Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Orlando

I am an accomplished management professional, boasting a rich background encompassing business, construction, medical device development, and military leadership. As President of a holding company, I seek to propel growth and market expansion via strategic acquisitions, capitalizing on my proficiency in market research, financial modeling, and negotiation. Formerly, I founded the premier aquatics services provider in Greater Orlando. My leadership steered a threefold business growth in four years, culminating in its acquisition by a national pool service company. With an MBA from Florida Institute of Technology and a BS in Industrial Technology from the University of Nebraska, I wield a robust educational foundation. I hold designations as a Certified General Contractor (CGC), Certified Pool/Spa Contractor (CPC), and Microsoft Certified Systems Engineer (MCSE), underscoring my dedication to industry standards.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Bell

I am a semi-retired entrepreneur looking to divest of stock and bond market risk and invest in and help manage residential real estate opportunities in the State of Florida. I have always had good instincts in sourcing and adding value to underutilized properties, and have done this consistently over a 25 year period. However, I am at a point where I would like to leverage both capital and resources and explore this opportunity on a more full-time basis. I have an MBA in Finance & Marketing and have used both skills working with both large corporations and small businesses. I'm looking to invest $50,000-$100,000 on a per project basis and would anticipate a minimal 30% return over a 2 year period. I live in North Central Florida, but am in Central Florida (Tampa area) on a regular basis.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

I own two companies and 17 rental units...looking to expand.

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > Gulfport

Real estate acquisitions manager. Looking to invest in real estate.

$30,000 to $50,000

Florida > Clermont

Medical professional looking to invest in a Florida based business.

$1,000 to $75,000

Florida > Palm Beach Gardens

I am a Licensed GC and Realtor in Florida, executive VP of Operations and business owner. I am looking for scalable market disruptor products and real estate opportunities. I can be a silent partner or fill advisory role.

$10,000 to $75,000

Florida > Hypoluxo

Married man living in Hypoluxo looking to invest, advise or be a working partner. I have owned companies and have experience in Florida Solar and Mobility products, and handicap vans.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Clearwater

I am 39 years old. I am married and I have two children (2 and 6). I have been banker for 13 years. We came from Hungary where I have led branches for 7 years. We live in Clearwater, Florida. I have been an investor for 4 years. I have investments in Florida, Seattle and New York. I am interested in short-term investments mainly (3-6 months). I am a silent individual investor. I would like to invest in a productive and organized company.

$1,000 to $50,000