Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Seminole

I'm a seasoned Media Sales Executive (25 years) looking for investment opportunities. I am open to both silent and partnership opportunities.

$100 to $100,000

Florida > San Antonio

I am an investor looking for highly driven entrepreneurs who want to succeed, have a solid business plan and a vision to drive a company or product to success. My background consists of being a small business owner and over 30 years in management for the retail and car industry.

$10,000 to $100,000

Florida > Miami

Over 6 years of international experience in finance and audit in the bank industry. Looking for great investment opportunities (cash available: $2m) Recently worked as a Vice President of Finance of a publicly traded company in the Healthcare industry based in Florida. I was responsible for all filings with the SEC, along with the coordination, analysis, and preparation of financial plans and operating forecasts. Prior to that, I was Vice President of a Merchant Bank in NYC, where I managed a team of analysts for investment opportunities, sourcing deal flows on potential targets, and was responsible for post-acquisition management and financial reporting. I was involved in three reverse merger transactions. I worked for 4 years at Ernst & Young in both Paris and London, where I became a senior auditor in the Banking Capital Market Department. Prior to that, at Natixis Bleichroeder in Paris, I had an active participation as a market-maker on the Euro Stoxx desk.

$50,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Brandon

I’m 44 yrs old. Never been married but have a fiancé with a total of 6 kids. I dropped out in the 9th grade but got my ged at the age of 30. I’m not ashamed to say this as I do well for my self compared to a lot of college graduates. I’m a strong believer that if you work hard for what you want you will achieve your goals but you have to stay focused and believe in yourself. I like having conversation with successful people to learn and create ideas from them. This is what helped me in life. I purchased my first home at the age of 18. I was determined to do this as I knew this could put me ahead considering I had no school background. It all paid off from there, I purchased other properties that I currently rent out and others flipped. I also now hold my real estate licence which helps me find deals for my self & save on commission. On top of my real estate investments I do hold a w2 job which pays pretty well. I work remotely for a transportation company out in the west coast.

$20,000 to $80,000

Florida > Saint Petersburg

Former analyst in the alternatives group at a multi billion dollar firm. Current analyst for a firm whose clients are Credit Value Hedge Funds. Bachelors Degree in Economics/Finance from Florida State, CFA candidate, looking to make at this time a nominal equity investment in a great startup or existing venture that has rapidly growing sales and matching demand for it's product or service.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Winter Park

I live in Orlando, FL. I have a Masters in Mechanical Engineering background and I have a great experience in engineering and technology in aerospace. I am also a hands-on guy when it comes to fixing houses.

$1,000 to $20,000

Florida > North Port

I am over 50 years old, and along with the restaurant experiences I have from 30 years in the business, I have also gained valuable administrative capabilities. I have set up, owned and operated several businesses. As the owner of a Mortgage company, I was constantly required to fulfill the rigorous compliance reports and strict recording duties required to maintain the FHA approval rating for government sponsored loans, Including audited financial statements. Also, while an owner I had gained additional experience of managing employees and several businesses at one time. I had a portfolio of 10 rental properties and had two corporations flowing all at the same time. After the recession I bought and sold properties. I hired out full crews of subcontractors from a myriad of trades to get the job done as efficiently as possible and maximize profits. Leading into partnering with a builder where I built houses for sale.

$10,000 to $50,000

Florida > Miramar

I am an economist with a master’s in Human Resources. I started my career as an Auditor for Deloitte and Regional Auditor manager for the Largest Financial company in Brazil. After this period, I decided to join the Largest Brazilian Corporation as a Human Resources Manager where I worked in Brazil, USA and Africa. I created a Start up in Brazil which was chosen one of the top 5 best Environmental startups in the Country. After this recognition in 2004 I moved to USA and started a Consultancy in procurement and Business Development where I helped many American corporations to develop and expand their Business in 4 different continents. Multilingual in English, Spanish, and Portuguese.

$100,000 to $500,000