Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Orange Park

My name is Carlos, 30 years old, married and 2 beautiful kids. Currently I am a Project Manager in a local company in Jacksonville, FL. I served in the military for 10 years as a Logistics Analyst and retired as an Executive Officer. I hold a Crimanal Justice Bachelors and currently pursuing my Master degree on Logistics and Supply Chain Management with Embry Riddle (Daytona, FL). I have invested over $200k in Real Estate for the past 2 years and have built 40% on equity on the properties. Extensive backgroung on logistics (transportation, warehouse and supply chain) with DOD and private companies. Anticipated involvement; a combination of all three depending on the industry (meaning if is part of my core values, and my knowledge I would preffer hands-on). Current status is individual investor with plans of opening an investment firm/group within the next 12 months.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Miami Beach

I have over 15 years of executive-level experience in managing and investing in real estate.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Private investor in the financial services field with an extensive investment history.

$1,000,000 to $20,000,000

Florida > Plantation

I'm a young, sharp, aspiring investor and finance broker working with investment firms, private lenders and institutional investors with my network growing daily. Me and partners like projects that are $500k to $ 1 Billion and I have a firm that funds up to $ 5 billion. The types of projects we invest in are real estate, venture projects that are $1million+, industrial projects, energy and mining projects, and large scale projects. Most investments will be silent, but for venture or buyouts we will be hands on.

$500,000 to $1,000,000,000

Florida > Riverview

My name is Denny, I'm 34 years old, am married and have a daughter. I live in in the Tampa Bay area and I worked for caterpillar as a machinist for almost 17 years. I left on good terms and started my own business doing the same thing I did for the company, mobile machining and started my own machine shop. I was able to use the experience I gained working for caterpillar to start my own business and build relationships with customers. Although my education is limited to high school it's absolutely possible to be a successful business owner. I'm a very motivated and go getter hustler type of person. I'm looking to invest in a company or person who is the same. Although I'm not part of an investor group or company, I am an individual looking to invest my hard earned money in a business or person who is hard working, motivated and a go getter, someone who wants to be successful in what they do.

$100 to $25,000

Florida > Orlando

33 yrs old in Orlando, FL. 10yrs Network Engineer experience. Individual Investor.

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > Palm Beach

52Yr, Married and 4 children, Live in Sweden w. a Palm Beach home. Owner of various businesses, turnover USD 100 M. BA in Business Adm. Advisor. Individual investor.

$150,000 to $300,000

Florida > Naples

I am looking for investment opportunities here in swfl and surrounding areas in South Florida

$1,000 to $25,000