Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Cape Coral

I work as an independent broker in Cape Coral, Florida. We provide funding for all types of businesses and various circumstances.

$250,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Howey In The Hills

I have been in the real-estate investment business for more than twenty years.

$25,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Daytona Beach

I am 25 years old. I used to work for 3 years as project engineer in the biggest oil company in the world Saudi Aramco. Currently I am working with Saudi Airline as a professional in which the company has sent me to US in order to get my pilot license. I have one investment in the entertainment field located in Washington D.C. I like to be part of new investments and new ideas. I am young but I am a fast learner. Moreover, I believe that the ship with two captains sinks. I will be part of the project I will help and I will support as needed. Otherwise, I will be more than happy just to watch and read the reports.

$50,000 to $150,000

Florida > Lutz

Personal information: 36 year old physician, married, living in Florida Professional experience: Background in medicine, systems engineering, non- profit sector, and private equity Seeking investments focused on renewable energy, sustainable buildings, and other envoronmental themes.

$50,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Seffner

Have some money, and want to make more. Can be involved, or silent partner. 15 years experience social service field. BS. Psychology, Certified Addiction Professional. Almost 40 , married.

$0 to $200,000

Florida > Apollo Beach

Female investor in the South Tampa Bay area looking to find the right investment opportunity. Self-employed running a profitable healthcare consulting company for the past 3 years. Previously ran a $85M medical billing operation for a nationwide organization. Experience working with teams worldwide and extensive exposure to India operations. Interested in variety of levels of investment, least excited about silent, but would consider for the right deal. Would love to help others to be successful.

$1 to $50,000

Florida > Abu Dhabi

I'm a 31 year old female. I live in the UAE and am ready to invest in a startup or a running business up to 250000USD provided that I get 51% equity. That will qualify me to obtain a visa. I don’t need to have a management role in the business.

$50,000 to $200,000

Florida > Hialeah

I'm a Miami, Florida-based individual investor with a background in building contracting and a passion for supporting entrepreneurs. With an MBA and experience in construction, education, and real estate industries, I bring a unique perspective to investments. My academic background includes a Bachelor's degree in Engineering and an MBA, providing me with a solid foundation for understanding business dynamics. In my professional life, I've worked as a building contractor, honing my skills in project management, budgeting, and risk assessment. This experience has equipped me with the ability to evaluate business proposals from a practical standpoint, ensuring they have the potential for success. I've invested in several companies in the construction, education, and real estate sectors, and I've been involved in various capacities, from advisory roles to hands-on management. My goal is not just to provide capital but to also offer my expertise and network to help entrepreneurs succeed

$15,000 to $150,000