Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Miami Beach

I have been working as an investment analyst for a Hedge Fund for the past 3 years. I have recently decided to become involved with my family business and we are looking to expand our operations through new investment opportunities.

$100,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Hollywood

64 y/o retired medical physician, married, and looking to be an investor.

$500,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Orlando

33 yrs old in Orlando, FL. 10yrs Network Engineer experience. Individual Investor.

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > Sunrise

We established entrepreneur looking to help expand another business.

$100,000 to $200,000

Florida > Miami Beach

Young professional with Financial Healthcare background, looking for opportunities in the sector. I am looking to partner with a clinician background person or looking to acquire an established business. While I am an investor I will be actively managing or participating on the management of the target company. I have academic and professional background in finance, however I am open to opportunities within other industries that entitle professional services or a recurring revenue factor. If you are looking to sell/ or a partner to acquire part of your business or start a new business lets discuss and see if we can reach an agreement. At this point I have been exploring opportunities such as a medical practice (Adults) or a home health agency. My ideal partner for this types of businesses would be someone with a medical background (Physician, Nurse practitioner or RN).

$100,000 to $500,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

I have made four people millionaires. I sold my business in 1998 and have since looked at several angel opportunities and have invested in four. One of these was very successful, one is still being developed and two did not succeed. I have learned that the more I am able to know what is going on and the more the founder(s) are willing to learn from my 50 years of business experience to help, the better the chance of our success. All prospects must pass a complete background check.

$15,000 to $250,000

Florida > Winston

I'm an owner of a private investment company that has a diverse portfolio of holdings ranging from notes/loans/deeds/liens to start up ventures. Some investments under the SEC CF-reg A or title II/III act. I'm strictly an arms length investor, except FL. tax liens auctions. I believe in investing back into local community, its what made this country gr8.

$1 to $25,000

Florida > Lakeland

Logistics, Transportation & Warehousing Executive and Real Estate Investor

$100 to $500,000