Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Jacksonville

I am a young driven individual investor with an entrepreneurial spirit. I am located in the Jacksonville, FL area but have lived in Soflo for 7 years, and open to all FL markets upon research. My highest education is a Bachelors, but I am a believer in common knowledge and street smarts that will truly get you far in life. I have an interest in Real Estate Investing, Hospitality, and Logistics. I would be happily willing to invest into either or all of those hot topics-- in that order. Real estate: buy & sell, flipping, and rental properties. Hospitality: Bar/Lounge, Hookah Lounge, Restaurants. I'd like to be hands-on with both RE & Hospitality; Logistics I am open to silent investing. I am an extrovert, and gregarious individual. Feel free to connect for any questions, serious inquiries only. If it works out, great. If not, I would be happy to share my networks.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Miami

Experienced entrepreneur and investor in multiple sectors. Successful working background in developing global brands, international expansion, franchising, product and brand licensing, celebrity agency, media + PR growth.

$75,000 to $25,000,000

Florida > Fort Myers

Residing in Ft. Myers & Mpls, successful founder of a venture funded internet search engine software co. (Sold I.P.), Sr. Mgr. early stage biotech & cosmeceutical co. (raised significant institutional $, licensing deal, spin off, and sold), investment banking & corporate finance, active investor in startups and special situations. Advisor, mentor, board member, not afraid to get hands dirty to help.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Miami

Principal Managing Partner in a family office based in Miami. Looking to deploy debt and or equity capital in a GP role. Direct investor. We are industry agnostic and we invest in deals that are cash flow generating.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

31 year old investor. Most of my investments are outside of the US. I am looking to expand my portfolio in the FL region

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > Hollywood

I represent a foreign based asset management/venture capital group who are actively seeking to expand their involvement in promising USA based companies. .

$250,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Private investor with extensive experience in investment, and business management. Currently own and directly oversee three successful businesses ranging from Commercial R/E, Software Development, and Automotive After-market Chemical Manufacturing & Distribution.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > Winter Park

In my fifties located in Florida experienced in management, acquisitions, startup projects, technology, and finance looking to invest up to $150k and seeking equity return as silent or active depending on business type. Can also help with business planning, startup vs. acquisition analysis, growth strategies, risk mitigation, bank financing, and commercial real estate if applicable.

$10,000 to $150,000