Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Windermere

I am a current owner of a Home Health Agency located in Orlando. Due to the moratorium that has been placed on new Home health Agency whereby you cannot get license to serve Medicare\medicaid patients, I ended up serving only patient with commercial insurance or Workers compensation. I hold a Masters Degree in Nutrition Science. I live in Windermere. I would like to acquire a medicare\medicaid Licensed Agency that is serving Orange, Seminole, Brevard and Osceola county. I am seeking a business partner or seeking to invest in opportunities in medical professional fields.

$20,000 to $50,000

Florida > Miami

Principal Managing Partner in a family office based in Miami. Looking to deploy debt and or equity capital in a GP role. Direct investor. We are industry agnostic and we invest in deals that are cash flow generating.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Punta Gorda

I am a military Veteran living in SW FL who is a 40+ year old professional with an MBA, who has focused in manufacturing / logistics / supply chain over the past 20 years. I also hold a Lean Six Sigma Black belt and have been highly trained in multiple manufacturing and logistics principles. I have a technical background on top of my manufacturing / logistics / supply chain experience. I do expect to have a level of advisory involvement and reporting. However, I am not currently interested in being in the daily operations unless it was required due to the growth curve. I am not afraid to get my hands dirty.

$100 to $15,000

Florida > Miami Beach

38, Biochemistry at MIT, MD at Ohio State. Now working on Wall Street. Very experienced

$25,000 to $500,000

Florida > Lake Mary

I'm a 46 yr old who's spent the last 24 years in and around Real Estate, with a strong focus on financing. I have started 3, acquired 5 and sold 3 companies thus far. I love entrepreneurship and am looking to partner with individuals looking for a little startup capital and/or some guidance. I’m looking to predominantly be a silent investor where only occasional guidance may be needed. If you’re motivated and ready to work hard then I’d like to hear about your opportunity.

$500 to $20,000

Florida > Royal Palm Beach

Licensed Home Improvement Supplier/General Contractor looking for lucrative real estate opportunities. We will buy land, residential or commercial space, rehab and sell off. Interested parties should have contacts or active deals in place. Additional funds available.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > Clearwater

Investor with ownership in 3 businesses. Seeking stable companies with positive cash flow to assist with capital.

$5,000 to $350,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

John started E*** Capital in NY in 1983 as a registered broker dealer for a series of successful government securities funds. The Company also raised investment capital for several small businesses and often took an active role in the management. Prior to the formation of E***, he had gained extensive experience at a number of mining and metals companies in Senior marketing and sales positions. These included Billiton Metals & Ores, Falconbridge Nickel and a NY based Division of Consolidated Goldfields. He was also an outside Director of Synalloy Corp. Spartanburg, SC (ASE) and Molycorp, NY,NY (NYSE). He graduated from Columbia University in NY and served in the US Marine Corps.

$50,000 to $1,000,000