Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Doral

Personal: Age 50, married, Florida. Professional: CFO, Finance and Operations. Education: Economics, MBA. Investment experience: Brewing , restaurant, e-commerce, distribution. Involvement: Any level depending on the investments. Status: Individual investor.

$5,000 to $500,000

Florida > Brandon

I have 15 years experience in manufacturing. Also have 2 years in construction. Own a few real estate properties.

$25,000 to $150,000

Florida > Boca Raton

I am a 50 year old male looking for a company to invest in and also be a part in making company grow. I have background in banking, finance and construction. I will be an individual investor. My kids are in college so I am looking for a new business challenge.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Melbourne

Advisor for major Broker Dealer/Investment Advisor/Investment Bank.

$500,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Auburndale

A young, risk accepting, and licensed financial professional seeking opportunities to silently invest in small businesses and franchises with outsized fundamental value and growth projections.

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > Punta Gorda

I am a military Veteran living in SW FL who is a 40+ year old professional with an MBA, who has focused in manufacturing / logistics / supply chain over the past 20 years. I also hold a Lean Six Sigma Black belt and have been highly trained in multiple manufacturing and logistics principles. I have a technical background on top of my manufacturing / logistics / supply chain experience. I do expect to have a level of advisory involvement and reporting. However, I am not currently interested in being in the daily operations unless it was required due to the growth curve. I am not afraid to get my hands dirty.

$100 to $15,000

Florida > Tampa

I hold a Bachelor of Science Degree in Finance from the University of South Florida. I work as the CTO for a personal injury firm. I am a published author on SEO optimization and an expert in crytocurrencies.

$1 to $30,000

Florida > Tampa

I am 68 and living in Tampa for 20 years. I have started and sold multiple small business over the past 30 years. Currently operating one. Looking to invest where I can provide some guidance and expertise, not looking to be day to day operational. Experience in Health Care, Insurance, Payroll, HR, Sales and Marketing.

$25,000 to $250,000