Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Orlando

I am a nurse. I have a self-directed IRA. I have some done a handful of realty projects. Silent involvement. Individual investor.

$0 to $250,000

Florida > Venice

Retired individual land developer, Real Estate investor, Mortgage Banker and residential home builder, located on Florida’s gulf coast. Will consider "silent" investment relationship with an established business or enterprise with respectable to strong balance sheet, short to mid term (1 to 5 years) investment, based on; growth, inventory, development and/or marketing.

$30,000 to $300,000

Florida > Atlantic Beach

Deep knowledge and experience within corporate tech roles, fintech, business consultancy, looking to invest capital OR time into suitable business.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Ponte Vedra Beach

I'm a single male living in Ponte Vedra Beach FL. I'm currently a Financial Advisor who is diversified in many different areas including being a partner in real estate and restaurant deals. I would potentially be in a hands on and silent partner role depending on the business.

$1 to $500,000

Florida > Boca Raton

30 years of experience scaling up companies in a diverse industries in the US and international. Looking for a proven concept that requires a hands on investor partner to take it to the next level.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > Naples

I am hold a doctorate in Chemical Engineering from the U of PA. I worked for 10 years developing aroma chemicals and another 10 years in scientific information management. So I know chemicals and software very well and in a highly creative sense. I am also a PMP (project management professional) so I get the job done. I recently moved with my husband to Vero and seek to develop a portfolio of interesting work through angel investing. Initially looking for hands-on involvement but that may decrease over time. I can also put a group of investors together. I am interested in manufacturing, engineering and technology projects.

$25,000 to $100,000

Florida > Hollywood

I am looking to invest in Amazon 3rd Party Sellers, Real Estate (Commercial & Residential), hard money lending, interior design and home products.

$50,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Miramar

I am an economist with a master’s in Human Resources. I started my career as an Auditor for Deloitte and Regional Auditor manager for the Largest Financial company in Brazil. After this period, I decided to join the Largest Brazilian Corporation as a Human Resources Manager where I worked in Brazil, USA and Africa. I created a Start up in Brazil which was chosen one of the top 5 best Environmental startups in the Country. After this recognition in 2004 I moved to USA and started a Consultancy in procurement and Business Development where I helped many American corporations to develop and expand their Business in 4 different continents. Multilingual in English, Spanish, and Portuguese.

$100,000 to $500,000