Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > St Petersburg

Florida native seeking to get involved in my local communities through investment. My CV includes Business Development for Tampa Bay's largest landscape maintenance contractor. Special projects with a boutique private equity firm that owns, operates, and invests in real estate companies where I worked directly with the Executive Team to research, develop, and launch strategic investment strategies across multiple asset types including Multifamily, Single Family Residential, Mixed Use Commercial, Class A Commercial, Adaptive Reuse Commercial. Designed and managed business development strategies for several companies. Leased / Purchased 25 Class a retail locations for publicly traded cannabis operator in Fl.

$25,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Coconut Creek

We’re Candice and Fernando, a South Florida-based couple in our early 30s with a strong foundation in project management, banking, and legal support. With over 10 years of combined experience managing complex projects and navigating financial and legal systems, we bring structure, reliability, and strategic insight to the table. Our academic backgrounds in Construction Management and Law allow us to offer value beyond capital—assisting with scheduling, permitting, and construction-related logistics when needed. As property owners, we understand what it takes to invest smartly and build for the long term. We're currently seeking opportunities as silent investors where we can support passionate entrepreneurs while staying behind the scenes. We’re committed, professional, and ready to be the right partners to help scale your business.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Royal Palm Beach

Individual investor with experience in entertainment, hospitality, media, fully bilingual English and Spanish. Browsing opportunities to invest and grow.

$10,000 to $20,000

Florida > Longboat Key

President of plastics company with 25 years business to business sales experience.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Maitland

We structure each funding in a manner that takes into consideration the particular aspects and fundamentals of the Project / Business. Interest rates can range from 3.00% to 8.00% depending on a few factors. We can include part of the funding as equity if all parties agree this would enhance the performance of the Project / Business.You will need to have min 10% capital to add to project. Types of projects we look for are development, renovations, expansions and acquisitions. For international projects we start at $5,000,000 USD. USA projects we start at $500,000. After contract it will take 30-90 days to closing. If the Project has a construction loan / business phase that precedes permanent funding, then we would begin with a construction loan funding and then a roll into a permanent loan when construction phase is completed. Permanent loan can be from 5 years to 20 years in length. I hope this helps with your understanding of our process and general terms.

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Seminole

I am 47 years old and currently reside in Largo, Florida. I serve as a Branch Manager at a staffing agency in Tampa, FL. Over the course of my career, I have gained extensive experience in roles such as recruiter, account executive, client specialist, office manager, and Head of the People Department (HR). I hold a degree in Interior Design, am a certified notary, and have a passion for continuous learning and personal growth. I am a beginner in the world of investing and am eager to connect with like-minded individuals to collaboratively pursue opportunities that yield a strong return on investment (ROI). As a self-driven individual, I thrive on teamwork and am excited to embark on this new venture as an individual investor. I look forward to working with others who share a common goal of success and growth in the investment space.

$10,000 to $50,000

Florida > North Lauderdale

I am 34 year old married woman with two children. I am currently a business owner who is looking to invest in a profitable business. I have Master's degree in Educational Leadership, and studying for a PhD in business. I would like to invest in a business that is education or entertainment-based, but I will consider other options.

$500 to $10,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

We are a firm that operates as a private investment bank and advisory firm in St. Petersburg. We specialize in serving the industrials, healthcare, and technology sectors. Our range of services includes providing advice for mergers and acquisitions, handling both buy-side and sell-side transaction advisory, and expertly managing transactional due diligence and strategic implementation. In addition to these primary services, we offer access to private debt and equity to meet working capital needs, accurate business valuation, and strategic advisory services to maximize enterprise value. Our clientele comprises lower and middle-market businesses, family offices, trusts, boutique institutions, and private equity firms.

$1,000,000 to $500,000,000