Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Kissimmee

Serial Entrepreneur strong background in digital marketing from online advertising to desktops and mobile. Grown multiple companies from zero revenue to multi-million dollar businesses within a matter of months. Really looking to join a company I see fit that I can bring my knowledge and experience to the table.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Atlantic Beach

Deep knowledge and experience within corporate tech roles, fintech, business consultancy, looking to invest capital OR time into suitable business.

$0 to $50,000

Florida > Miami

Experienced entrepreneur and investor in multiple sectors. Successful working background in developing global brands, international expansion, franchising, product and brand licensing, celebrity agency, media + PR growth.

$75,000 to $25,000,000

Florida > Abu Dhabi

I'm a 31 year old female. I live in the UAE and am ready to invest in a startup or a running business up to 250000USD provided that I get 51% equity. That will qualify me to obtain a visa. I don’t need to have a management role in the business.

$50,000 to $200,000

Florida > Jacksonville

We are a private family office that invests in public and private equities, venture capital opportunities and real estate. We are interested in acquiring majority interests or outright purchases of privately held enterprises in the small to middle market. We seek business’s with strong management in place and have shown proven track records of success. We work closely with management teams to foster strong and independent companies. We look to invest and engage in a broad range of investment activities and our objective is to take an active role in the operational and strategic futures of our investments. We are interested in companies or real estate that are located in the southeast region of the U.S.

$0 to $1,000,000

Florida > Boynton Beach

Married with two young children in south Florida. Outside the box visionary with broad understanding to the needs of people, process and implementation for profit. Regular trips and doing business in Chicago, New York, Houston , North carolinaacross Florida. Ongoing investments in range of small business. Anticipated involvement multiple possibilities based on need and opportunity - limited hands-on, advisory, silent, etc. I am an individual investor that utilizes my executive team to analyze businesses, Land or Property to find opportunity of profit. This can be the development of land or property, Set up of a startup business, re structuring a current business to achieve its potential this may be done either through acquisition or on a consultation basis. Equity or debt.

$20,000 to $500,000

Florida > Ft. Lauderdale

I have grown up in South Florida but have spent a lot of time in all the Southern States. My wife & I along with our two boys are always on the move. We are a family that enjoys new experiences and new challenges. My main business is in the world of finance but much different than the typical Wall Street or VC type format. Our company has done extremely well but has also had to overcome numerous hurdles along the way as all entrepreneurs do. What we are looking to do now is work with entrepreneurs like ourselves that have extreme passion, commitment & a determination to be successful with a solid business model we can put our investment capital behind. We look forward to the opportunity to use our years of experience in numerous different industries to help those entrepreneurs achieve their ultimate goals.

$5,000 to $500,000

Florida > Miami

I am a 54-year-old US Army veteran with experience in operations management, project management, and program management. I have always focused strongly on data-supported, scientific-method business analysis for strategic decision-making.

$0 to $25,000