Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Winter Garden

I am an individual investor married for 16 years with 2 kids in the Orlando Metro area. I have been investing in real estate rental properties for 16 years and a managing partner in a technology company. My rental properties produce positive cash flow. My specialty is "Sales and Process Improvements" within an organization to grow a company for long term gains I am very detailed oriented and will dig into the details to ensure the right plan is in place for success.

$10,000 to $150,000

Florida > Hallandalle Beach

We are family business radica ten in Miami. Our investments preferences are in Real. Our professional jobs are builder construction and legal business international law.

$1,000,000 to $3,000,000

Florida > Gainesville

Good investor. Involved in trading goods and shipping.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Lutz

As a couple we invest in small businesses having product offerings that scale and are innovative. We are passionate about technology, health care at all ages, and a healthy lifestyle through good food, travel and activities. We both have master level education and enjoy actively participating in our investments through operation, board-level decisions and advising through our corporate experience.

$5,000 to $100,000

Florida > Jacksonville

We are a private family office that invests in public and private equities, venture capital opportunities and real estate. We are interested in acquiring majority interests or outright purchases of privately held enterprises in the small to middle market. We seek business’s with strong management in place and have shown proven track records of success. We work closely with management teams to foster strong and independent companies. We look to invest and engage in a broad range of investment activities and our objective is to take an active role in the operational and strategic futures of our investments. We are interested in companies or real estate that are located in the southeast region of the U.S.

$0 to $1,000,000

Florida > Riverview

My name is Denny, I'm 34 years old, am married and have a daughter. I live in in the Tampa Bay area and I worked for caterpillar as a machinist for almost 17 years. I left on good terms and started my own business doing the same thing I did for the company, mobile machining and started my own machine shop. I was able to use the experience I gained working for caterpillar to start my own business and build relationships with customers. Although my education is limited to high school it's absolutely possible to be a successful business owner. I'm a very motivated and go getter hustler type of person. I'm looking to invest in a company or person who is the same. Although I'm not part of an investor group or company, I am an individual looking to invest my hard earned money in a business or person who is hard working, motivated and a go getter, someone who wants to be successful in what they do.

$100 to $25,000

Florida > Daytona Beach

I am 25 years old. I used to work for 3 years as project engineer in the biggest oil company in the world Saudi Aramco. Currently I am working with Saudi Airline as a professional in which the company has sent me to US in order to get my pilot license. I have one investment in the entertainment field located in Washington D.C. I like to be part of new investments and new ideas. I am young but I am a fast learner. Moreover, I believe that the ship with two captains sinks. I will be part of the project I will help and I will support as needed. Otherwise, I will be more than happy just to watch and read the reports.

$50,000 to $150,000

Florida > Fort Lauderdale

We have a private fund and access to a vast network of investors always looking for new partnership opportunities.

$100,000 to $30,000,000