Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Naples

I am looking for investment opportunities here in swfl and surrounding areas in South Florida

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > Pembroke Pines

I’m an investor with technical background looking to join and invest in a mobile industry startup who has already built the minimum viable product and perhaps has some paying customers.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Ft. Lauderdale

I have grown up in South Florida but have spent a lot of time in all the Southern States. My wife & I along with our two boys are always on the move. We are a family that enjoys new experiences and new challenges. My main business is in the world of finance but much different than the typical Wall Street or VC type format. Our company has done extremely well but has also had to overcome numerous hurdles along the way as all entrepreneurs do. What we are looking to do now is work with entrepreneurs like ourselves that have extreme passion, commitment & a determination to be successful with a solid business model we can put our investment capital behind. We look forward to the opportunity to use our years of experience in numerous different industries to help those entrepreneurs achieve their ultimate goals.

$5,000 to $500,000

Florida > Palm City

Have invested in publishing & industrial trade shows in USA, South America, South Africa; financial businesses in USA, incl. start up banking; direct mail advertising Editor and Publisher of trade publications; executive director of several industrial trade associations; currently serving as director of multiple location local bank; served on numerous for-profit and non-profit companies and organizations; currently manage a small portfolio of private residential mortgages and a small thoroughbred horse racing and breeding operation Private investor

$2,500 to $100,000

Florida > Palm Beach Gardens

I am a Licensed GC and Realtor in Florida, executive VP of Operations and business owner. I am looking for scalable market disruptor products and real estate opportunities. I can be a silent partner or fill advisory role.

$10,000 to $75,000

Florida > Boca Raton

I am a national silent investor looking to provide passive investments to national operating companies. I can be very creative and the investment can be structured as a minority equity investment. I'm a very savvy individual investor and have been in the private investment / M&A industry for over a decade. I'm targeting investments of around $250K but can go up to $750K for the right situation. I have the ability put in more capital (and bring in other investors) if everything works out with the first investment.

$250,000 to $750,000

Florida > Boca Raton

I am a money motivated individual. I am a master at sales with over 15 years of experience. I own a handful of companies and am looking to expand my portfolio. I am open to being hands on or silent depending on the deal.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Miami

I'm 43 years old. I live in Miami. I'm looking to invest with representation in the company. I don't want to be a silent investor. I'm an Electronic Engineer with more than 12 years in telecommunication experience. Right now I have a Corporation with 2 objectives, Freight Forward and mobile security surveillance.

$10,000 to $30,000