Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Kissimmee

Commercial driver looking to invest in some good ideas or business.

$0 to $30,000

Florida > Pembroke Pines

Retired entrepreneur with mutual fund experience seeking investment in financial company.

$100,000 to $100,000

Florida > Palm Beach Gardens

We are an organization that facilitates interaction between individual investors and Florida entrepreneurs through Member networking and our monthly meetings and presentations. Our investors are private individuals or groups of private individuals who invest in emerging and expanding companies. The level of investment is typically in the range $50,000-$2,000,000. Local entrepreneurs are in constant demand of financial and executive resources to help start and/or grow their businesses. Our organization was established in the fall of 2005 to facilitate the interaction between local Entrepreneurs (opportunities) and Angel Investors (resources) and to help promote business growth in Florida.

$50,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Miami

I am a 35 year old Dutch national, living with my fiance in Miami. 15+ years of international trade & business development experience from several top tier logistics companies within the freight forwarding industry. Inititated and experienced with several start up companies in trade, logistics and importer in The Netherlands. Hands-on, well connected worldwide within the logistics industry.

$5,000 to $20,000

Florida > Davenport

As both a private investor and a consultant to private and institutional investors, we have access to capital for ventures that fit investable criteria.

$25,000 to $500,000,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Entrepreneur for 25 years, owned various businesses through development, acquisition and sale

$1 to $4,000,000

Florida > Jacksonville

I represent a small group of private investors looking to help fund proven and growing business models in Florida. We are want to invest in smaller businesses with good active management, a sound business model, and decent growth prospects for a reasonable ROI. We are more interested in debt financing but are not opposed to equity with the right company. What we are not looking for is to fund your start-up idea or help you get your business "off the ground".

$1,000 to $150,000

Florida > Tampa

I represent a financial group focused on securing private investment funding for organizations within the oil and gas industry.Our principal backers maintain a billion dollar transaction portfolio with extensive experience in providing capital funding for development projects throughout the energy sector. Brief Summary of Our Capabilities: Robust and motivated capital backing network, Uncapped investment potential allowing us to match and surpass any state funded grants, Accessible funds primed for quick turnaround and Years of extensive Business Development experience.

$1,000,000 to $500,000,000