Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Lake Mary

Self-made investor who is responsible for screening, learning & possibly funding new and innovative ideas in the Orlando market. Mitchell brings not only financial backing, but a long list of additional assets such as networking contacts, real world experience in select fields and a deep knowledge of Orlando and surrounding areas and demographics. I have a BS in Civil Engineering from the University of Florida. I work in the engineering/construction field as an estimator for large civil/highway projects providing in-depth cost analysis for various roadway projects. Investment Experience included Real Estate & New Business Start-Up. Interested in diversification into other areas. Anticipated Involvement: Advisory, Silent Status: Individual Investor

$500 to $20,000

Florida > Daytona Beach

As one of the largest and fastest-growing small business finance facilitation companies in the United States, we are a dedicated to fundamentally changing how small businesses access capital. Combined our contracted funders have lent over $30 Billion to date and we expect nothing but explosive growth for the next few years. Our roots are in small business ownership. Our co-founders understand just how frustrating it can be to find the right kind of financing for your business after you have been turned down by your local bank, or have maxed out existing credit lines. We offer: APR Term Loans, Cash Advance /Consolidation Loans, Asset/Inventory/Receivables (Hybrid), Invoice Factoring, Inventory Financing, Subprime Equipment Leasing & Sale Leasebacks, Commercial Real Estate Financing, Growth Financing, Credit Lines, Special Corporate Protection & Restructure Consolidation

$50,000 to $90,000,000

Florida > Palm Beach Gardens

I am a 38yr old individual currently living in Palm Beach County, FL. I have experience in corporate trust services, and helped managed several power plants in the energy industry. I'm now involved in a work from home business and looking to invest in other businesses as a silent investor or hands-on Invested if I'm trained.

$50,000 to $150,000

Florida > Oldsmar

Have acquired and developed manufacturing services company with y/y growth of 25% and profitable every year. Sold to partner and went back to corporate America for 10 years. For the last three years enjoyed being an Entrepreneur and adviser to small and medium business owners who are working hard to achieve their dreams of building a successful company and growing their personal wealth. I have connections to a half dozen angels that look for good growth opportunities in a variety of different industries. I believe this site should provide some good deal flow.

$5,000 to $500,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

John started E*** Capital in NY in 1983 as a registered broker dealer for a series of successful government securities funds. The Company also raised investment capital for several small businesses and often took an active role in the management. Prior to the formation of E***, he had gained extensive experience at a number of mining and metals companies in Senior marketing and sales positions. These included Billiton Metals & Ores, Falconbridge Nickel and a NY based Division of Consolidated Goldfields. He was also an outside Director of Synalloy Corp. Spartanburg, SC (ASE) and Molycorp, NY,NY (NYSE). He graduated from Columbia University in NY and served in the US Marine Corps.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Tampa

I am Vice President of Mergers and Acquisitions at an Investment Group/Multi-Family Office. I am responsible for partnering with internal leadership teams and external advisers to develop investment theses and comprehensive inorganic/organic growth strategies in attractive core growth areas. Partnering with the internal and external teams I identify, prioritize, and execute strategic transactions that fit the Company's M&A Strategies. I am a member of the NACVA, ACG, as well as many other prestigious groups in order to build relationships with advisors, financial sponsors, lenders, and management teams in target industries in order to generate deal flow of attractive and actionable opportunities. I hold a B.A in Economics from Saint Leo University. Currently, I am attending the University of Florida School of Business to pursue an MBA.

$500,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Tampa

- Multiple deals currently involved in as a passive investor - Founding Member of New World Angels, Tampa Bay - 6 years in a Fortune 1000 company in a Sr. position - MBA in Marketing & Finance

$5,000 to $200,000

Florida > Marco Island

Private equity firm that specializes in Business with cash flow. All family money under management. Also own a 50 state mortgage lender with full FHA , FNMA , Freddie Mac authority for 23 years and started three national title companies. My main passion is in origination and underwriting

$25,000 to $2,000,000