Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Bradenton

I am a 50 something, married entrepreneur from the UK. As our children are keen athletes, we have spent the past 4 years in Bradenton during the academic year. I am educated to MBA level, and recently sold my nursery school after 20 years of successful operation. I also previously owned an apprenticeship training company. I started both companies from scratch, therefore I am familiar with taking a company from the initial stages all the way through the growing cycle. As I am now spending more time in the US, I am looking for a company to invest, either as a silent or working partner and I would be looking to own at least 50% of the company.

$100,000 to $125,000

Florida > Jacksonville

I represent a small group of private investors looking to help fund proven and growing business models in Florida. We are want to invest in smaller businesses with good active management, a sound business model, and decent growth prospects for a reasonable ROI. We are more interested in debt financing but are not opposed to equity with the right company. What we are not looking for is to fund your start-up idea or help you get your business "off the ground".

$1,000 to $150,000

Florida > Winter Haven

I am a skilled software developer with a Bachelor's degree in Software Development from Universidad de las Ciencias Informáticas, La Habana, Cuba, attained in August 2014. My professional journey includes roles such as a Software Developer at companies like Magaya Corporation and International Market Center, where I developed scalable apps, integrated eCommerce platforms, and optimized systems for performance. I possess expertise in .Net Core, NodeJs, ReactJs, and have contributed to agile software development practices. Although I have not explicitly ventured into investment yet, my technical experience positions me well to understand and evaluate tech startups, especially those in the eCommerce and software sectors. I envision an advisory role, offering mentorship and leveraging contacts in the tech industry for strategic partnerships. Currently, my status is as an individual considering investment opportunities, seeking to collaborate with innovative businesses to drive growth

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Private investor in the financial services field with an extensive investment history.

$1,000,000 to $20,000,000

Florida > Indialantic

Education/Professional Certs: MBA, CPA Professional Experience: 15 years mgmt and executive experience in banking, advisory, and healthcare. Direct management of companies/teams of 50-150 with companies in all stages of life cycle. Anticipated Involvement: Advisory to Hands-On; No desire to be silent, at least initially

$25,000 to $500,000

Florida > Oviedo

Medical device executive and leadership for the past 20 years. Interested in unique opportunities that make a real difference in the lives of patients.

$5,000 to $25,000

Florida > Orlando

Like to give someone an opportunity to thrive just as I was once given an opportunity. There is greatness In all of us. 41 year old male out of Orlando FL. My experience is in running business such as construction/real estate and healthcare. I would be a silent parent and I'm an individual investor.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Tampa

Legal professional with a Juris Doctorate from Stetson University College of Law. Open to investments.

$50,000 to $200,000