Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Lake Mary

Self-made investor who is responsible for screening, learning & possibly funding new and innovative ideas in the Orlando market. Mitchell brings not only financial backing, but a long list of additional assets such as networking contacts, real world experience in select fields and a deep knowledge of Orlando and surrounding areas and demographics. I have a BS in Civil Engineering from the University of Florida. I work in the engineering/construction field as an estimator for large civil/highway projects providing in-depth cost analysis for various roadway projects. Investment Experience included Real Estate & New Business Start-Up. Interested in diversification into other areas. Anticipated Involvement: Advisory, Silent Status: Individual Investor

$500 to $20,000

Florida > St Petersburg

PhD with more than 20 years entrepreneur experience in scientific related business located in the Tampa Bay area. Interested in investing in innovative products and / or services. Can be advisory only or hands-on partner.

$1,000 to $500,000

Florida > Lighthouse Point

We are a digital marketed company interested in funding start-ups primarily in the digital marketing/social media arena who we could also work with to expand our company's lead generation and/or advertising efforts.

$50,000 to $300,000

Florida > Tampa

I am 31 years old and reside in Tampa, FL. I recently sold a chain of retail stores that I started 7 years ago. We were doing 20M in sales and had 180 employees. I am a UNC Chapel Hill grad with a business degree and also a 3 time All American tennis player. I am looking to be a hands-on investor and will add a very unique set of skills to your business.

$500,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Alva

Young and successful e-commerce entrepreneur seeking to invest in high growth companies across a wide range of industries. I hold a bachelor's degree from UCF in Finance and Accounting and have over 14 years worth of experience in online commerce. Willing to invest up to $1 million.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Winter Park

I am a real estate investor in Orlando, FL, looking for distressed properties in the East Orlando, Winter Park and Kissimmee area. The numbers must make sense and must be competitive. The amount of wholesalers in this region has driven REO bank owned real estate prices above usual business. I am working with private investors from the U.S. and flip some of these properties right over to them as an assignment if it does not meet my immediate needs.

$25,000 to $400,000

Florida > Hollywood

Looking to invest in South Florida

$50,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Lakeland

Logistics, Transportation & Warehousing Executive and Real Estate Investor

$100 to $500,000