Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Pace

CIO of a financial institution.

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > Pinellas Park

I'm a married 34 year old male. My wife and I have 2 kids. I'm a general manager of a successful restaurant in the Tampa Bay area. My education come from hospitality, budgets.

$200 to $20,000

Florida > Jupiter

Private investor with experience in telecoms, apps, eCommerce and all things web. Loves the buzz of startups or taking co's to the next level. Prefer hands on but willing to sit and comment / advise. Originally from the UK with strong business links both sides of the pond.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Jupiter

I'm a 47-year-old married investor based in Florida with a strong entrepreneurial mindset and a diverse business background. I’ve founded and scaled multiple ventures across insurance education, health & wellness, and niche consumer products. I hold a bachelor's degree and have over 20 years of professional experience in sales, marketing, and operations. I’ve invested in businesses in sectors like health, food & beverage, diagnostics, and tech-enabled services, typically in the $25K–$100K range. I bring more than capital—I offer strategic insight, marketing expertise, and a wide network across healthcare, finance, and consumer markets. I prefer an advisory or silent role depending on the founder’s needs. I invest as an individual and actively look for innovative, impact-driven businesses where I can contribute to sustainable growth. Working with the right type of person is most important to me.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Cape Coral

I own and manage several companies. My strength is understanding processes and being able to make them more efficient. I'm looking to invest in companies in various fields - mostly interested in investing in people.

$10,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Naples

CEO of a Venture Capital firm and invest in deals myself and have a list of Billionaire investors that trust my advice when I send them the deal- flow that I am working on.

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Seminole

I am 47 years old and currently reside in Largo, Florida. I serve as a Branch Manager at a staffing agency in Tampa, FL. Over the course of my career, I have gained extensive experience in roles such as recruiter, account executive, client specialist, office manager, and Head of the People Department (HR). I hold a degree in Interior Design, am a certified notary, and have a passion for continuous learning and personal growth. I am a beginner in the world of investing and am eager to connect with like-minded individuals to collaboratively pursue opportunities that yield a strong return on investment (ROI). As a self-driven individual, I thrive on teamwork and am excited to embark on this new venture as an individual investor. I look forward to working with others who share a common goal of success and growth in the investment space.

$10,000 to $50,000

Florida > Mulberry

Currently founder / President of fastest growing Truck Brokerage in U.S. looking to invest in your business. I’m 43 years old, live in Lakeland FL, married and a father of two. I’ve been in the transportation/ logistics field for the past 10 years and have launched 3 very successful start ups. My current LLC achieved $100 mil revenue in our second full year and have continued to grow since. While my biggest strength is certainty trucking and logistics, it takes a very well rounded leadership style to launch 3 consecutive startups from $0 to $25 mil annually or more. I can work as a silent advisor for the right company but I am truly looking for another challenge. To see if my skills and advice can help another entrepreneur reach new heights!

$5,000 to $1,000,000