Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Plantation

I'm a young, sharp, aspiring investor and finance broker working with investment firms, private lenders and institutional investors with my network growing daily. Me and partners like projects that are $500k to $ 1 Billion and I have a firm that funds up to $ 5 billion. The types of projects we invest in are real estate, venture projects that are $1million+, industrial projects, energy and mining projects, and large scale projects. Most investments will be silent, but for venture or buyouts we will be hands on.

$500,000 to $1,000,000,000

Florida > Jupiter

Finance consultant, former CFO, and board member that has worked with later stage (pre-IPO) companies to improve systems and processes. Invest in varying stages of healthcare, ed tech and software companies.

$25,000 to $200,000

Florida > Miami

Graduated with a degree in Electronic Engineering in 2008. Currently as Area Service Manager at Siemens. Private investor.

$100 to $10,000

Florida > Alva

Young and successful e-commerce entrepreneur seeking to invest in high growth companies across a wide range of industries. I hold a bachelor's degree from UCF in Finance and Accounting and have over 14 years worth of experience in online commerce. Willing to invest up to $1 million.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Florida > Clearwater

I am 39 years old. I am married and I have two children (2 and 6). I have been banker for 13 years. We came from Hungary where I have led branches for 7 years. We live in Clearwater, Florida. I have been an investor for 4 years. I have investments in Florida, Seattle and New York. I am interested in short-term investments mainly (3-6 months). I am a silent individual investor. I would like to invest in a productive and organized company.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Sebring

I am a corporate development specialist with over 20 years of experience. I have a strong marketing background and I ready to invest up to $20,000 on someone else's dream.

$500 to $20,000

Florida > Port Charlotte

40 year old male; married; Southwest Florida. Currently an Executive Director in the Freight Transportation industry with an MBA from Purdue University. New to investing in start-ups &/or growth companies. I am flexible regarding my degree of involvement. Individual Investor.

$5,000 to $75,000

Florida > Davenport

As both a private investor and a consultant to private and institutional investors, we have access to capital for ventures that fit investable criteria.

$25,000 to $500,000,000