Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Naples

I am looking for investment opportunities here in swfl and surrounding areas in South Florida

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > Odessa

I'm an investor looking for opportunities either as a silent or active investor including, but not limited to Multi Family Real Estate, Financial Markets, Automated Services (Amazon, Walmart, etc). I have diverse experience in finance, distribution, and insurance industries. Any scalable opportunity that can be reviewed and verified that has good potential please send my way.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

I have made four people millionaires. I sold my business in 1998 and have since looked at several angel opportunities and have invested in four. One of these was very successful, one is still being developed and two did not succeed. I have learned that the more I am able to know what is going on and the more the founder(s) are willing to learn from my 50 years of business experience to help, the better the chance of our success. All prospects must pass a complete background check.

$15,000 to $250,000

Florida > Bonita Springs

Real estate investor. Hotel owner & operator.

$100,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

John started E*** Capital in NY in 1983 as a registered broker dealer for a series of successful government securities funds. The Company also raised investment capital for several small businesses and often took an active role in the management. Prior to the formation of E***, he had gained extensive experience at a number of mining and metals companies in Senior marketing and sales positions. These included Billiton Metals & Ores, Falconbridge Nickel and a NY based Division of Consolidated Goldfields. He was also an outside Director of Synalloy Corp. Spartanburg, SC (ASE) and Molycorp, NY,NY (NYSE). He graduated from Columbia University in NY and served in the US Marine Corps.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Miami

I am the co-owner of a Corporation that offers mobile paramedical services, throughout Florida, with more than18 years of experience in the medical laboratory business. I am seeking to combine the platform that my current business has which includes more than 15 trained certified phlebotomists/nurses that offer different types of medical related services to patients at the convenience of their homes with another medical related business. My goal is to make an investment in the medical field, biotechnology, or molecular biology field. I would like to be an active investor by intervening as a consultant, hands-on or advisor to help grow a business which I would be passionate about. If the business constitutes an interesting challenge for me I would be your best choice as an investor.

$10,000 to $200,000

Florida > Davie

I am a 31 year old married Business Man, Located in South Florida. I have experience in several industries, I currently own a Luxury Transportation Company and I am ready to take the next step towards growing my capital, and looking to help any one along the way.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > St Petersburg

Florida native seeking to get involved in my local communities through investment. My CV includes Business Development for Tampa Bay's largest landscape maintenance contractor. Special projects with a boutique private equity firm that owns, operates, and invests in real estate companies where I worked directly with the Executive Team to research, develop, and launch strategic investment strategies across multiple asset types including Multifamily, Single Family Residential, Mixed Use Commercial, Class A Commercial, Adaptive Reuse Commercial. Designed and managed business development strategies for several companies. Leased / Purchased 25 Class a retail locations for publicly traded cannabis operator in Fl.

$25,000 to $1,000,000