Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Hudson

I'm married, located in Florida and work as an Independent Aviation Program Management Consultant. Education - Professional Management designations from the Canadian Institute of Management, Barrie Ontario, Canada, (CIM, P. Mgr., C. Mgr.) and a Certified Management Designation (CM) from James Madison University, Virginia USA. Experience - Airline/Airport General Manager, Sr. Manager Airport Planning & Development, Director Real Estate and Airport Affairs (35 Years). Background - Airline Operations Expert, Airport Terminal Development - Runways/Taxiways/Fees & Charges/Privatization of Airports (FAA/TC)/Aircraft Maintenance Hangars/GSE facilities. Role - Advisory and silent and individual investor preferred.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Pompano Beach

Our investment group funds oil & gas projects.

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Niceville

I'm particularly interested in investing in the Florida panhandle region but will consider anything in Florida or the southeast. My background is primarily in warehousing, distribution, transportation, and retail management. I have an undergraduate degree in project management and an MBA with a specialization in strategic leadership.

$1 to $25,000

Florida > Palm Beach

We invest in growth or innovative opportunities with great management and Founder vision, who are risk takers in medical technology and diagnostics, manufacturing, retail goods, and technology where we can help the company’s management become great leaders and scale and achieve their objectives by becoming a value-added partner with our capital and decades of entrepreneurial, Operational Growth management and high-performance team development experience.

$500,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Miami Beach

We manage a small investment fund. Our preferred structure is a convertible debenture. We do asset based loans with or without equity kicker. Do not invest in pure start ups.

$100,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Melbourne

Small investor interested in most any high margin business.

$1 to $15,000

Florida > Lake Worth Beach

My husband and I are professionals in South Florida with almost two decades of international relations/law enforcement experience, as well as degrees in a related field. We are looking to become silent partners to help a new start-up or existing small business reach their full potential!

$0 to $40,000

Florida > Daytona Beach

I am 25 years old. I used to work for 3 years as project engineer in the biggest oil company in the world Saudi Aramco. Currently I am working with Saudi Airline as a professional in which the company has sent me to US in order to get my pilot license. I have one investment in the entertainment field located in Washington D.C. I like to be part of new investments and new ideas. I am young but I am a fast learner. Moreover, I believe that the ship with two captains sinks. I will be part of the project I will help and I will support as needed. Otherwise, I will be more than happy just to watch and read the reports.

$50,000 to $150,000