Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Boca Raton

I am a seasoned Sales, Product Development, Business, and Operations Leader with over 30 years of experience. My expertise spans sales, team scaling, supply chain optimization, and strategic growth. I have a proven track record of aligning client needs with innovative solutions, securing multimillion-dollar partnerships, and driving significant revenue growth. Most recent, key accomplishments include scaling an e-commerce venture to $7mm in 1st year revenue, optimizing manufacturing processes to save $750K quarterly, and driving $18M+ in annual enterprise sales. I also built up experience in renewable energy projects and real estate development over the last 15 years while collecting licenses in M&A, Insurance, and Property Management.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Miami Beach

Successful software executive with a good eye for market trends and ability to build and motivate superb sales teams.

$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Bradenton

I am in my 40s with a masters degree in finance. I am a youtube content creator and offer different types of services at home like tax returns and immigration preparer. I am also a webmaster with two websites. I think that I can be very useful for a team since I have an audience of 80000 subscribers from youtube.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

Founded and sold a telecomm products manufacturing business that grew to over 400 people. Have founded 8 startup companies. Holds 10 patents. Awarded lifetime achievements in Engineering award from attended University. Background in wired and wireless communications, energy conservation products, IOT, cloud computing, real time online transaction processing, R&D, product management, operating high tech businesses, partnerships, business plans, capital raising, and conceiving and delivering innovative out-of-the-box product concepts and ideas.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > San Antonio

I am an investor looking for highly driven entrepreneurs who want to succeed, have a solid business plan and a vision to drive a company or product to success. My background consists of being a small business owner and over 30 years in management for the retail and car industry.

$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Gainesville

Serial entrepreneurs in Gainesville FL looking to help others. Equity stake preferred. Seeking opportunities in Jamaica as well.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I'm 74 year olds, married for 55 years to the same wife, living in Fort Lauderdale, FL. Solid, plenty of experience in investments and in management, currently investing in three automotive companies, and one in aviation parts. The automotive are; one in sales and service and parts, the second manufacturing specialty hand built cars and third a classic cars restoration. I can be available as an advisor MENTOR also hands on [not full time]. I have experience in all management positions such as sales, service, manufacturing, financing and mentoring. I'm an individual investor but also have controlling interest in OTC public company if it needs to be used.

$100,000 to $500,000

Florida > Kissimmee

I am based in Orlando, Florida. I am married with a one-year-old daughter. I have experience in luxury retail and operations specialty. I also have my Master's Degree in Data Analytics & Applied Social Research with a concentration in Media & Marketing. I help those in financial need start their businesses in order to grow an abundance amount of opportunities, all while creating a passive income. I can pour into your business if it pours back into me. I am willing to talk with any/everyone who chooses to utilize my expertise and skills in order to grow their business and legacy. I'm happy to help!

$10,000 to $20,000