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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Cape Coral

I retired from the U.S. Air Force in 2002 after serving honorably for 22 years and my expertise was in Telecommunications Systems. In 2002, I started an online furniture business and I have been operating it for the last 21 years now. My specialty is website design, optimization, and implementation. I'm also an online marketing specialist and I can bring all of these skills to the table for any business. I live in SW Florida and I'm interested in exploring local business opportunities.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Oviedo

Currently own (2) successful businesses for over 12 years and I am looking for a new investment opportunity. Involvement to be hands on or an advisory. Have past experience in Real Estate investing and currently in the commercial warehousing business along with commercial office furniture installation industry.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Fort Myers

58 Year old X company owner, looking for passive investments

$500,000 to $2,500,000

Florida > Orlando

Looking for investment opportunities in established business with loan 1 to 5 years at 8%. 50% of the company ownership as collateral. Silent partner. Looking specifically for a growing equestrian stable in orlando area willing to expand

$50,000 to $150,000

Florida > Odessa

I'm an investor looking for opportunities either as a silent or active investor including, but not limited to Multi Family Real Estate, Financial Markets, Automated Services (Amazon, Walmart, etc). I have diverse experience in finance, distribution, and insurance industries. Any scalable opportunity that can be reviewed and verified that has good potential please send my way.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Cape Coral

SW Florida investor focusing on short term loans.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Clearwater

Currently I am a part time equity investment consultant to a Miami based hedge fund. I am also involved in entrepreneurial projects/ investments within the auto & consumer finance industries. Prior professional experience: Vice President at Goldman Sachs and Fortress Investment Group where I was an analyst specializing in the consumer and healthcare sectors. Prior to Goldman, I worked at Wellington Management a Boston based asset manager with over 800 Billion in assets under management. I have an MBA from Emory University with a specialization in finance. I have completed level 1&2 of the CFA exam.

$1 to $1,000,000

Florida > Miami Lakes

Retired law enforcement professional, with 25 years of law enforcement and security experience. Masters Degree in Criminal Justice Management and Bachelors Degree in Criminal Justice. Fluent in both English and Spanish. Potential individual investor, looking to be mostly a silent partner, for a percentage of the business and dividing/receiving profits, according to the percentage of ownership purchased. Everything would be done in a legal fashion, with proper attorneys, accountants, disclaimers, and protection from liabilities. All business documents and/or agreements, would all be reviewed by the appropriate professionals and attorneys, prior to a final agreement being signed.

$100,000 to $3,000,000