Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Delray Beach

Owner of Several successful companies in the substances abuse/mental health care industry. Looking to invest and expand in other facilities in the South Florida area. University of Colorado undergrad in Business Management. Past Investments in various industries in the range of 20-50,000k. Silent partner, advisory partner. Individual investor.

$20,000 to $100,000

Florida > Bradenton

I am 58 yrs of age. I enjoy life in West Fl on the gulf. I was successful in starting from scratch a very profitable on-line electronic retail business & a very very profitable on-line business group which grew to be the worlds largest in its category. Sold both companies in 2011 totaling over 7mil. I consider myself a private Angel investor making my money work for me. I have invested experience in the real estate & auto industry looking to expand in any market as advisory or silent partner, must be profitable.

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Miramar

I am an economist with a master’s in Human Resources. I started my career as an Auditor for Deloitte and Regional Auditor manager for the Largest Financial company in Brazil. After this period, I decided to join the Largest Brazilian Corporation as a Human Resources Manager where I worked in Brazil, USA and Africa. I created a Start up in Brazil which was chosen one of the top 5 best Environmental startups in the Country. After this recognition in 2004 I moved to USA and started a Consultancy in procurement and Business Development where I helped many American corporations to develop and expand their Business in 4 different continents. Multilingual in English, Spanish, and Portuguese.

$100,000 to $500,000

Florida > Pinellas Park

I'm a married 34 year old male. My wife and I have 2 kids. I'm a general manager of a successful restaurant in the Tampa Bay area. My education come from hospitality, budgets.

$200 to $20,000

Florida > Orlando

Orlando native looking to invest in Florida startups.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Delray Beach

I am semi-retired and I have experience helping businesses grow. Looking to offer some help for the right business.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Sarasota

I am a mid-30s, hungry investor located on the west coast of Florida, with ties to the northeast (tri-state area). My preference is to be involved (advisory or hands-on) in some capacity with the right investment and the right people, in order to leverage my skill-set and experience to best serve the company. My expertise is in financial markets, health care, technology, and operational and financial management. I have held CFO and COO titles in varying capacities, and my education is from a well-renowned institution. I have experience investing in individual companies as well as financial markets. I represent myself as the investor, but can also bring others into the fold for the proper opportunity.

$0 to $1,000,001

Florida > Lakewood Ranch

Currently VP of Sales & Marketing for a Industrial Charger company. Looking for new investment opportunities.

$25,000 to $100,000