with 2 kids in the Orlando Metro area. I have been investing in real estate rental properties for 16 years and a managing partner in a technology company. My rental properties produce positive cash flow. My specialty is "Sales and Process Improvements" within an organization to grow a company for long term gains I am very detailed oriented and will dig into the details to ensure the right plan is in place for success.

$10,000 to $150,000