Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Oldsmar

Have acquired and developed manufacturing services company with y/y growth of 25% and profitable every year. Sold to partner and went back to corporate America for 10 years. For the last three years enjoyed being an Entrepreneur and adviser to small and medium business owners who are working hard to achieve their dreams of building a successful company and growing their personal wealth. I have connections to a half dozen angels that look for good growth opportunities in a variety of different industries. I believe this site should provide some good deal flow.

$5,000 to $500,000

Florida > Hollywood

64 y/o retired medical physician, married, and looking to be an investor.

$500,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Gibsonton

Looking for something fun to invest in. Would be willing to help but would prefer to be mostly hands off. Looking for other hard working people that enjoy being part of team..

$10,000 to $200,000

Florida > Orlando

I would like to invest in gold

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Sarasota

Part time CEO of large design and construction firm based in the northeast. Currently split time between FL and NH. Most investing has been in commercial real estate, but I would be interested in doing deals for other industries. I would prefer to be a majority investor, in a largely advisory role.

$100,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Naples

I am looking for investment opportunities here in swfl and surrounding areas in South Florida

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > Hollywood

Invest in an independent automotive dealership holding customer notes. Been an investor in the automotive industry for 25 years lending money to high risk customers. I am a private investor that sets up a lump sum into a portfolio and funds loans from that source. Need to see a detailed business plan, cost of overhead insurances and lease. Not looking to loan money out to open a business. I am a high risk note lender.

$30,000 to $150,000,000

Florida > Orlando

I am a nurse. I have a self-directed IRA. I have some done a handful of realty projects. Silent involvement. Individual investor.

$0 to $250,000