Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tampa

If you got nice concepts and good business ideas, you will be signed......Any Business that can get me 20% interest in 1 year....

$50,000 to $200,000

Florida > Ponte Vedra Beach

I'm a digital transformation-focused technology executive that recently sold a government contracting consulting firm. I'm looking to get involved with new and interesting ideas with high energy, passionate people. Background is tech and finance (investment banking focused on M&A). Formal education includes law degree and MBA. I'm happy to be actively engaged or passive, based on whether I can add value.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Winter Park

I am a real estate investor in Orlando, FL, looking for distressed properties in the East Orlando, Winter Park and Kissimmee area. The numbers must make sense and must be competitive. The amount of wholesalers in this region has driven REO bank owned real estate prices above usual business. I am working with private investors from the U.S. and flip some of these properties right over to them as an assignment if it does not meet my immediate needs.

$25,000 to $400,000

Florida > Miami

Experience in the US and Latam markets.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Longwood

Currently CEO of a $1B global travel company, which was recently sold to a large PE firm. Looking for interesting investment opportunities.

$50,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Miami Beach

I live in the United States and Germany and looking for opportunities to bring debt/equity capital for companies looking to grow or restructure finances. I studied at NYU and have experience in real estate development, hospitality and private equity. I like investing in companies with strong financials and have experienced growth.

$100,000 to $500,000

Florida > Miami

I am an individual investor, with expertise in healthcare and biotechnology and an interest in agriculture and the environment. I am looking to make small investments only at this time and would prefer an advisory role at most.

$0 to $15,000

Florida > Sarasota

Real Estate Broker, class A AC license. Owner in contracting business.

$10,000 to $100,000