Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Orlando

I am an accomplished management professional, boasting a rich background encompassing business, construction, medical device development, and military leadership. As President of a holding company, I seek to propel growth and market expansion via strategic acquisitions, capitalizing on my proficiency in market research, financial modeling, and negotiation. Formerly, I founded the premier aquatics services provider in Greater Orlando. My leadership steered a threefold business growth in four years, culminating in its acquisition by a national pool service company. With an MBA from Florida Institute of Technology and a BS in Industrial Technology from the University of Nebraska, I wield a robust educational foundation. I hold designations as a Certified General Contractor (CGC), Certified Pool/Spa Contractor (CPC), and Microsoft Certified Systems Engineer (MCSE), underscoring my dedication to industry standards.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Bonita Springs

Private Money. 25 yrs experience.

$350,000 to $15,000,000

Florida > Clearwater

Currently I am a part time equity investment consultant to a Miami based hedge fund. I am also involved in entrepreneurial projects/ investments within the auto & consumer finance industries. Prior professional experience: Vice President at Goldman Sachs and Fortress Investment Group where I was an analyst specializing in the consumer and healthcare sectors. Prior to Goldman, I worked at Wellington Management a Boston based asset manager with over 800 Billion in assets under management. I have an MBA from Emory University with a specialization in finance. I have completed level 1&2 of the CFA exam.

$1 to $1,000,000

Florida > Odessa

My name is Carl Nicks. I'm 28 years old. I've been a professional athlete going on 7 years. I have a pretty good portfolio but really want to diversify it and hopefully join some of you in lucrative business opportunities. I won't act like I am a Shark from the tv show Shark Tank I do have common sense and I wouldn't be where I am without a little smarts. If u want to take your business to the next level or need some capital to get started I would be glad to listen.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Miami

Single, 55, residing in Miami-Dade area. Medical professional with business experience and investment experience. Hands on involvement. Honest, open minded, hard working and fair minded partner. Partner or investor role. Open to all areas. If you are a go-getter and honest With a great work ethic and currently working for somebody in the transportation field or oil and gas Or other..and have made a lot of people rich except yourself . Contact me -you won’t be sorry. Me and my partner will get involved hands-on and funds all in to make it happen the right way and protect you as our equal partner so it may be mutually fruitful environment .I do like to work with people that are more common sense and hard-working to make those business dreams come true and be truly independent . Myself and my partner are not in anyway greedy and just enjoy working as a team with great projects and with deserving individuals . If you’re a woman that’s An added bonus. “Women make great partners”

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Boca Raton

I am an IT and Supply Chain consultant for very large/global companies. I have several real estate investment condos in South Florida. I also have a small financial company for stocks and Mutual funds investments. Looking for new investments in startup companies and/or for someone with a new product and looking for a partner to help grow the business. As I am in IT, Supply Chain, real estate and financial markets, I could be a great addition to you to make any business achieve its success. I also speak 5 languages in case the business requires to connect with different countries.

$10,000 to $300,000

Florida > Tampa

25 years on the street.

$10,000,000 to $9,999,999,999

Florida > West Palm Beach

31 year old, individual investor. Over 12 years of work experience in marketing, sales, and project management.

$1 to $100,000