Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Destin

I am a private investor located in North Florida, I have worked with several small start up businesses over the past 30 years. During that time these companies grew and were extremely successful. I recently sold one of my companies and I'm looking for that entrepreneur with a strong work ethic, motivation, product or idea. My involvement would be in an advisory role as needed.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Abu Dhabi

I'm a 31 year old female. I live in the UAE and am ready to invest in a startup or a running business up to 250000USD provided that I get 51% equity. That will qualify me to obtain a visa. I don’t need to have a management role in the business.

$50,000 to $200,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

Credit Investor Over a million dollars liquid and income over $200,000 yearly

$50,000 to $200,000

Florida > Orlando

I am a nurse. I have a self-directed IRA. I have some done a handful of realty projects. Silent involvement. Individual investor.

$0 to $250,000

Florida > Brandon

I’m 44 yrs old. Never been married but have a fiancé with a total of 6 kids. I dropped out in the 9th grade but got my ged at the age of 30. I’m not ashamed to say this as I do well for my self compared to a lot of college graduates. I’m a strong believer that if you work hard for what you want you will achieve your goals but you have to stay focused and believe in yourself. I like having conversation with successful people to learn and create ideas from them. This is what helped me in life. I purchased my first home at the age of 18. I was determined to do this as I knew this could put me ahead considering I had no school background. It all paid off from there, I purchased other properties that I currently rent out and others flipped. I also now hold my real estate licence which helps me find deals for my self & save on commission. On top of my real estate investments I do hold a w2 job which pays pretty well. I work remotely for a transportation company out in the west coast.

$20,000 to $80,000

Florida > Beverly Hills

I’m 45, happily married to my amazing wife, and based in Central Florida (where it’s always either sunny, raining, or both). I’m an individual investor, creative producer, and entrepreneur with hands-on experience building brands from idea to execution. I hold a BA in International Studies/Political Science (USF) and an MA in Ancient & Classical History (APUS). I’ve founded and grown projects like talent show, covering events, digital platforms, storytelling, and media production. My investment experience comes from creating, funding, and scaling my own ventures, blending strategy, marketing, content, and community building. I bring real-world execution, strong creative vision, and operational support, not just capital. My involvement varies from hands-on to advisory, depending on what founders need most. If you want an investor who truly builds with you, I’m your person.

$1 to $20,000

Florida > Delray Beach

Always looking for opportunities. Open minded.

$10 to $100,000

Florida > Miami

MBA with extensive professional experience willing to invest in expanding business.

$1 to $200,000