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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tampa

I'm 40yrs old married with a family of 5 and 3 boys located in Tampa FL. I've been involved in 7 startups, 5 of which I have personally invested in or was a co-founder with equity. There was no internet marketing degree in the late 90's so I learned in the school of hard knocks. Grew a drop ship company in late 90's to 32 million in revenue 4yrs later. 8yrs as director of optimization. Currently digital marketing consultant. Consulted with almost every vertical. Ownership in companies selling electronics, shoes, makeup, jewelry, pet supplies, training. Other value-adds: Expert at digital marketing and B2B lead generation (inbound and outbound). I fix business strategy, sales and marketing funnels. Anticipated involvement depends on opportunity. I like to make an impact. Individual Investor.

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Real estate investor looking for new opportunities

$1 to $600,000

Florida > Oakland Park

I have an MBA with concentration in Finance. My areas of interest and specialty is project finance and development. I have worked overseas with companies looking to finance their various projects. I continue to seek opportunities in working with established businesses and start-ups to achieve their funding needs.

$5,000,000 to $200,000,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

Our professional experienced staff assist startups, existing business, and entrepreneurs to acquire the funding needed to get your business or idea up and running. We only deal with ACCREDITED CERTIFIED INVESTORS. Founded in 2010. After seeking funding of $23MM for my yacht manufacturing business over the course of 6 years and learning all the aspects of what investors look for in a viable investment and the information to be included in a professional Executive Summary, Business Plan and Proforma to clearly convey the concept and scope of the project for funding, I now pass this knowledge onto the first-time entrepreneurs to assist them in fine-tuning of their Business Plan package and to connect them with QUALIFIED, ACCREDITED, LEGALLY REGISTERED INVESTORS.

$5,000,000 to $90,000,000

Florida > Tampa

Vice President of Strategy and Development at a private equity firm where he oversees deal flow origination and works directly with executive leadership of acquired companies to drive the professionalization and profitability of their organizations. Education includes Master of Science in Business Analytics, Master of Science in Finance, Bachelor of Business Administration in Finance and Bachelor of Arts degree in Economics from the Cox School of Business at Southern Methodist University.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > St. Petersburg

69 year old, self made and financially independent semi-retired entrepreneur and individual investor with heavy experience in the following fields: Campgrounds/R.V. Park creation and operation, Transportation (trucking) Company, Heavy Equipment Operation and Repair, Auto Service and Repair Center, Retail Businesses, Restaurant/Nightclub creation and operation, Real Estate Investment and Apartment Complex creation and operation, Music and Entertainment Businesses. I am also a 2x published author on Small Business Financing, Startup and Success. I Currently own and operate a 44 unit Luxury Apartment Complex in Upstate N.Y. and I reside in St. Petersburg, Fl.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > Tallahassee

High-energy, strategic thinker with 25 years of experience in wholesale sales management, customer service and operations. I owned my own business for 15 years and spent 8 years as an executive for a Fortune 50 company. Recently sold my business to a larger competitor and looking for promising small/medium businesses to invest in and contribute hands-on sales/management/operations expertise. BA from Penn State and MBA from University of Michigan Ross Business School. Individual investor based in Northern Florida.

$5,000 to $200,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I'm 74 year olds, married for 55 years to the same wife, living in Fort Lauderdale, FL. Solid, plenty of experience in investments and in management, currently investing in three automotive companies, and one in aviation parts. The automotive are; one in sales and service and parts, the second manufacturing specialty hand built cars and third a classic cars restoration. I can be available as an advisor MENTOR also hands on [not full time]. I have experience in all management positions such as sales, service, manufacturing, financing and mentoring. I'm an individual investor but also have controlling interest in OTC public company if it needs to be used.

$100,000 to $500,000