Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Tallahassee

Young Investor. I have a stable job with 6 digit pay. I work in Cloud Computing Technologies out of Tallahassee, FL. Have couple of Real Estate investments with recurring income.

$0 to $20,000

Florida > Jupiter

I'm a 47-year-old married investor based in Florida with a strong entrepreneurial mindset and a diverse business background. I’ve founded and scaled multiple ventures across insurance education, health & wellness, and niche consumer products. I hold a bachelor's degree and have over 20 years of professional experience in sales, marketing, and operations. I’ve invested in businesses in sectors like health, food & beverage, diagnostics, and tech-enabled services, typically in the $25K–$100K range. I bring more than capital—I offer strategic insight, marketing expertise, and a wide network across healthcare, finance, and consumer markets. I prefer an advisory or silent role depending on the founder’s needs. I invest as an individual and actively look for innovative, impact-driven businesses where I can contribute to sustainable growth. Working with the right type of person is most important to me.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Windermere

Private investor living in the beautiful city of Orlando, Florida. I'm a Sales consultant looking to invest in new and original projects. BoS in International Hospitality Management, I traveled all over Europe and North America. Fluent in 3 languages (English, French and Portuguese) and semi-proficient in 2 others (Spanish and Italian).

$1 to $1

Florida > Pembroke Pines

Business and Real Estate Investor open to solid business growth ideas with well-strategied plans including pro-forma financials and ROI.

$20,000 to $250,000

Florida > Valrico

I've invested in startups in the past. Some good. Some bad. Looking for a good way to make money with a motivated entrepreneur

$10,000 to $25,000

Florida > Palm Beach

52Yr, Married and 4 children, Live in Sweden w. a Palm Beach home. Owner of various businesses, turnover USD 100 M. BA in Business Adm. Advisor. Individual investor.

$150,000 to $300,000

Florida > Orange Park

My name is Carlos, 30 years old, married and 2 beautiful kids. Currently I am a Project Manager in a local company in Jacksonville, FL. I served in the military for 10 years as a Logistics Analyst and retired as an Executive Officer. I hold a Crimanal Justice Bachelors and currently pursuing my Master degree on Logistics and Supply Chain Management with Embry Riddle (Daytona, FL). I have invested over $200k in Real Estate for the past 2 years and have built 40% on equity on the properties. Extensive backgroung on logistics (transportation, warehouse and supply chain) with DOD and private companies. Anticipated involvement; a combination of all three depending on the industry (meaning if is part of my core values, and my knowledge I would preffer hands-on). Current status is individual investor with plans of opening an investment firm/group within the next 12 months.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Pinellas Park

I’m a private equity broker and we provide alternative financing to successful and startup businesses. I have worked in this space for over 10 years and our firm wants you to succeed. We typically work with developers and business owners seeking project financing between $2,000,000 up to $500,000,000. We welcome all recast estate deals and look forward to hearing from you.

$2,000,000 to $200,000,000