Florida Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Florida Investors

Florida > Port Saint Lucie

We are in the process of selling our previous business and are looking for new opportunities

$50,000 to $300,000

Florida > Wesley Chapel

Manufacturing professional looking for an investment where I can contribute both funding and expertise

$50,000 to $300,000

Florida > Boca Raton

Individual entrepreneur and investor for over 15 years originally from NYC, currently residing in Boca Raton. Have a broad range of business ownership and management experience in many fields. Now actively developing residential real estate projects.

$10,000 to $500,000

Florida > Longwood

Individual investor: finance/accounting professional in Central FL area looking to diversify investments as well as have the opportunity to participate in startups and small business; helping others while realizing a good return on capital. Post-graduate in Business/Accounting, 20 yrs experience as professional accountant from Big 4 through nuclear pharmacy and Fortune 15 telecom. Financial reporting experience can be provided as needed, as well as roll- up-my-sleeves financial consulting if warranted; level of involvement depends entirely upon the investment and the parties' preferences, ranging from hands-on to silent.

$1,000 to $50,000

Florida > Casselberry

MBA, BA in Finance. Have invested in 3 privately held firms, 1 real estate related, 2 were financial services.

$10,000 to $250,000

Florida > Winston

I'm an owner of a private investment company that has a diverse portfolio of holdings ranging from notes/loans/deeds/liens to start up ventures. Some investments under the SEC CF-reg A or title II/III act. I'm strictly an arms length investor, except FL. tax liens auctions. I believe in investing back into local community, its what made this country gr8.

$1 to $25,000

Florida > Riverview

Married, Tampa, FL. Currently 14 years in Aviation. B.S. Aviation Business Administration. Current investment experience $75,000. Business Consultant and Broker (debt financing). Zero involvement in business decisions.

$10,000 to $500,000,000

Florida > Tampa

- Multiple deals currently involved in as a passive investor - Founding Member of New World Angels, Tampa Bay - 6 years in a Fortune 1000 company in a Sr. position - MBA in Marketing & Finance

$5,000 to $200,000