Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Miami Beach

I have been working as an investment analyst for a Hedge Fund for the past 3 years. I have recently decided to become involved with my family business and we are looking to expand our operations through new investment opportunities.

$100,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Orlando

God has given my wife and I an incredible opportunity to invest in the right opportunity. I am currently a Technical Training Specialist for Siemens Wind Energy. My wife and I have a deeper passion and purpose in life and that is for "people". We pray about every single decision we make, and he hasn't led us in the wrong direction yet, and he never will. We are grateful for this opportunity because what we ultimately want to keep reinvesting so that we can take care of our family first, our ministry, and the people that we invest in. We look forward to speaking with you soon!

$0 to $700,000

Florida > Orlando

I run my own successful rental business and am looking for other opportunities to fund my retirement. Not particular about industry, interested in anything with strong growth or expansion potential. Prefer to have minimal involvement but can help in the beginning if the investment is right.

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > Tampa

- Multiple deals currently involved in as a passive investor - Founding Member of New World Angels, Tampa Bay - 6 years in a Fortune 1000 company in a Sr. position - MBA in Marketing & Finance

$5,000 to $200,000

Florida > Naples

I am hold a doctorate in Chemical Engineering from the U of PA. I worked for 10 years developing aroma chemicals and another 10 years in scientific information management. So I know chemicals and software very well and in a highly creative sense. I am also a PMP (project management professional) so I get the job done. I recently moved with my husband to Vero and seek to develop a portfolio of interesting work through angel investing. Initially looking for hands-on involvement but that may decrease over time. I can also put a group of investors together. I am interested in manufacturing, engineering and technology projects.

$25,000 to $100,000

Florida > Clearwater

Currently I am a part time equity investment consultant to a Miami based hedge fund. I am also involved in entrepreneurial projects/ investments within the auto & consumer finance industries. Prior professional experience: Vice President at Goldman Sachs and Fortress Investment Group where I was an analyst specializing in the consumer and healthcare sectors. Prior to Goldman, I worked at Wellington Management a Boston based asset manager with over 800 Billion in assets under management. I have an MBA from Emory University with a specialization in finance. I have completed level 1&2 of the CFA exam.

$1 to $1,000,000

Florida > Jupiter

Private investor with experience in telecoms, apps, eCommerce and all things web. Loves the buzz of startups or taking co's to the next level. Prefer hands on but willing to sit and comment / advise. Originally from the UK with strong business links both sides of the pond.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Cooper City

I am 57, married and living in FL. I am working as a consultant in the CRE finance and investment industry. My background is in law, credit and banking. I have a BA in economics from Michigan and a Joint JD/MBA from Columbia. I have invested in a number of CRE deals as well as a smattering of other sectors, including TMT and biotech. Depending on the opportunity and the need, I can be more or less involved as warranted.

$25,000 to $100,000