Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Port Orange

We exclusively seek different companies to inject capital into to help fund. I am part of a institutional investment group/accredited investors that actively seeks projects to inject capital into for an equity portion of their company. The range is from $500k to $5M+ There is no particular industry that is favored when it comes to funding. The investment group have no geography limits,as the group recently opened offices in Spain

$500,000 to $5,000,000

Florida > Parkland

I live in Parkland with my wife and 3 daughters. I am partial toward women lead / owned businesses looking for investment capital, advise or leadership. I currently lead a 100M business and have built finance marketing operations teams to run the business. I believe that people are the most important asset to your business. I am looking to make an impact and help drive your business to the next level.

$1,000 to $150,000

Florida > Tampa

I'm 40yrs old married with a family of 5 and 3 boys located in Tampa FL. I've been involved in 7 startups, 5 of which I have personally invested in or was a co-founder with equity. There was no internet marketing degree in the late 90's so I learned in the school of hard knocks. Grew a drop ship company in late 90's to 32 million in revenue 4yrs later. 8yrs as director of optimization. Currently digital marketing consultant. Consulted with almost every vertical. Ownership in companies selling electronics, shoes, makeup, jewelry, pet supplies, training. Other value-adds: Expert at digital marketing and B2B lead generation (inbound and outbound). I fix business strategy, sales and marketing funnels. Anticipated involvement depends on opportunity. I like to make an impact. Individual Investor.

$1,000 to $25,000

Florida > Gainesville

Serial entrepreneurs in Gainesville FL looking to help others. Equity stake preferred. Seeking opportunities in Jamaica as well.

$1,000 to $100,000

Florida > Lutz

Personal information: 36 year old physician, married, living in Florida Professional experience: Background in medicine, systems engineering, non- profit sector, and private equity Seeking investments focused on renewable energy, sustainable buildings, and other envoronmental themes.

$50,000 to $2,000,000

Florida > Bradenton

My husband and I are looking to invest in a company that we are passionate about. We are 35, been married for 11 years and live in Bradenton, FL. I have worked in the hospitality industry and food and beverage for the past 12 years. My husband has worked in the technology industry for 10 years. I have a Bachelor's degree in Accounting from the University of MN - Duluth. We are just getting started with investing our income.

$50,000 to $125,000

Florida > Odessa

I'm an investor looking for opportunities either as a silent or active investor including, but not limited to Multi Family Real Estate, Financial Markets, Automated Services (Amazon, Walmart, etc). I have diverse experience in finance, distribution, and insurance industries. Any scalable opportunity that can be reviewed and verified that has good potential please send my way.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

Looking for a new project for investment. I am looking to be hands on in bringing a company to fruition in a sales and marketing role.

$10,000 to $75,000