Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Davie

I am 41 years old professional and I work in Senior Leadership Capacity at a MNC firm in South Florida. I have two decades of professional experience in multiple countries, including, relationship Management, Tender Process, Pricing Strategy etc. I look forward to the partnership.

$40,000 to $80,000

Florida > Clearwater

Investor with ownership in 3 businesses. Seeking stable companies with positive cash flow to assist with capital.

$5,000 to $350,000

Florida > Miami

Successful Real Estate Developer and investor interested in start-ups where my international experience and entrepreneurial spirit can play a role on making a company expand internationally. 18 + years in Real Estate experience. Executive level at multinationals (JLL and CBRE- Heading Departments at National Level in Valuations & Advisory) and entrepreneur, serving as Board Member (non-exec) of a Pan-European REIT. Knowledge of commercial, residential, Hotels, Nursury Homes, Industrial & Logistics. Hands on, lots of people skills. In Florida. Spanish and English bilingual plus. MBA, Member of the Royal Institution of Chartered Surveyors with Harvard Real Estate Program. Started a Real Estate Development company and have successfully built and sold 6 residential buildings in the last 3 years. Would be interested to study investments in interesting real estate projects or start ups.

$150,000 to $500,000

Florida > Winter Park

In my fifties located in Florida experienced in management, acquisitions, startup projects, technology, and finance looking to invest up to $150k and seeking equity return as silent or active depending on business type. Can also help with business planning, startup vs. acquisition analysis, growth strategies, risk mitigation, bank financing, and commercial real estate if applicable.

$10,000 to $150,000

Florida > Ocala

CORPORATE FINANCE Through Project Finance disciplines, we offer clients highly experienced teams in Corporate Finance and Infrastructure financing. A wide range of interest rate and hedging strategies are available Our competitive edge lies in excellent knowledge of all major industrial sectors and the technical and investment banking skills required to bring complex transactions to a timely close. Arrangement, structuring, placement and syndication of loan facilities across a broad spectrum of clients and sectors, including: General Corporate Finance Merger and Acquisition Finance Leveraged Finance Real Estate development projects Expansion Funding Management buyouts or buyins Asset based manufacturing situations Oil, gas, and mineral recovery situations Petrochemicals, power High Tech startup situations Leasing Finance Bridge Finance Guarantee Finance Project Finance Structured Finance Transport Finance Aircraft Financing.

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

Florida > North Port

I am over 50 years old, and along with the restaurant experiences I have from 30 years in the business, I have also gained valuable administrative capabilities. I have set up, owned and operated several businesses. As the owner of a Mortgage company, I was constantly required to fulfill the rigorous compliance reports and strict recording duties required to maintain the FHA approval rating for government sponsored loans, Including audited financial statements. Also, while an owner I had gained additional experience of managing employees and several businesses at one time. I had a portfolio of 10 rental properties and had two corporations flowing all at the same time. After the recession I bought and sold properties. I hired out full crews of subcontractors from a myriad of trades to get the job done as efficiently as possible and maximize profits. Leading into partnering with a builder where I built houses for sale.

$10,000 to $50,000

Florida > Aventura

Commercial Attorney for 15 years Launched and sold successful start up Executive with Fortune 500 companies

$100,000 to $1,500,000

Florida > Plantation

Active investor who has also founded 6 tech companies, ranging from a Top 5 ISP, to cable tv/broadband, mobile fleet tracking app and digital marketing companies. I am also a board member/advisor and active investor in a number of tech companies, including one that uses mobile phones to detect cancer. Strengths are: Specializing in forecasting trends, setting vision and strategy and organization turnarounds. I'm looking for intelligent and open-minded entrepreneurs that can utilize my experience and benefit from my network. Business must have revenues.

$10,000 to $250,000