Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Palm Springs

I’m 38yo, married and currently living in FL. I’m business owner and qualifier in the construction industry. I’m an individual investor looking for a silent involvement.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > Kissimmee

Commercial driver looking to invest in some good ideas or business.

$0 to $30,000

Florida > Riverview

I am trying to find good ideas to invest in if you can show me how to make a profit. I will help as much as I possibly can. I love helping other entrepreneurs. I am an individual investor that will do as much as I possibly can to help as long as I know what needs to get done.

$10,000 to $50,000

Florida > Miami

We are a family office located in Miami, FL. We have successfully created several businesses throughout the last 60 years and would like to help others in the community do so as well. We have expertise in the following industries: supermarkets, retail, real estate, tire wholesale/distribution, banking, insurance, real estate development, auto industry, technology, fitness, sports, agriculture, and more. From start-ups, to turn around's. We have a vast network and resources to help any business succeed. We sold one of our companies, Associated Grocers of Florida in 2017 to Supervalu for $193 million. In 2011, our Tire Group International Inc. (TGI) partnered with Transportation Resource Partners (TRP) and the McLarty Companies. In 1999, our Ready State Bank was sold to Union Planters Bank . The deal, worth $600 million in assets. Our group includes successful business individuals with MBA's and members of the FIU Business School Hall of Fame. Advisory or hands on.

$100,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Hollywood

I represent a foreign based asset management/venture capital group who are actively seeking to expand their involvement in promising USA based companies. .

$250,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Orlando

I am a nurse. I have a self-directed IRA. I have some done a handful of realty projects. Silent involvement. Individual investor.

$0 to $250,000

Florida > St. Petersburg

I am a previous successful business owner who is looking to invest in a profitable business. I am seeking the opportunity to be a silent partner or advisory partner as I have many years of experience in business and education.

$100 to $200,000

Florida > Gulfport

Real estate acquisitions manager. Looking to invest in real estate.

$30,000 to $50,000