Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Cape Coral

SW Florida investor focusing on short term loans.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Orlando

Active Investor interested in commercial property and real estate

$100,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Middleburg

I am a Navy veteran looking to invest in a small business/product. I currently live in Jacksonville, FL. I am willing to be hands-on, but I will be satisfied with also becoming a silent partner.

$1 to $20,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

I have made four people millionaires. I sold my business in 1998 and have since looked at several angel opportunities and have invested in four. One of these was very successful, one is still being developed and two did not succeed. I have learned that the more I am able to know what is going on and the more the founder(s) are willing to learn from my 50 years of business experience to help, the better the chance of our success. All prospects must pass a complete background check.

$15,000 to $250,000

Florida > Fleming Island

Married for 28 years, I am a 30 year retired Navy veteran with an aviation maintenance and management background and I am currently out of Jacksonville Florida. I have a Bachelors Degree in Professional Aeronautics and MBA in Quality Management. Unfortunately I do not have extensive background as an investor however always looking for ways to expand investment opportunities. I have extensive training in Leadership development and problem solving skills. Adapts to any environment quickly and excels. Looking to invest in the right opportunity as an individual investor and support to the fullest extent possible. For all you Entrepreneur's out there, good luck on your quest and wish only the best.

$0 to $75,000

Florida > Weeki Wachee

I am looking to invest in a business that I wish I could create myself but do not have the time to start from scratch. I have a Master's in Applied Economics and I've been working in the financial sector since 2008. Growing and through 2014 I worked in a broad range of hospitality businesses and that's where my true interest remains. Combined with my hands on experience and technical background, I will invest in the business I think has the best potential and can provide feedback.

$1,000 to $30,000

Florida > Delray Beach

Always looking for opportunities. Open minded.

$10 to $100,000

Florida > Tampa

Legal professional with a Juris Doctorate from Stetson University College of Law. Open to investments.

$50,000 to $200,000