Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Miami

MBA with extensive professional experience willing to invest in expanding business.

$1 to $200,000

Florida > Ruskin

38 years in software development.

$1 to $100,000

Florida > Tampa

I am Vice President of Mergers and Acquisitions at an Investment Group/Multi-Family Office. I am responsible for partnering with internal leadership teams and external advisers to develop investment theses and comprehensive inorganic/organic growth strategies in attractive core growth areas. Partnering with the internal and external teams I identify, prioritize, and execute strategic transactions that fit the Company's M&A Strategies. I am a member of the NACVA, ACG, as well as many other prestigious groups in order to build relationships with advisors, financial sponsors, lenders, and management teams in target industries in order to generate deal flow of attractive and actionable opportunities. I hold a B.A in Economics from Saint Leo University. Currently, I am attending the University of Florida School of Business to pursue an MBA.

$500,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Miami

I am 42 years old and have worked in operations and business turnaround at both board and delivery management levels. I am married with a child and looking to move back to Miami with my family so am looking at worthwhile investments. I have invested in a number of businesses and currently run a successful business consultancy in the UK. I am expecting to have a hands on approach at the outset but want to make sure the business is staffed up to manage ongoing daily operations whilst I focus in on Mergers, Acquisitions and Agglomerations for the business.

$1,000,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Palm City

Have invested in publishing & industrial trade shows in USA, South America, South Africa; financial businesses in USA, incl. start up banking; direct mail advertising Editor and Publisher of trade publications; executive director of several industrial trade associations; currently serving as director of multiple location local bank; served on numerous for-profit and non-profit companies and organizations; currently manage a small portfolio of private residential mortgages and a small thoroughbred horse racing and breeding operation Private investor

$2,500 to $100,000

Florida > Jupiter

Private investor with experience in telecoms, apps, eCommerce and all things web. Loves the buzz of startups or taking co's to the next level. Prefer hands on but willing to sit and comment / advise. Originally from the UK with strong business links both sides of the pond.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Aventura

Fifty year old seasoned businessman, investor and attorney with experience across various sectors. Located in Miami and primarily interested in opportunities that have revenues and strong leadership.

$200,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Riverview

I'm a 41 year old married firefighter in Tampa Florida. I have an associates degree in fire science along with many certifications in the fire service career including management certifications as well. I also have invested into real estate but looking into investing into other business interest. I’m willing to be hands-on or silent investor. I want to invest into someone who is just as passionate about their business interest as I am about mine. I only want to invest in the Tampa Bay Florida area.

$0 to $30,000