Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Boynton Beach

Married with two young children in south Florida. Outside the box visionary with broad understanding to the needs of people, process and implementation for profit. Regular trips and doing business in Chicago, New York, Houston , North carolinaacross Florida. Ongoing investments in range of small business. Anticipated involvement multiple possibilities based on need and opportunity - limited hands-on, advisory, silent, etc. I am an individual investor that utilizes my executive team to analyze businesses, Land or Property to find opportunity of profit. This can be the development of land or property, Set up of a startup business, re structuring a current business to achieve its potential this may be done either through acquisition or on a consultation basis. Equity or debt.

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Tampa

Serial investor and entrepreneur for over 20 years. Experience in several industries to include SPACS and the public market. Currently CEO of two public companies with access to a variety of resources.

$25,000 to $500,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Over 20 years experience in investing in small companies

$100,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Miami

Private and group investor

$2,000,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Miramar

I am a 43 year old investor with a wife and child looking to diversify our investments. I am a fireman by trade and also own a financial advisory firm. I am a Certified Financial Planner professional and have a Bachelor's degree. Looking mainly for silent roles for my personal portfolio.

$50,000 to $250,000

Florida > Parkland

I I am a personal investor with a background in the hospitality business. I am looking to possibly invest in promising startups as a silent partner. I live in Boca Raton, Florida so am especially interested in ventures located nearby, although this is just a preference not a requirement.

$10,000 to $500,000

Florida > Destin

I am a private investor located in North Florida, I have worked with several small start up businesses over the past 30 years. During that time these companies grew and were extremely successful. I recently sold one of my companies and I'm looking for that entrepreneur with a strong work ethic, motivation, product or idea. My involvement would be in an advisory role as needed.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Port Saint Lucie

We are in the process of selling our previous business and are looking for new opportunities

$50,000 to $300,000