Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Lithia

Married couple looking to be active investors in Brandon/Tampa Area Wife works full time in aerospace with masters degree; husband worked as manager in large automotive plant, has bachelors degree and served 20 years in the Marine Corps. Looking to partner for a small business opportunity.

$0 to $100,000

Florida > Palm Harbor

I'm 38 years old, Single, located in Palm Harbor Florida. I'm a District Chief for a local fire department for the last 15 years. My highest level of education is a Master's degree in Public Administration. Having led crews on the fireground and managed diverse personnel at the fire station, I've developed leadership skills, training skills, and conflict resolution skills. I've helped develop all sorts of programs for our department and oversaw the logistics and finances associated with those programs. The vast majority of my informal education has been around leadership and developing/mentoring people. Mission First/People Always. I'm looking to move my skills into the private sector as an individual investor. I believe the type of investment will dictate the level of involvement I'd have, so I'm open to silent, advisory, and hands-on involvement. My work schedule is incredibly flexible, so I can dedicate time to a business venture if need be.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Weston

I as many individuals who have dreams and ideas of a better life for oneself and family, but like many “it is all depended on money” for the first steps of the dream to come true. I was blessed in making my dreams come true. So, as I was helped so I would like to help. The objective is to help others and at the same time make money for all who are in the process. MM

$25,000 to $500,000

Florida > Tampa

A financial advisory firm that provides companies with time sensitive financing needs access to senior debt, mezzanine and private equity capital for the purposes of refinancing, acquisition, restructuring and growth initiatives. Our experience spans a broad range of industries including energy, financial services, media/broadcasting, real estate, healthcare, telecom manufacturing, distribution and emerging technology to name a few. With access to over $5 billion of capital through our financing resources, Prestige has the ability to help clients quickly structure meaningful equity, senior debt and mezzanine capital. We will also make direct investment from time to time.

$2,000,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Oviedo

Married couple with over 20 years experience in the HR, food services and technology industry. Looking for the right investment opportunity to invest and be a part of. We are hands on individuals that want to be part of making your vision come true.

$1 to $50,000

Florida > Nokomis

We offer large capital contributions for existing, start up and emerging growth companies covering a wide array of industries. Our capital is non recourse and non collateral based in increments of $10,000,000 to $100,000,000 totaling $500,000,000 per client. Please note this is not traditional bank financing rather a unique and different approach to capital funding. We offer a streamlined process with an initial due diligence followed by project (or business) approval. A fair and reasonable equity position or a fee from the capital proceeds can be negotiated. Our relationship and funding source is with a U.S. based multi-billion dollar family office. We invite you to learn more about this funding process by contacting us.

$10,000,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Green Cove Springs

Senior Executive with over 30 years of business experience in several different industries looking to invest in a business. Prefer existing business with revenues.

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Jupiter

Finance consultant, former CFO, and board member that has worked with later stage (pre-IPO) companies to improve systems and processes. Invest in varying stages of healthcare, ed tech and software companies.

$25,000 to $200,000