Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Cape Coral

30 years old, single, located in Cape Coral, FL and Chicago, IL. Experience in Commercial Real Estate Investments, specifically single family rental portfolios, mobile home parks, and self storage. University of Wisconsin graduate. Owner of 3 self storage facilities, 1 mobile home park. Manage a $60m SFR portfolio in SWFL for a Chicago based family office.

$100,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Miami

Venture Investment firm from Venezuela that recently opened operations in Miami, FL. We invest in a wide range of business opportunities from transportation, international trade, and many others. We recently made the decision to start investing in start-ups. So we are looking to start our networks with entrepreneurs here in Miami and young start-ups. Our entrepreneurial experience helps us understand the many stages of a business and what it needs. Even if we look for returns, we strongly believe in creating wealth for all. Please contact us.

$10,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Oviedo

Married couple with over 20 years experience in the HR, food services and technology industry. Looking for the right investment opportunity to invest and be a part of. We are hands on individuals that want to be part of making your vision come true.

$1 to $50,000

Florida > St. Petersburg

Hands-on investor with experience in developing projects digitally and within real estate, from multi doors to industrial sites.

$20,000,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Jacksonville

We are an investor, finder and funder for investment acquisitions, expansion and leverage. Our goal is to get you the funding if you are a good fit for our portfolio or our investors portfolio. Our group loves investments that are already cash flowing and sometimes we can offer a loan, line of credit or an advance instead of owning a stake in your company however its best to structure our agreement. Contact us to have thepossibility of having access to $40M plus. We also can acquire the entire business if needed and if it fits our mission.

$2,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Weeki Wachee

I am looking to invest in a business that I wish I could create myself but do not have the time to start from scratch. I have a Master's in Applied Economics and I've been working in the financial sector since 2008. Growing and through 2014 I worked in a broad range of hospitality businesses and that's where my true interest remains. Combined with my hands on experience and technical background, I will invest in the business I think has the best potential and can provide feedback.

$1,000 to $30,000

Florida > St Petersburg

PhD with more than 20 years entrepreneur experience in scientific related business located in the Tampa Bay area. Interested in investing in innovative products and / or services. Can be advisory only or hands-on partner.

$1,000 to $500,000

Florida > Tampa

We represent the investment interests of a medium sized Asian country. Our primary interests lie in construction, development, real estate, community redevelopment and large project build out.

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000