Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > St Petersburg

PhD with more than 20 years entrepreneur experience in scientific related business located in the Tampa Bay area. Interested in investing in innovative products and / or services. Can be advisory only or hands-on partner.

$1,000 to $500,000

Florida > Orange Park

My name is Carlos, 30 years old, married and 2 beautiful kids. Currently I am a Project Manager in a local company in Jacksonville, FL. I served in the military for 10 years as a Logistics Analyst and retired as an Executive Officer. I hold a Crimanal Justice Bachelors and currently pursuing my Master degree on Logistics and Supply Chain Management with Embry Riddle (Daytona, FL). I have invested over $200k in Real Estate for the past 2 years and have built 40% on equity on the properties. Extensive backgroung on logistics (transportation, warehouse and supply chain) with DOD and private companies. Anticipated involvement; a combination of all three depending on the industry (meaning if is part of my core values, and my knowledge I would preffer hands-on). Current status is individual investor with plans of opening an investment firm/group within the next 12 months.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Celebration

Long term track record in real estate investing. Have access to significant funds for the right proposition(s).

$100,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Vero Beach

Private investor interested in real estate.

$0 to $100,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

CEO of biotech company. Masters degree public relations. Connections with family offices and institutional investors.

$50,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Davie

We provide Hard Money Mortgages throughout the state of Florida. No games, Fast answers and the results you expect.

$100,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Rockledge

57, married, Rockledge, FL. While in grad school I was involved with SBIR projects. I joined a biosensor startup, ultimately sold them as a viscosity sensor company, and began working in wireless sensors. My partner and I were the first company to repay Maine Technology Institute's seed loans. I am now VP of R&D of a technology company serving the electric power industry and I havea senior engineering role to a startup company in which I am invested. I am making small seed investments from a self-directed IRA and I am interested in startups that I can help in some way, but I am not adverse to silent investment for the right deal. I have a 5 to 15 year perspective because of this, but quicker turnover is great. Investments to date are Helios Hockey, Insurgical, Knightscope, Liquid Piston, and Bonsi.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Jacksonville

We are a private family office that invests in public and private equities, venture capital opportunities and real estate. We are interested in acquiring majority interests or outright purchases of privately held enterprises in the small to middle market. We seek business’s with strong management in place and have shown proven track records of success. We work closely with management teams to foster strong and independent companies. We look to invest and engage in a broad range of investment activities and our objective is to take an active role in the operational and strategic futures of our investments. We are interested in companies or real estate that are located in the southeast region of the U.S.

$0 to $1,000,000