Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tampa

Serial investor and entrepreneur for over 20 years. Experience in several industries to include SPACS and the public market. Currently CEO of two public companies with access to a variety of resources.

$25,000 to $500,000

Florida > Seffner

Have some money, and want to make more. Can be involved, or silent partner. 15 years experience social service field. BS. Psychology, Certified Addiction Professional. Almost 40 , married.

$0 to $200,000

Florida > Orlando

I am very excited to find interesting opportunities for investment. I am partnered with a good friend of mine who has been investing for more than three years, generating a passive income of about 25k a year. Our combined expertise includes, security, law, and medical. Seeking to invest primarily for equity in bushiness however we are open to all ideas. We have both agreed that we are looking to play the long game with investments for companies looking to expand. While we are not opposed to beings hands on we would prefer to fall into the silent investor category of the spectrum.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Port Orange

We exclusively seek different companies to inject capital into to help fund. I am part of a institutional investment group/accredited investors that actively seeks projects to inject capital into for an equity portion of their company. The range is from $500k to $5M+ There is no particular industry that is favored when it comes to funding. The investment group have no geography limits,as the group recently opened offices in Spain

$500,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Tallahassee

High-energy, strategic thinker with 25 years of experience in wholesale sales management, customer service and operations. I owned my own business for 15 years and spent 8 years as an executive for a Fortune 50 company. Recently sold my business to a larger competitor and looking for promising small/medium businesses to invest in and contribute hands-on sales/management/operations expertise. BA from Penn State and MBA from University of Michigan Ross Business School. Individual investor based in Northern Florida.

$5,000 to $200,000

Florida > Miami

Private and group investor

$2,000,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Saint Augustine

Been investing 10+ years. Background is entrepreneur and trading. private investor

$100,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Aventura

Fifty year old seasoned businessman, investor and attorney with experience across various sectors. Located in Miami and primarily interested in opportunities that have revenues and strong leadership.

$200,000 to $1,000,000