Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Oldsmar

Have acquired and developed manufacturing services company with y/y growth of 25% and profitable every year. Sold to partner and went back to corporate America for 10 years. For the last three years enjoyed being an Entrepreneur and adviser to small and medium business owners who are working hard to achieve their dreams of building a successful company and growing their personal wealth. I have connections to a half dozen angels that look for good growth opportunities in a variety of different industries. I believe this site should provide some good deal flow.

$5,000 to $500,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

I am a private investor and own several salons in Florida but I want more challenges

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

Investor looking for Food and Beverage opportunities in South Florida.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Miami

Single, 55, residing in Miami-Dade area. Medical professional with business experience and investment experience. Hands on involvement. Honest, open minded, hard working and fair minded partner. Partner or investor role. Open to all areas. If you are a go-getter and honest With a great work ethic and currently working for somebody in the transportation field or oil and gas Or other..and have made a lot of people rich except yourself . Contact me -you won’t be sorry. Me and my partner will get involved hands-on and funds all in to make it happen the right way and protect you as our equal partner so it may be mutually fruitful environment .I do like to work with people that are more common sense and hard-working to make those business dreams come true and be truly independent . Myself and my partner are not in anyway greedy and just enjoy working as a team with great projects and with deserving individuals . If you’re a woman that’s An added bonus. “Women make great partners”

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Jacksonville

I represent a small group of private investors looking to help fund proven and growing business models in Florida. We are want to invest in smaller businesses with good active management, a sound business model, and decent growth prospects for a reasonable ROI. We are more interested in debt financing but are not opposed to equity with the right company. What we are not looking for is to fund your start-up idea or help you get your business "off the ground".

$1,000 to $150,000

Florida > Miami

Accounting background. Specialties include Auditing, Internal Controls, Corporate Governance, Risk Management, CCAR. I am looking for investment opportunities in Florida.

$100,000 to $500,000

Florida > Tampa

38, Currently working full time for Fortune 100 Company. Background in financial management, project management, IT, and real estate. Passion for making businesses more profitable and efficient.

$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Aventura

I am a FINANCIAL CONSULTANT that has direct lenders that are looking to loan for ASSET BASED SITUATIONS. There LTV depends on the situations, must have paper work, no dreamers. I DO NOT REQUIRE ANY RETAINERS.

$5,000,000 to $20,000,000