Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tampa

Accomplished professional with over 20 years of experience in a variety of industries, interested in a wide range of projects and businesses.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Miami

Our mission is "Great Association With Quality Deal Flow". Forum members provide early-stage capital in the range of $250K-$2m. Members collaborate in the due diligence process, but make individual investment decisions. Accredited Investors. Email for more details.

$250,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > St Petersburg

40 year old entrepreneur with more than 20 years of experience looking for innovative products, services or solutions. STEM and scientific background, PhD, MBA. Can be fully involved or silent partner.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Seminole

I am 47 years old and currently reside in Largo, Florida. I serve as a Branch Manager at a staffing agency in Tampa, FL. Over the course of my career, I have gained extensive experience in roles such as recruiter, account executive, client specialist, office manager, and Head of the People Department (HR). I hold a degree in Interior Design, am a certified notary, and have a passion for continuous learning and personal growth. I am a beginner in the world of investing and am eager to connect with like-minded individuals to collaboratively pursue opportunities that yield a strong return on investment (ROI). As a self-driven individual, I thrive on teamwork and am excited to embark on this new venture as an individual investor. I look forward to working with others who share a common goal of success and growth in the investment space.

$10,000 to $50,000

Florida > Naples

We are a married couple living in Naples, Florida. College educated with B.A. and Masters of Teaching. Currently I am the Director of Sales and Business Development while my wife is a Florida real estate agent. Formerly, I was a business owner for 13 years while my wife was an educator. Together we own investment properties and have a wide range of life experience and knowledge in several different areas. We can be hands-on when needed, act in an advisory capacity or be silent depending on the project and needs of the business owner.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Casselberry

Middle aged professional with 20 years experience growing and optimizing startup to growth phase companies.

$0 to $10,000,000

Florida > North Lauderdale

I am 34 year old married woman with two children. I am currently a business owner who is looking to invest in a profitable business. I have Master's degree in Educational Leadership, and studying for a PhD in business. I would like to invest in a business that is education or entertainment-based, but I will consider other options.

$500 to $10,000

Florida > Seffner

Have some money, and want to make more. Can be involved, or silent partner. 15 years experience social service field. BS. Psychology, Certified Addiction Professional. Almost 40 , married.

$0 to $200,000