Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Orlando

Looking for trucking individuals specifically. However, open to all new investment opportunities.

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > Coconut Creek

We’re Candice and Fernando, a South Florida-based couple in our early 30s with a strong foundation in project management, banking, and legal support. With over 10 years of combined experience managing complex projects and navigating financial and legal systems, we bring structure, reliability, and strategic insight to the table. Our academic backgrounds in Construction Management and Law allow us to offer value beyond capital—assisting with scheduling, permitting, and construction-related logistics when needed. As property owners, we understand what it takes to invest smartly and build for the long term. We're currently seeking opportunities as silent investors where we can support passionate entrepreneurs while staying behind the scenes. We’re committed, professional, and ready to be the right partners to help scale your business.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Punta Gorda

I am a military Veteran living in SW FL who is a 40+ year old professional with an MBA, who has focused in manufacturing / logistics / supply chain over the past 20 years. I also hold a Lean Six Sigma Black belt and have been highly trained in multiple manufacturing and logistics principles. I have a technical background on top of my manufacturing / logistics / supply chain experience. I do expect to have a level of advisory involvement and reporting. However, I am not currently interested in being in the daily operations unless it was required due to the growth curve. I am not afraid to get my hands dirty.

$100 to $15,000

Florida > Pembroke Pines

39 year old married in South Florida. Have managed sales and other aspects of distribution in automotive and re-newable energy. Open to being a silent or active partner. Individual investors.

$20,000 to $200,000

Florida > Windermere

I am a current owner of a Home Health Agency located in Orlando. Due to the moratorium that has been placed on new Home health Agency whereby you cannot get license to serve Medicare\medicaid patients, I ended up serving only patient with commercial insurance or Workers compensation. I hold a Masters Degree in Nutrition Science. I live in Windermere. I would like to acquire a medicare\medicaid Licensed Agency that is serving Orange, Seminole, Brevard and Osceola county. I am seeking a business partner or seeking to invest in opportunities in medical professional fields.

$20,000 to $50,000

Florida > Naples

We are a married couple living in Naples, Florida. College educated with B.A. and Masters of Teaching. Currently I am the Director of Sales and Business Development while my wife is a Florida real estate agent. Formerly, I was a business owner for 13 years while my wife was an educator. Together we own investment properties and have a wide range of life experience and knowledge in several different areas. We can be hands-on when needed, act in an advisory capacity or be silent depending on the project and needs of the business owner.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

Married with two young children in south Florida. Outside the box visionary with broad understanding to the needs of people, process and implementation for profit. Regular trips and doing business in Chicago, New York, Houston , North carolinaacross Florida. Ongoing investments in range of small business. Anticipated involvement multiple possibilities based on need and opportunity - limited hands-on, advisory, silent, etc. I am an individual investor that utilizes my executive team to analyze businesses, Land or Property to find opportunity of profit. This can be the development of land or property, Set up of a startup business, re structuring a current business to achieve its potential this may be done either through acquisition or on a consultation basis. Equity or debt.

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Maitland

We structure each funding in a manner that takes into consideration the particular aspects and fundamentals of the Project / Business. Interest rates can range from 3.00% to 8.00% depending on a few factors. We can include part of the funding as equity if all parties agree this would enhance the performance of the Project / Business.You will need to have min 10% capital to add to project. Types of projects we look for are development, renovations, expansions and acquisitions. For international projects we start at $5,000,000 USD. USA projects we start at $500,000. After contract it will take 30-90 days to closing. If the Project has a construction loan / business phase that precedes permanent funding, then we would begin with a construction loan funding and then a roll into a permanent loan when construction phase is completed. Permanent loan can be from 5 years to 20 years in length. I hope this helps with your understanding of our process and general terms.

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000