Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Longwood

Individual investor: finance/accounting professional in Central FL area looking to diversify investments as well as have the opportunity to participate in startups and small business; helping others while realizing a good return on capital. Post-graduate in Business/Accounting, 20 yrs experience as professional accountant from Big 4 through nuclear pharmacy and Fortune 15 telecom. Financial reporting experience can be provided as needed, as well as roll- up-my-sleeves financial consulting if warranted; level of involvement depends entirely upon the investment and the parties' preferences, ranging from hands-on to silent.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Coral Springs

I have a huge interest in everything green, plants, restoration, salvage. Have already been doing fix and flips for 10 years. Looking to get into nursery type business as a silent investor with preferably exotic tropical plants.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > Palm Beach Gardens

I am an experienced intermediary with a strong clientele of institutional and private investors and lenders. My firm has referral partners around the nation. I have historically specialized in the food service/retail space, however, I can handle a variety of transactions across numerous industries.

$100,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Weston

Private investor with 20 years of retail experience.

$0 to $125,000

Florida > Palm Harbor

I'm 38 years old, Single, located in Palm Harbor Florida. I'm a District Chief for a local fire department for the last 15 years. My highest level of education is a Master's degree in Public Administration. Having led crews on the fireground and managed diverse personnel at the fire station, I've developed leadership skills, training skills, and conflict resolution skills. I've helped develop all sorts of programs for our department and oversaw the logistics and finances associated with those programs. The vast majority of my informal education has been around leadership and developing/mentoring people. Mission First/People Always. I'm looking to move my skills into the private sector as an individual investor. I believe the type of investment will dictate the level of involvement I'd have, so I'm open to silent, advisory, and hands-on involvement. My work schedule is incredibly flexible, so I can dedicate time to a business venture if need be.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Naples

I am hold a doctorate in Chemical Engineering from the U of PA. I worked for 10 years developing aroma chemicals and another 10 years in scientific information management. So I know chemicals and software very well and in a highly creative sense. I am also a PMP (project management professional) so I get the job done. I recently moved with my husband to Vero and seek to develop a portfolio of interesting work through angel investing. Initially looking for hands-on involvement but that may decrease over time. I can also put a group of investors together. I am interested in manufacturing, engineering and technology projects.

$25,000 to $100,000

Florida > Punta Gorda

Investment Group located in Punta Gorda, FL. We invest in Florida's people and businesses.

$10,000 to $300,000

Florida > Orlando

I have over 32 years of experience in corporate advertising and marketing. Founder and president of a Michigan Avenue advertising and marketing agency specializing in advertising, promotion, and sales-incentive programs. Served a broad range of industries by creating successful selling models and up-sell strategies; developing, testing and refining integrated marketing strategies; and coordinating corporate communications and brand-identity programs for client companies. Created software that helped develop sales channels for the online services that automate the selling cycle, maximize clients' consumer facing business communications, consistently present clients' value proposition, and automatically initiate follow-up strategies.

$15,000 to $100,000