Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Oldsmar

Have acquired and developed manufacturing services company with y/y growth of 25% and profitable every year. Sold to partner and went back to corporate America for 10 years. For the last three years enjoyed being an Entrepreneur and adviser to small and medium business owners who are working hard to achieve their dreams of building a successful company and growing their personal wealth. I have connections to a half dozen angels that look for good growth opportunities in a variety of different industries. I believe this site should provide some good deal flow.

$5,000 to $500,000

Florida > Orlando

I am a nurse. I have a self-directed IRA. I have some done a handful of realty projects. Silent involvement. Individual investor.

$0 to $250,000

Florida > Hypoluxo

Married man living in Hypoluxo looking to invest, advise or be a working partner. I have owned companies and have experience in Florida Solar and Mobility products, and handicap vans.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Parkland

I I am a personal investor with a background in the hospitality business. I am looking to possibly invest in promising startups as a silent partner. I live in Boca Raton, Florida so am especially interested in ventures located nearby, although this is just a preference not a requirement.

$10,000 to $500,000

Florida > Palm City

Have invested in publishing & industrial trade shows in USA, South America, South Africa; financial businesses in USA, incl. start up banking; direct mail advertising Editor and Publisher of trade publications; executive director of several industrial trade associations; currently serving as director of multiple location local bank; served on numerous for-profit and non-profit companies and organizations; currently manage a small portfolio of private residential mortgages and a small thoroughbred horse racing and breeding operation Private investor

$2,500 to $100,000

Florida > Orlando

I am a serial enterpreneur. I am married with three kids and I love it. I have been in the financial services industry for over 15 years. I am a former marine so I hold high regard for our military services members, past and present. I am open to the level of involvement in all ventures. I love to learn and gain knowledge in everything I invest in.

$5,000 to $50,000

Florida > Oviedo

Currently own (2) successful businesses for over 12 years and I am looking for a new investment opportunity. Involvement to be hands on or an advisory. Have past experience in Real Estate investing and currently in the commercial warehousing business along with commercial office furniture installation industry.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Plantation

Active investor who has also founded 6 tech companies, ranging from a Top 5 ISP, to cable tv/broadband, mobile fleet tracking app and digital marketing companies. I am also a board member/advisor and active investor in a number of tech companies, including one that uses mobile phones to detect cancer. Strengths are: Specializing in forecasting trends, setting vision and strategy and organization turnarounds. I'm looking for intelligent and open-minded entrepreneurs that can utilize my experience and benefit from my network. Business must have revenues.

$10,000 to $250,000