Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Lakewood Ranch

Currently VP of Sales & Marketing for a Industrial Charger company. Looking for new investment opportunities.

$25,000 to $100,000

Florida > Fort Walton Beach

I am an MBA student looking to possibly make investments. I am looking to diversify how and where I put my money. I will consider investments in any category, but will have more passion for projects in film or music.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Orlando

I work closely with private capital groups that provide financing solutions to established, revenue-generating businesses. My background is in alternative finance and business development, with a focus on connecting companies to strategic funding sources, including business loans, equipment financing, bridge loans, and working capital solutions. I am also heavily networked in the Microcap world, helping small cap companies with aspirations of uplisting. I’ve helped companies across healthcare, retail, construction, and logistics access non- bank capital quickly and flexibly. I’m based in Florida and primarily act as a connector and advisor, working on a referral basis. Open to reviewing deals that make sense for my partners and helping businesses find a smart path forward.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Oviedo

Currently own (2) successful businesses for over 12 years and I am looking for a new investment opportunity. Involvement to be hands on or an advisory. Have past experience in Real Estate investing and currently in the commercial warehousing business along with commercial office furniture installation industry.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Daytona Beach

I am 25 years old. I used to work for 3 years as project engineer in the biggest oil company in the world Saudi Aramco. Currently I am working with Saudi Airline as a professional in which the company has sent me to US in order to get my pilot license. I have one investment in the entertainment field located in Washington D.C. I like to be part of new investments and new ideas. I am young but I am a fast learner. Moreover, I believe that the ship with two captains sinks. I will be part of the project I will help and I will support as needed. Otherwise, I will be more than happy just to watch and read the reports.

$50,000 to $150,000

Florida > Tampa

I am an investor who is willing to invest time and money in entrepreneurs who are motivated to be successful and watch their business grow. I have invested in one start-up company and it has taught me valuable knowledge regarding business startups. People who know me best say that I am very persuasive and analytical. I hope by utilizing all these skills I can fulfill my ultimate passion which would be to see new businesses flourish.

$1,000 to $5,000

Florida > Riverview

Born in 1967 in Cincinnati Ohio. Received Bachelor of Science – Electronic Engineering degree in 1996 and Masters of Business Administration in 1999. Extensive experience in finance with a high level of knowledge in information technologies, sales and business development management. He has bought and sold many businesses while providing leadership and management that helps facilitate each company’s growth. He has run and managing all phases of a business life cycle, from needs assessment through business processes, implementation and dissolution if necessary.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Lutz

Personal information: 36 year old physician, married, living in Florida Professional experience: Background in medicine, systems engineering, non- profit sector, and private equity Seeking investments focused on renewable energy, sustainable buildings, and other envoronmental themes.

$50,000 to $2,000,000