Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > North Port

I am a former business owner (two businesses) who has been successful and am looking for an opportunity to invest and build capital.

$10,000 to $65,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

Credit Investor Over a million dollars liquid and income over $200,000 yearly

$50,000 to $200,000

Florida > Sarasota

40 years’ business experience. Held various senior management positions (CFO, COO). Owned and operated several companies. Counseled and raised funds for start-ups and small businesses. Hands-on exposure to business relocations, turnarounds, business acquisitions, and plant closings. Orchestrated successful IPO. Companies include: Pfizer, Emerson Electric, ITT, Huntington National Bank, Scotts Miracle-Gro, Erbamont NV, Bigmar Pharmaceuticals, and Manex Entertainment. Not looking for consulting gig - only interested in taking active role along side any investment. BS Economics; MBA; Veteran.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Daytona Beach

I am 25 years old. I used to work for 3 years as project engineer in the biggest oil company in the world Saudi Aramco. Currently I am working with Saudi Airline as a professional in which the company has sent me to US in order to get my pilot license. I have one investment in the entertainment field located in Washington D.C. I like to be part of new investments and new ideas. I am young but I am a fast learner. Moreover, I believe that the ship with two captains sinks. I will be part of the project I will help and I will support as needed. Otherwise, I will be more than happy just to watch and read the reports.

$50,000 to $150,000

Florida > Wellington

J.P. Morgan Analyst - 6 years Prudential Securities - 3 years Commercial Real Estate - 8 years Own & Operate Consulting Firm - 3 years

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Private investor with extensive experience in investment, and business management. Currently own and directly oversee three successful businesses ranging from Commercial R/E, Software Development, and Automotive After-market Chemical Manufacturing & Distribution.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > North Port

I am over 50 years old, and along with the restaurant experiences I have from 30 years in the business, I have also gained valuable administrative capabilities. I have set up, owned and operated several businesses. As the owner of a Mortgage company, I was constantly required to fulfill the rigorous compliance reports and strict recording duties required to maintain the FHA approval rating for government sponsored loans, Including audited financial statements. Also, while an owner I had gained additional experience of managing employees and several businesses at one time. I had a portfolio of 10 rental properties and had two corporations flowing all at the same time. After the recession I bought and sold properties. I hired out full crews of subcontractors from a myriad of trades to get the job done as efficiently as possible and maximize profits. Leading into partnering with a builder where I built houses for sale.

$10,000 to $50,000

Florida > Fort Walton Beach

I am an MBA student looking to possibly make investments. I am looking to diversify how and where I put my money. I will consider investments in any category, but will have more passion for projects in film or music.

$0 to $50,000