Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Alva

Young and successful e-commerce entrepreneur seeking to invest in high growth companies across a wide range of industries. I hold a bachelor's degree from UCF in Finance and Accounting and have over 14 years worth of experience in online commerce. Willing to invest up to $1 million.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Tampa

I am an investor who is willing to invest time and money in entrepreneurs who are motivated to be successful and watch their business grow. I have invested in one start-up company and it has taught me valuable knowledge regarding business startups. People who know me best say that I am very persuasive and analytical. I hope by utilizing all these skills I can fulfill my ultimate passion which would be to see new businesses flourish.

$1,000 to $5,000

Florida > Clearwater

Senior, married. Investment manager, formerly Securities Principal. Funded energy, real estate and major construction projects. Advisory role and transaction planning with capacity of bringing in groups to projects.

$50,000 to $900,000

Florida > Jupiter

Private investor with experience in telecoms, apps, eCommerce and all things web. Loves the buzz of startups or taking co's to the next level. Prefer hands on but willing to sit and comment / advise. Originally from the UK with strong business links both sides of the pond.

$50,000 to $500,000

Florida > Aventura

Looking for companies that wish to raise capital for any situation, even start-ups.

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000

Florida > Tampa

I am a 30 year old married guy. I live in Tampa, Fl. I am currently in pharmaceutical sales, but also am a co-owner of a PCR Genetic testing lab. I am a former college baseball player from Lubbock Christian University with a degree in sports management. I am very knowledgeable when it comes to sports and sports related investments. Depending on the industry, I feel like I am the right investor because I want to get the job done. And that job is how can we maximize our business to make the most money possible. I am interested in being a silent investor, but for the right opportunity, meaning I have expertise in it, then a hands on/advisory role is something I would be interested in as well. I would be an individual investor, but I have contacts all over the country that would invest in the right opportunity as well.

$5,000 to $25,000

Florida > Royal Palm Beach

Licensed Home Improvement Supplier/General Contractor looking for lucrative real estate opportunities. We will buy land, residential or commercial space, rehab and sell off. Interested parties should have contacts or active deals in place. Additional funds available.

$50,000 to $100,000

Florida > West Palm Beach

Our company brings a wide range of diverse business experience and seasoned management knowledge to bear on advising a client company. With decades of both domestic and international assignments behind them, especially in the finance and natural resources sector, the Partners can provide a wide spectrum of solutions regarding equity and debt financing.

$250,000 to $5,000,000