Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Windermere

Private investor living in the beautiful city of Orlando, Florida. I'm a Sales consultant looking to invest in new and original projects. BoS in International Hospitality Management, I traveled all over Europe and North America. Fluent in 3 languages (English, French and Portuguese) and semi-proficient in 2 others (Spanish and Italian).

$1 to $1

Florida > Orlando

I am a successful entrepreneur in the software industry seeking to invest in software, technology, SAAS, B2B companies etc. Successful working background in developing technology, software, product development and marketing to ignite growth.

$10,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Tallahassee

Healthcare professional. Looking to be a silent or advisory investor in a variety of businesses. Went to Emory University for masters. Have been involved in the equity markets for over a decade.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > North Port

I am over 50 years old, and along with the restaurant experiences I have from 30 years in the business, I have also gained valuable administrative capabilities. I have set up, owned and operated several businesses. As the owner of a Mortgage company, I was constantly required to fulfill the rigorous compliance reports and strict recording duties required to maintain the FHA approval rating for government sponsored loans, Including audited financial statements. Also, while an owner I had gained additional experience of managing employees and several businesses at one time. I had a portfolio of 10 rental properties and had two corporations flowing all at the same time. After the recession I bought and sold properties. I hired out full crews of subcontractors from a myriad of trades to get the job done as efficiently as possible and maximize profits. Leading into partnering with a builder where I built houses for sale.

$10,000 to $50,000

Florida > Port Orange

We exclusively seek different companies to inject capital into to help fund. I am part of a institutional investment group/accredited investors that actively seeks projects to inject capital into for an equity portion of their company. The range is from $500k to $5M+ There is no particular industry that is favored when it comes to funding. The investment group have no geography limits,as the group recently opened offices in Spain

$500,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > News Haven

I am an entrepreneur who has funded and started several online companies seeking to expand my business

$100 to $100,000

Florida > Melbourne

Small investor interested in most any high margin business.

$1 to $15,000

Florida > Coconut Creek

I have been privately investing in real estate and companies for 25 years. My experience gives me a little insight on products marketing, management if needed.

$5,000 to $100,000