Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tampa

Holding company with a focus on investing in real estate related sales, service and development companies. We identify opportunities where our experience in real estate brokerage, property management, title insurance, home services and construction/development will lead to increased success through more effective engagement of the customer across all business lines. Willing to collaborate to help shape strategy and direction in an advisory role.

$10,000 to $150,000

Florida > Jacksonville

We are an investor, finder and funder for investment acquisitions, expansion and leverage. Our goal is to get you the funding if you are a good fit for our portfolio or our investors portfolio. Our group loves investments that are already cash flowing and sometimes we can offer a loan, line of credit or an advance instead of owning a stake in your company however its best to structure our agreement. Contact us to have thepossibility of having access to $40M plus. We also can acquire the entire business if needed and if it fits our mission.

$2,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Bradenton

I am in my 40s with a masters degree in finance. I am a youtube content creator and offer different types of services at home like tax returns and immigration preparer. I am also a webmaster with two websites. I think that I can be very useful for a team since I have an audience of 80000 subscribers from youtube.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Cutler Bay

I am a real estate investor with many single family homes rented in Miami and Ocala, Fl. As those markets have slowed, I am looking for something new to invest only in, or perhaps invest and get involved minimally.

$20,000 to $200,000

Florida > Naples

Married with 2 children. Usa citizen, but Italian. Speak 4 languages. Owner of a franchise in Fort Myers, and before that a production body shop in Phoenix AZ. Also worked for 20+ years in the fashion industry and in the manufacturing family business in Italy. Looking to invest in something to diversify and have a long term relationship and return of investment.

$1 to $200,000

Florida > Pinellas Park

I’m a private equity broker and we provide alternative financing to successful and startup businesses. I have worked in this space for over 10 years and our firm wants you to succeed. We typically work with developers and business owners seeking project financing between $2,000,000 up to $500,000,000. We welcome all recast estate deals and look forward to hearing from you.

$2,000,000 to $200,000,000

Florida > Kissimmee

Serial Entrepreneur strong background in digital marketing from online advertising to desktops and mobile. Grown multiple companies from zero revenue to multi-million dollar businesses within a matter of months. Really looking to join a company I see fit that I can bring my knowledge and experience to the table.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Cantonment

Realtor with interest in real estate projects.

$450 to $3,000,000