Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Bonita Springs

Private Money. 25 yrs experience.

$350,000 to $15,000,000

Florida > Miami

Accounting background. Specialties include Auditing, Internal Controls, Corporate Governance, Risk Management, CCAR. I am looking for investment opportunities in Florida.

$100,000 to $500,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

I am 39 yrs old, married with four wonderful children. I am the chief pilot and Instructor of an airline charter company in Fort Lauderdale, FL. I have a strong professional background and extensive experience in all facets of the aviation industry and I am looking to apply funds and expertise to help grow businesses connected to the industry. I am open to investing in other sectors but my preference is for businesses that have a focus on services rather than manufacturing.

$50,000 to $230,000

Florida > Hollywood

64 y/o retired medical physician, married, and looking to be an investor.

$500,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > St. Petersburg

I work with Private Investors to fund major film projects and real estate investments. I work with people who have funds internationally and in the US. My investors look for a minimum of 20% return. We do Angel funds on some projects and investments in other ventures. I am always looking for new investors to help. My investors like to remain silent partners in most of the ventures. They are Millionaire and Billionaire types, high profile and very private.

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

Florida > Hialeah

I'm a Miami, Florida-based individual investor with a background in building contracting and a passion for supporting entrepreneurs. With an MBA and experience in construction, education, and real estate industries, I bring a unique perspective to investments. My academic background includes a Bachelor's degree in Engineering and an MBA, providing me with a solid foundation for understanding business dynamics. In my professional life, I've worked as a building contractor, honing my skills in project management, budgeting, and risk assessment. This experience has equipped me with the ability to evaluate business proposals from a practical standpoint, ensuring they have the potential for success. I've invested in several companies in the construction, education, and real estate sectors, and I've been involved in various capacities, from advisory roles to hands-on management. My goal is not just to provide capital but to also offer my expertise and network to help entrepreneurs succeed

$15,000 to $150,000

Florida > Valrico

I've invested in startups in the past. Some good. Some bad. Looking for a good way to make money with a motivated entrepreneur

$10,000 to $25,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

31 year old investor. Most of my investments are outside of the US. I am looking to expand my portfolio in the FL region

$1,000 to $20,000