Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Orange Park

My name is Carlos, 30 years old, married and 2 beautiful kids. Currently I am a Project Manager in a local company in Jacksonville, FL. I served in the military for 10 years as a Logistics Analyst and retired as an Executive Officer. I hold a Crimanal Justice Bachelors and currently pursuing my Master degree on Logistics and Supply Chain Management with Embry Riddle (Daytona, FL). I have invested over $200k in Real Estate for the past 2 years and have built 40% on equity on the properties. Extensive backgroung on logistics (transportation, warehouse and supply chain) with DOD and private companies. Anticipated involvement; a combination of all three depending on the industry (meaning if is part of my core values, and my knowledge I would preffer hands-on). Current status is individual investor with plans of opening an investment firm/group within the next 12 months.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Bradenton

My husband and I are looking to invest in a company that we are passionate about. We are 35, been married for 11 years and live in Bradenton, FL. I have worked in the hospitality industry and food and beverage for the past 12 years. My husband has worked in the technology industry for 10 years. I have a Bachelor's degree in Accounting from the University of MN - Duluth. We are just getting started with investing our income.

$50,000 to $125,000

Florida > Aventura

Looking for companies that wish to raise capital for any situation, even start-ups.

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Lakeland

I am a trustee for a family trust looking to invest in profitable business's with good history. We have funds available for expansion, AR, capital improvements, ect. We are looking for an equity position in the company. We want to purchase the majority of the company within 5 years. This would be a good fit for an owner who is looking to retire soon. We prefer an asset purchase but would be open to a stock purchase.

$500,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Jacksonville

39 years old male living in jacksonville Florida. I am an individual investor, Worked many years in restaurant business and owned few places. Latetly working on healthcare start up business and trading cryptocurrency. Degree in biology and architectural engineering. Looking to invest. Whether if it is advisory role or silent.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Weston

Private investor with 20 years of retail experience.

$0 to $125,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

Retired firefighter with past real estate investment history.

$0 to $60,000

Florida > Bronson

Engineer with 30+ years of experience in designing Large scale Water Treatment Plants. Continuous innovation in improving the system performance and capital investments needed to solve a problem. Key strength is thinking outside the box and coming up with solutions that consistently delivered more customer orders for the company I worked for

$5,000 to $20,000